Air Gear Ch 138

[Xiphias]

Raw
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9192/38136uw6.jpg

First try.
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7294/38136copyfj6.jpg

Second try.
http://i10.tinypic.com/3zrmatc.jpg

On second try I used a differnt method to level it, tried to clean it a bit more, I messed up the house imo.

Just started today. I originally posted this in the wrong section. Which try is better and why, I was told first was overleveled by some other people thus I have second try.

 

[NeoShweaty]

the second try is way overleveled and the first one less so. That was one of the first things i gathered from it.

 

[Xiphias]

Ok I tried again ~.~ I even followed a tut for leveling word for word.

I think I missed some spots on the pants and some in the bubbles but I left the house alone.

 

[Allashandra]

The third is the best so far. And here again we have some complicated grays to deal with, shade varitions and such. I would have zoomed in and did a little on the blacks around the house though. But the hard part in that is seeing the detail so you don't black out detail. With practice that becomes a lot easier. I would also have spent a lot of time redrawing lines. And the girl on the roof starts to get lost in the black background. I did a quick little edit to show you what I mean. Though I didn't spend time redrawing lines...



Hope this helps.

 

[Xiphias]

The third is the best so far. And here again we have some complicated grays to deal with, shade varitions and such. I would have zoomed in and did a little on the blacks around the house though. But the hard part in that is seeing the detail so you don't black out detail. With practice that becomes a lot easier. I would also have spent a lot of time redrawing lines. And the girl on the roof starts to get lost in the black background. I did a quick little edit to show you what I mean. Though I didn't spend time redrawing lines...



Hope this helps.

I'll try to do that later thanks for the tip and the example.
http://i10.tinypic.com/2v9q03p.png
Didn't outline the girl.