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thanks to Shade for the great cleaning. :smile-big


compared to what I did before I think it's one of my better works
 

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not bad at all, but why is naruto's jacket blue instead of black? and i think you should add some color to the whirl on the shoulder
 

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changed it a bt.



t thanks lee-nus for the good advice
 

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see? its already a lot better! i like the way you shaded the face. perhaps you should remove some of the lineart in the face? oh, and for minor details, i think you should shade the clips (or whatever u wanna call them) on the sides of the whirl... and make his jacket a little blacker while ur at it! you already improved it a lot, so finish it off with a few final touches!
 

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tried to give the clips the illusion of being "round"

 

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already better. you didnt do anything to the other details though... ^^ haha, sorry im such a pain in the ass... i just wanna help you improve it (hopefully) :p
 

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dunno how to give him more detail.... but at least the lines are gone
 

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Raijatsu said:
dunno how to give him more detail.... but at least the lines are gone
yeah, i like that better, though maybe you can use some other kind of marker for his cheek bone? i mean, not necessarily the black lineart, but some kind of more skin colored contour? sorry if im messing you up! :D oh, and i still wanna see the jacket black... but maybe that's just me... :eyeroll
 

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?? sry don't understand... my english isn't that good. Whats with the cheek?
oh..and if I would be angry for your comments I wouldn't improve

so thanks!
 

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haha, that's good to hear! :p
mmm... so, the shading is good, but instead of the lineart, maybe you can use some other kind of contour? something skin colored?
and the jacket is currently more like grey, isnt it? i want to see it blacker! :)
 

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wow didn't now thats possible....


Thanks Lee-nus!!!! :D

tired so I won't make a new one till tomorrow
 

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Raijatsu said:
wow didn't now thats possible....

Thanks Lee-nus!!!! :D

tired so I won't make a new one till tomorrow
lol, you are welcome! im glad you're happy about the way it turned out! it has improved tremendously since your first version!
 
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