btw the elders should respect us cuz we made it through school with internet and video games
Hmm... that's true since we have a lot of more things to distract us.
I guess respect will go both ways then.
nice set riki
Glad you like it.
I've read through the first chapter, I actually didn't intend to finish it but I couldn't stop.
I think I will bookmark your website and wait for the second chapter to be uploaded so that I can read it through all at once.
It's such a good story and you can write very well I can't help but feel envious.
Have you considered uploading your stories to sites like fictionpress.com? From there you can gauge how many people are reading your stories and get more reviews. I believe this story can grow into something amazing in the future
Actually, I've also just started out writing. It's a small step with only 4 short chapters but it's still a step nonetheless, would you check it out and give me your comments? (It's in my sig, it would help alot if you can give me your thoughts on it)
Tbh, it's "fanfiction" but it's more like an original story because you don't need to understand the fanbase to read it.
The idea of immortal in your story and how it develops is something I look forward to and Thesben and Kejuta are well-written characters. Can't wait to see how Kejuta develops over time, I'm assuming that she'll stay the lead till the end in this case tho
Glad you like the first chapter!
Umm... I haven't decided whether or not to post on those websites yet. It's kinda nerve wrecking to think of other people reading my stories. heck, I was so nervous putting my short story. I'll check your story then and give you feedback.
As for Kejuta, she won't be the main character in all of the chapter but she will make an appearance in all of them though. I gave some hints about her role in the first chapter.
Well, I think it depends on individual, me thinks it would be great if more people get to read your storyQuote:
Alright thank you!~Quote:
Do you have everything planned out? It seems to me that everyone in the family will be connected and have their own stories that eventually make up the entire plot. Btw, I really like Kejuta.Quote:
LOL I'm a shy girl so I'm kinda nervous about strangers reading my works.
Well, I have the first and last novels figure out. The second novel is in a work in progress though since I'm trying to tie the stories together.
As for the family, you'll learn more about their uniqueness in the next two chapter though...
BTW, my cat escaped again, but luckily we caught her.
Cat feels imprisoned....
I'm trying to turn her into an indoor cat but right now I'm losing the battle.
I did but I guess she wanted to explore the great outdoors. She probably missed it since she used to wander around the neighborhood. The problem is that she doesn't want to come home so that's irritating. >.>
My day went pretty well. I've been writing my story and it's now 12.5 pages.