I dont like the black colour. It's too black. You should shade more on the jacket and also the forehead protector. The hair looks strange but it's nice to see a different technique. Background is superb though. It does give a far far away feeling to me. Skin lacks shading too. You can still make the eye a bit more blue than it is right now. Good job.
I love pretty much everything about it. The thing that gets me, though, is the hair, the shading is strange. But I do love the style of shading you used with the hair. The clothes are great. I also like the sunset effect on the colors you used. The shading on the face and forhead protector would look better if it were more defined like the clothes and hair. And there are also a few teeny tiny spots where the hair color goes outside the lines. Overall, melikey.
im working on the new version right now, getting close to done, i hope you'll like that one to [br]Posted at: March 16, 2006, 11:31:14 PM_________________________________________________new version is up
It looks very good, I used your clean to color one for myself, its in the contribution thread.
I like it, only the hair's a bit ackward for me... for the rest, I kept the original bg, but this one's great too