cakefurnace attempts Editing Practice #001!

[cakefurnace]

ok. so my first post on mangahelpers is a editor-test.
this is editor test 002 btw. i typooed on the thread-title.

wasnt that hard imo, but i prolly missed something.

 

[abu_89]

a few points:
- don't indent (e.g. "all tied up")
- don't separate sentences in a bubble (e.g. first bubble)
- try to make a diamond shape with text and keep the space to the borders consistent (e.g. panel where goku pisses)
- reduce vertical spacing & character spacing for fonts like Mouthbreather when using; otherwise they take up too much white space (when they could be big and bold with less white space); check under the paragraph/character window in Photoshop

 

[cakefurnace]

- don't separate sentences in a bubble (e.g. first bubble)

thanks for the reply.
one question though concerning the seperation of sentences in one bubble; shouldnt it be best to follow the japanese text. ??

and how did i do overall ? keeping your points in mind, could i be an editor ?