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Thought i might try doing a naruto scan for once to see what it was like.
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Chvis002 attempts Cleaning Basics #001
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Hmm a challenge having to go over one of my own cleaners here. Ok but I might have been a little more exacting with your clean. If that is the case I'm sorry.
First of all you did a good job. As I would expect from you. The primary area I would watch out for is the whites, and redrawing the broken lines in your case.
Panels 2 & 3: The blue boxes have a little bit of dirt in them.
Panel 4: Broken lines on Shikamaru's hand need to be completed lines.
Panel 5: Some dirt in the blue boxes. Broken lines in the red boxes.
Panel 6: A little dirt in the blue boxes.
Panel 7: I would have completed the white lines on Inu's skirt. Shikamaru is missing a white detail line on is arm. And there is some dirt in the blacks on Kakashi in the red box under the leg wrap.
Here is the page with the boxes red for blacks and blue for whites.
I hope this helps
First of all you did a good job. As I would expect from you. The primary area I would watch out for is the whites, and redrawing the broken lines in your case.
Panels 2 & 3: The blue boxes have a little bit of dirt in them.
Panel 4: Broken lines on Shikamaru's hand need to be completed lines.
Panel 5: Some dirt in the blue boxes. Broken lines in the red boxes.
Panel 6: A little dirt in the blue boxes.
Panel 7: I would have completed the white lines on Inu's skirt. Shikamaru is missing a white detail line on is arm. And there is some dirt in the blacks on Kakashi in the red box under the leg wrap.
Here is the page with the boxes red for blacks and blue for whites.
I hope this helps
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Uhh, just something I'd like to point out.. perhaps the lineart should've been broken at certain points for artistic reasons? (take Shika's hand on the fifth frame for example) [br]Posted on: February 14, 2007, 01:43:07 AM_________________________________________________Err, in addition to what Allah said (I think you miscounted the frames, you mean frame 8, not frame 7), you didn't blacken Kakuzu's mask thingy on the seventh frame correctly. See that part that covers his mouth? the upper right side of it should be blacken a bit more.
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I agree with Fnuck there. That was obviously done for artistic purposes (of course I wouldn't know ENTIRELY for sure unless I saw the actual copy of the chapter in my hands but I think so.)
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@Fnuck: Yeah I miscounted the frames.
@ Fnuck & GK: Yes I do think that for artistic reasons that line art is drawn broken sometimes. And I'm certainly not an expert on deciding when broken line art is intentional and when it is a result of a raw. I will withdrawl my comment about the broken line art on the hand.
@ Fnuck & GK: Yes I do think that for artistic reasons that line art is drawn broken sometimes. And I'm certainly not an expert on deciding when broken line art is intentional and when it is a result of a raw. I will withdrawl my comment about the broken line art on the hand.
