Chapter 11 - Within the darkness

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Scwindelmagier - well shall I continue going after them to...

I. Amaretasu - to kill them magier? Isn't that our duty? or not?

Magier -I.A You? and what do you mean by or not? What do you wanna say I.A? What are you here for?

I. Amaretasu - do you like to read books magier?

Magier - What does books has to do with it?

I. Amaretasu (smiling) - Let me explain to you magier. A book begins mostly with a prologue. The prologue is the beginning of the real story, known as the chapters in the book. The earl...

Magier interrupting - I.A cut the image talking and get the point of the story where you wanna go to.

I. Amaretasu - Okay the point where I wanna go to, is that the earl doesn't want to use us in Opalo. Opalo is just a distraction of the real job were getting to...

Magier interested and smiling - and that is...

I. Amaretasu - Hold on. What do you know of the black order...

Magier - Stupid finders, stupid excorsists, stupid science department, stupid generals,... all worth to kill as revenge for what they did to us.

I. Amaretasu - Didn't you forget a part.

Magier - Stupid bookmen

I. Amaretasu - Indeed bookmen, bookmen...

Magier - Stop it. I see the whole plan. All knowledge about the earl, about us, about akuma, etc... are the doings of bookmen. So killing them...
Hah, hah, hah, hah

I. Amaretasu - Indeed,as thought of someone who can see the situations well. Bookmen are the key of this plan of the earl.

Magier - and the earl's plan is killing bookmen

I. Amaretasu - indeed so let's go home to our family. Euhm why are you dissapointed?

Magier - Though I like the idea of killing bookmen, I would have liked to kill those trash excorsist.

I. Amaretasu - We can go watch for a short time.

Magier - Watching as they are going to kill akuma without difficulties. You or I can kill them easily

I. Amaretasu - Let's go watch the suprise waiting om them. Watching no more, then going back. Suprise

Magier - I.A I love suprises, I love suprises,... Indeed let's go watch

Meanwhile our excorsists enter a restaurant in opalo
 

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Ha *O*
I love the conversation, though I was surprised that I.Amaterasu suddenly appeared at the church. Did I already killed the exorcists who guarded the church? Are I.A. and I already in the church?
 

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well, the point is that I really can't end a story -> suprise: is something that a creative one can do. It doesn't matter how and when. About you and I.A. being already there, or excorsist being killed is something I left in the middle. The only choice I made was, making of opalo a distraction to something bigger. Th rest can be filled in by the next writer(s)
 

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Aaaaaaaaaaso, understood ^_^
 

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Also open is the fact why bookmen are going to be killed? okay, bookmen know a lot, but the why can be fill in too... :D
 

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I guess, how the last chapters are built, you have to remove the last sentence you wrote.
"Meanwhile our excorsists arrive at the church of Opalo. They can't believe their eyes..."
cause they are still in a restaurant. ^_^" and Magier and I.A. are on the way to the restaurant.
 

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I changed in the fact they entered the restaurant
 

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okies ^_^
 
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