[Casaubon] Attempts Editing Challenge #002

[Casaubon]

I was bored.

 

[s4d]

Hmm you did a pretty good job on that. Just somes thing I noticed you can improve on your typesetting a little like:
panel 1: A boar? will look better together instead of 2 lines
panel 2: typsetting out

Rotation of the scan is needed. It looks titled to the right