348 cover(my first attempt at coloring :D)

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well after reading the new chapter i decided to try coloring for the first time.

constructive criticism and suggestions would be appreciated.i think i need to learn how to clean up the lines and such.
 

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Not bad for your first try :kkthumbs

I would say the hair is a bit too bright, somehow reduces the feel of the his hair.
 

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Wow not bad for the first time! Somehow the blue is still too bright for me but thats just personal taste ^^
 

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Yes, not bad at all for a first time. I think overall it seems like a "first layer" of coloring though, and you didn't add any more layers to it.
 

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not bad, not bad. the shades could be a lil darker
 

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thanks all :)
i'm gonna try and work on the lines and look for some more tutorials to try to not make it look so flat.i can definatly see myself getting into coloring more.
 

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Try getting some colour and shade references from other anime pics... but It's good for a first try keeping improving ^^
 

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Pretty good for first try. I'd say, make the shading darker and add more shading in general... and don't be afraid to experiment with different colors, too. Keep practicing :)
 

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i stayed up all night doing this two :P
i think i improved a bit.
karin,my new favorite female naruto character.think i did better on shading and just all aorund coloring.
hidan and kakuzu,the lines turned out alot better looking in this one.i think this is my best one so far.
 

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you're doing pretty well, i must say! as for the 348 cover, try to stay on the same "level" when you're shading a bit more. now, some shades are waaaay darker than the base color, while some are barely noticable, know what i mean? the last two you submitted are much better, but you have missed coloring a few pixels, which makes the final result less attractive to the eye! but keep at it, you're getting there!
 

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Yeah I can see your improvement =D
Good job ^^
 

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Thats really good Shabanga, i really like the Karin one. and i agree with ya i think she is moving up my list of female ninja list.

Gotta love Badass girls! ^^
 

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First attempt and so good, really nice ^^
 

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this too good to be the first, I think what might have put more details in the BG as a gradient or a different color :D
 
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