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    Mirai no Kakera ~ Fragments of the Future

    Mirai no Kakera



    Fandom: Naruto
    Title: Mirai no Kakera ~ Fragments of the Future
    Rate ou Classificação: PG-13
    Type: Action, Romance, Multi-chapter, Canon.
    Spoiler Warning: This fanfiction happens in the 3 years gape between the first part of the series and the second (between Naruto and Naruto Shippuden in the anime) and may, therefore, have spoilers.

    Disclaimer: Naruto is a property of Masashi Kishimoto and Sueisha and I do not own rights over it.




    Chapter 0 ~ Prologue


    Quote Quote:
    Somewhere lost in the middle of a forest, in an open area between some trees and under an extreme hot Summer Sun, a young and short girl digs a little hole.
    "What a blazing Sun... I'm gonna melt!"
    She picks something from her pocket. It's a small item, small enough to fit her palm. She squeezes the small item while closing her eyes in a deep thought, not for a moment, but two. Smilling, she puts the small item in the hole and starts covering it. When she finishes, she cleans the sweat from her forehead and, once again, smiles.
    "Time to go..."
    She gets up and, when she was going to re-enter the forest, she stops. A sound of something quickly moving in her direction can be heard. She freezes, her feet like roots stuck on the ground when she sees a ninja with a covered face jump out of the forest and reach for her, without even stopping.A few seconds pass, but they feel like hours. That ninja's hand, of whom the face she did not even see and still it terrifies her, covers her mouth. A kunai, holded in the other hand, pointed at the forest.
    - One step and this beautiful girl gets it! Go back to your village!
    A few more seconds pass and the silhouette of a boy, with long dark hair in a ponnytail, starts apearing at the edge of the forest, merged between the trees. The girl sweats more than ever.
    The ninja's hand, nervously trembling, slips a bit down the girls face allowing her to fly a word past his fingers.
    - Shikamaru!


    Hi everyone, this is my first post in this forum and also my first fanfic.
    I'm hopping to get some opinions and to trade ideas and comments ^w^
    Hope you guys help me. I wrote around 15 chapters already and i know the way i want to go with the story so you can relax, i'm not gonna quit midway =3
    Hope you enjoy it.
    Huggie*

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    Re: Mirai no Kakera ~ Fragments of the Future

    Quote Quote:
    A few seconds pass, but they feel like hours. That ninja's hand, of whom the face she did not even see and still it terrifies her,
    depending on who the girl is, since I see shika mentioned here my first thought is Ino, I mean, In my opinion I don't think Ino will be that scared, but if its someone else then its understandable.
    Anyway,
    I can't really say much with such a short passage

    Hello and welcome to MH!
    With that, you said that you have written 15 chapters, is it somewhere on the net or something? I'll love to read it.

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    Sometimes I feel like nobody gets me, you know?

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