another clean (this time with text)

[spades]

hey, i made another clean
this time, im focused on basic redrawing,
didn't really do much on borders
i added the text cuz i was bored
so any comments, suggestions n stuff, PLEASE TELL ME.
it'll help me out a lot

this is the raw (pyuu to fuku! jaguar chp 17 page 7):
http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=01142zq4.jpg

here's the clean:
http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=07kw7.png

translation by ayyu from http://community.livejournal.com/ptfjaguar/

 

[ddadain]

Even attempting this page is brave.

Not a bad attempt...

The problem lies that you ENLARGED the page.

NEVER EVER ENLARGE a page. It will just ruin everything. The blacks would drop a shade as can be seen here. The raw looks "cleaner" than the cleaned page.

If you are redraw, you can ENLARGE the page first, then use zoom too The more you enlarge, the finer the editing you can make. This is especially so with redrawing. After having redrawn, you can resize the page to it's original format. You will find that the fuzziness disappears! Blah blah.

 

[spades]

*dizzy dizzy ENLARGE dizzy*
um, so i shouldn't enlarge a page.
i see, so i should just make it the original size
got that, thx :P
(thx for the good laugh )

 

[Obxist]

if you want to enlarge a page ,.. first make sure that you increase the resolution not the image size (heightxwidth),..normally its enough to enlarge it to 150-200 px high,.. as ddadain said its the best to redraw in an enlarge page,...
one more tips from is if you want to save the file with bigger image size than the RAW , just make sure denoise it and then level it,. with that trick you could produce much more quality,.. but once again as ddadain said,.. its not very good to save the file with image size bigger than RAW,.. but nice job,. ah one more to say,.. be careful when you redraw tones like the background in panel 5,.. and also redraw means, you thicken the lines that looks like to be gone ,. and youre still not done with panel 2 ,.. and once again nice job LOL

 

[spades]

ahhh , the resolution
now i get it
anyways, hahaha, i seem to always learn more stuff from u
yep, i did a pretty slobby job there (it took me 30 minutes)
okay, next time, i'll do an even better one than my previous 2
Mwahahahaha (wtf m i doin)

 

[Obxist]

ahhh , the resolution
now i get it
anyways, hahaha, i seem to always learn more stuff from u
yep, i did a pretty slobby job there (it took me 30 minutes)
okay, next time, i'll do an even better one than my previous 2
Mwahahahaha (wtf m i doin)

LOL we should share our knowledge LOL,.. theres no good if we just keep it by ourself

 

[ddadain]

just go

Image size --> the fix lock the proportions together

then just put it in the maximum enlargement... if you want, you can even zoom in more lol... if you're doing fine lines... o_o