I will post my part within an hour. I had school/egzams so I wasnt online.
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So lets start hating chapter
First I have to write it was really really hard to hate something in this chapter but I managed do hate it enough to write thing or two.
Chapter was pretty short on developments. We just saw Ichigo doing few jumps and slashes, Kirges transformation and some Vanderreich attacking SS and not even them in person- we saw- a shoe... Simply wow
Ichigo in his shikai is fighting Opie and well he blocks heiling pfeils with his hands.. damn.. Zaraki blocked 5th espadas cero with one hand even before time skip while not knowing his swords real name and stuff- that was badass- what we saw in this chapter was just to show us how much of a power up Kirge will get from his final asspull form
Of course Ichigo as retarded as he can be(he is bit smarter than he was but still dangerously close Forrest Gump level...) is keeping as standard some actions like giving EVERYONE that he fights chance to relase their hidden powers. Why cut down someone who he has chance at defeating if you can let that someone use extra power boost and give oportunity to beat you to a pulp then having asspull power up from frendship bonds or some other fairy ways?
Last thing- well, ok I know that Kubo had to do something to point that Vanderreich is already in SS but ending chapter with someones shoe() gotten old like years ago and we still get some fancy shoe for half of last page. I knew it some kind of foreshadowing that Quinces will "stomp" but "last page shoe" for 12384 time instead of showing some badass new character makes me wanna puke
Thats all about what I hated in this chapter
Last edited by vagabond87; May 06, 2012 at 01:58 AM.
Vaga, why such a small amount of smileys?
Also, we still need intro/outro and poll.
"Ha that was a good one" alphabeta
Wonder who will do them
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger
Stand a little taller
Doesn't mean I'm lonely when I'm alone
What doesn't kill you makes a fighter
Footsteps even lighter
Doesn't mean I'm over cause you're gone~
/too lazy to write proper intro. UMAD BRO?
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That which does not kill us makes us stronger?
Dafuq is this shit? Where is my Bleach poll?
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Cool, added an outro. I'm not going to proofread everything, so this review will have ALL THE TYPOS!
Vaga's going to be the one to post the review this time
Who, where, why and how? O.O srsly
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Here's an instruction (if you need one )
- Go to the OP of Bleach JR thread and click "Reply with Quote"
- Remove the quote tags
- Copy the whole thing
- Go the the Bleach section and start a new thread (don't forget to add the "Review" prefix)
- Paste the whole review
- Post the thread
- Add the poll
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I posted the review myself just to get it over with. Link's in my sig. I'll open the 491 thread in a bit.
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491 thread. Please subscribe.