Presenting "New Prince of Tennis Another Court," a fanfic created by yours truly. Why did I decide to make this? Pure boredom, and it was partly inspired by Fayte's story. Basically, I did this for the fans, to give you guys something to muse over while you wait every month for the real stuff.
To sum it up, this story is more or less an alternate story; a re-telling of the battle against the first stringers, since that's what we really care about. Although it's heavily based on the manga, you can read how my story differs and judge whether I made good choices or not. Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy. In advance, let me say that my writing may not be up to par, as it's literally been ages since I've wrote fan-fiction. Also, the dialogue is mostly based on the original Japanese dialogue from the manga and my personal translation. And lastly, while I know this is merely fan-fiction and is in no way canon to the original story, I do guarantee that you guys will find the re-tellings that this story has to offer interesting to say the least. I'll do my best to give as much characters screen time and development as possible; even ones you'd never see coming.
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Any reviews and comments would be appreciated before I bring out the next chapter.
Last edited by Brandnewkid; May 11, 2012 at 01:59 PM.
Well fine so far. I g uess.
Remember what youve got is practically the original storyline so there aint much to comment on as of yet.
Please guys, the topic of thread views is completely irrelevant. There were similiar cases before when a thread suddenly got 4 digit number of views in less than 24 hours and the world didn't stop turning. Not to mention that there are dozens of possible explanations ranging from search engine bots crawling this thread over to a bug in the actual vBulletin script. It's kinda ironic how you complain about kid supposedly spam-clicking his thread, while you're the ones who make the actual spam. 10 replies in a thread and only the first was on-topic. Views don't count as spam. Posts do
So, the morale of the story is: Who cares about thread views?
I haven't read everything yet, but I strolled through the beginning and I liked it so far. I'll read the rest later. Keep up the work
Last edited by alphabeta; May 12, 2012 at 01:21 AM.
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Just would like to add, this is where the majority of alternate things begin. Enjoy.
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I'd hate to sound too needy, but I'd really like to know if there are people enjoying this story. I have lots of ideas that I can go on with, but it'd be a waste if no one appreciates or at least criticizes them. I'm not writing this only for my benefit; this is for all the fans to enjoy as they wait a month for Konomi to get on with the real stuff. As anyone who has read this story can tell you, it is not exactly like the original, as there are some major differences thus far. But, I would want to know if my interpretation of the story is doing good by you guys, or not. After all, I would want it to. It's something made by the fans, for the fans, so to speak.
Last edited by Brandnewkid; May 12, 2012 at 05:31 PM.
I don't like the way Yuushi seemed to be doing fine with Fuji. As what we've seen in the manga, he should get completely dominated by Fuji.
He's about even with national Momoshiro, who is nowhere near high tier. Fuji IS high tier, regardless of whether or not people like him.
They don't need to play to know if player A>player B
Title doesn't matter. What matter is that you live up to your title.
Fuji has been going through the same training Oshitari had, and we don't have anything to suggest that Oshitari grow faster than Fuji.
Fuji's not playing a his best could be a fine reason, though.
EDIT: Another suggestion, if I may. Give Yuushi some new tech to show that he's worthy of moving up. Kind of like Momoshiro with his black jack knife.
Last edited by -Ken-; May 22, 2012 at 12:18 AM.
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Hope I delivered.
Last edited by Brandnewkid; May 22, 2012 at 05:09 PM.
This chapter is good. I enjoy it. I'm guessing we didn't know what Fuji's new counter do yet?
I kind of hoping to see a more "Fuji-counter name", lol. But that's a pretty small points.
Tsubame Gaeshi (Swallow Return) -> Jet Return
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Last edited by Brandnewkid; May 22, 2012 at 06:54 PM.