BAM UPDATE AFTER 3 MONTHS
You're getting better, KD. I think this one is fantastic. It feels like I'm really starting to understand your thoughts more these days.
I don't know if that is a good or bad thing! O.o
And Thank you
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i didnt think that people would make a thread like this is it ok to share some of my songs to you
I wrote this to escape - when I felt trapped and became depressed.
When, it doesn't work out the way you want - original, writing by me.
Can't call it a song... I think.... but whatever. The () are supposed to be pauses or short pauses in the verse and its supposed to be read straight through. The style for this that i envisioned is more like Frank Ocean's song - thinking about you forever.
Last edited by Charlie; August 15, 2012 at 02:33 AM.
It's in an early stage, need to switch some of it up a bit, remove some and add a bridge but that's how it looks after the first writing. ^^,
It's supposed to be played in D#m
(verse - D#b, Bb, C#, G#)
Or something like that. :3