...Align the pages as closely as possible and redraw between the pages...? -.-"
I tried to do this way but it's difficult to join the heads
Who said scanlating was easy, anyway?
Yes, you got some shitty spread there, indeed. The raw pages were scanned and cut off in an annoying way, but it's definitely doable, though it might take quite some time and a lot of patience. If you already know how to use the pen/line/clone stamp tools, then what's the problem?
Redrawing can be considered art for a reason, you have to know the manga you're working on, know how the author draws certain things, to redraw them in a natural way. I remember one of our finest redrawers back in the day composed a sheet with all the different types of ears, hands, noses, eyes and other features, in all the different ways that the mangakas of One Piece, Bleach, Naruto, Claymore, etc drew them.
You see, people put a lot of effort into it to get a decent result. But enough of my ranting, if you want some actual help then you should upload your result at the point where you got stuck at, instead of putting up the raw and basically asking someone to do it from scratch for you. Show us where you get stuck, and tell us precisely where the problem lies - getting the pattern for the hair from other spots, getting the lines of the hair right, making the connection spots between raw and your own drawings appear less obvious; if you want help, we need to know what *exactly* with.
ok, here is what i did until now
I follow this raw
As can you see, the pages are out of alignment
I got stuck at this
I can redraw the fireworks and the sides
The second page on the right is a little taller, you need to bring it down or cut of the part... but if you cut off the top, then you will also have to crop off a little off the bottom since it is easy to notice. The hair coloring isn't even.. you should make another layer and then clone or make gratitude of the color range of the hair. You the color from the raw to guide you. The two page isn't the hardest to do .. i have seen much worse.. xD