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the second try is way overleveled and the first one less so. That was one of the first things i gathered from it.
 

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Ok I tried again ~.~ I even followed a tut for leveling word for word.



I think I missed some spots on the pants and some in the bubbles but I left the house alone.
 

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The third is the best so far. And here again we have some complicated grays to deal with, shade varitions and such. I would have zoomed in and did a little on the blacks around the house though. But the hard part in that is seeing the detail so you don't black out detail. With practice that becomes a lot easier. I would also have spent a lot of time redrawing lines. And the girl on the roof starts to get lost in the black background. I did a quick little edit to show you what I mean. Though I didn't spend time redrawing lines...



Hope this helps.
 

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Allashandra said:
The third is the best so far. And here again we have some complicated grays to deal with, shade varitions and such. I would have zoomed in and did a little on the blacks around the house though. But the hard part in that is seeing the detail so you don't black out detail. With practice that becomes a lot easier. I would also have spent a lot of time redrawing lines. And the girl on the roof starts to get lost in the black background. I did a quick little edit to show you what I mean. Though I didn't spend time redrawing lines...



Hope this helps.
I'll try to do that later thanks for the tip and the example.
http://i10.tinypic.com/2v9q03p.png
Didn't outline the girl.
 
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