Finally finished! Would've been sooner but I kept getting sidetracked
Really nice story riki, I was so naive that I had never suspect Jannea(?) to be an accomplice of the Merzakian soldiers. The reveal sort of just hits you and then you quickly carry on with the story.
Hope you have time to give us more, you've got a talent
don't spoil bob, i didn't finish to read
Uhh... avoid my thread then, scav. ^^;
are u telling me: get the fck outta my thread in a polite way?
BTW, I'm glad that the ploy in my story worked because I was somewhat worried that it was too obvious. ^^
Janae wasn't really of my concern.. I actually got trolled when Kyah had those visions which were actually memories....
IMy next story idea/novel was supposed to be stand-alone, but I realize that I can have it be in the same universe as Maiden. ^^ BTW, the novel is tentatively titled, The Ilmarians.
Looking forward to it
You know what's the sad thing is?
I only wrote one paragraph for my seminar paper and I already have half a page for my novel.
Anyway, here is a snippet from the last chapter (I'm going back and forth between chapters LOL):
Thanks for the snippet, looking good!
When is the paper for the seminar due?
Umm... IIRC, a week after the last seminar so aka next week.
well...told you I got trolled...at first I thought she had visions(somekind of oracle premonitions) but then I realized..they were actual happenings ...and the paragraph above confused me the most...being Merzak's servant and all