Whoa there alphabeta. I hadn't proofread that stuff yet. Below are the proofread versions.
I realize this is a bit long but due to the nature of the chapter I just can't shorten it without omitting something major. I mean, I could say "Badass looking mages talk. Old mages talk. Fairy Tail mages talk. Badass Old Fairy Tail mages talk. Badass mages talk some more. The End." but that just doesn't seem like it really tells anybody anything about what actually happened.
My internet died on me, and I'm writing this from uni...which means, that my activity will be NIL until my net is fixed at home. Therefore my part will be delayed, unless someone wants to take my part.
now, of all times
anyway, if someone will take the art corner, I'll take the rest including banner and intro.
so, who's confident enough for the art corner?
What part was benelori doing?
If it's writing I'd volunteer to fill in but if it's artwork I won't be much help as I thoroughly suck at all things art and art related.
Last edited by Jammin; November 08, 2011 at 01:38 PM.
bene was writing the art corner.
it's writing, alright. About the art of the chapter.
Sure, I can take a stab at that.
I'll type an art review up right now to use if benetori's internet continues to fail him. It will give me a good excuse to do something other than staring at this.
Last edited by Jammin; November 08, 2011 at 01:55 PM.
Ok, here you go. Done and proofread. Let me know if you want me to tweak it any.
And please replace the short summary and character spotlight with the proofread versions I posted. The sight of those grammatical errors are killing me inside.
I will change them, once I get to my computer
smartphone plus MH is a bad combination
I love those captions. Nice work!