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Okay, let's start the D.Gray-Man, an MH Original Story or "Infinite imagination of obsessed DGM-fans"-thread and have a lot of fun.
First...what is this thread?
It is a thread for (obsessed) D. Gray-man-fans to feel free to apply oneself into the story of DGM. Of course not the original story, a back-story how we called it.
For more information and how the idea accrued, visit this thread ->
http://mangahelpers.com/forum/index.php?topic=13026.0

But before you can apply into the story oneself, you have to clinch where do you belong to and, if you like to and it would help to improve the story, which ability you have. Best would be to post it into the thread I post above.
Now, how we wanted to perform all this stuff. The time of releasing new chapters, written by those who applied for it, depends and the next writer but she/he should write one within one week after the finish of the previous one. But to avoid grievances, I would appreciate everybody who wants to write the next chapter to write its name into this thread. It is not allowed to write a chapter two times in a row.
Now, those who will "participate" in this thread and already applied:

THE NOAH CLAN:
Schwindelmagier (magier) --->the apostle representing "regret"
the visionary of contrition

I.Amaterasu --->the apostle representing "concite"
the arbitrator of an existance's worth
reverts the animated to their origin, nothingness

Raijatsu (Jaques) --->the apostle representing "hope"
can control and manipulate human thoughts, control elements

Ayah --->[information not available]
JoJoJO --->[information not available]

THE EXORCISTS:
deathshadow25 (Flame) --->the conformer of parasitic innocence
the perennial legionnaire
werewolf transformation (?)
unrivalled senses and drygulch

Croxx --->[information not available]
Rinvak --->the conformer of parasitic innocence
Djmewmew (Tabby) --->the conformer of parasitic innocence
the voice is her ultimate weapon

snoogen0120 (Stephanie/snooge) --->Equipment- Ribbons, can control Akuma like puppets
AthrunZala (Zeran) ---> Twin katana (can even manipulate them)


THE BOOKMAN:
tune (ying) --->using a ring-pendulum for self-defense
KeyBlade Master
moondust
koenosaki (legno) --->using a simple unbreakable wooden stick

the audience:
ttxdragon

(thanks to tune for the beginning of this table and deathshadow for the idea and the first half of the thread-title)

The table will be updated when a new "member" joined this story.

We already received two chapters from Deathshadow, thanks.
I will post them here I think the first one who will write, can decide which one he chooses to continue. and I decided both can be used as one chapter. The first chapter is kinda the background-story for the second chapter. Exorcists were sent to America, killed some Akuma, came to a church, met me XD, I killed one of them (chapter 1), Lione made it to go back to the Order and told them about it, then more exorcists, bookman, etc. were sent to America (chapter 2).
And thanks to djmewmew, I guess it would be good to write an own background-story first. Just if you like to ^_^.

Chapter 1:
We got a lead from a church in a town in South America or Mexico 3 exorcists are sent to investigate. We arrive in (insert town name) there we talk to the priest in the church and asks us if we are exorcists. We look at each other and nod. He takes us into a small wooden house and inside is a woman. The Priest tells us he's been experiencing extreme regret (?). One of the exorcists go to the woman and puts her hand on the forehead. The woman grabs the hand and of the exorcist and squeezes it. The woman gets up and throws the exorcist into the priest and says something really Noah-like.


P.S: from Schwindelmagier. I was so free and put myself as Noah into the story ^_^. The symbolism of me is regret and i thought church->sin->regret->Noah, everything fitted.

Now...

Chapter 1(2):
The Black Order has opened a new chapter in North America due to over exertion in Europe and Asia. The Black Order has also been getting news of Akuma from the finders deployed there. They sent 70 finders and 2 exorcists only 1 exorcist returned. The exorcist that returned was Lione he came back alone but he and the other exorcist had successfully destroyed over 1000 Akuma. The Black Order took action immediatly sending 20 exorcists, 100 finders and 5 researchers to North America with Lione as the head of the North American Chapter. The Order pulled some strings and had a mansion built for lodging of the exorcists in Jamestown a settlement in the Colonies.

Location- North America (newly established Black Order)

Lione- Exorcists today we will begin our pre-emptive strike against the Akuma and the Noah!


Well, you can also say these chapters are a suggestion how to begin.
Have fun, minna-san ^_^.

To discuss next chapters, outcoming of fights, etc. - here
To announce who writes the next chapter - here
To write something about your character - here
 

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(Well, nobody has posted a profile so here goes~ A little piece from Tabby’s point of view as the train approaches its destination =3)

Tree. Bush. Fence. Another Tree. Hey! A cow! Oh. It’s gone.
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I’m really, really bored. Wow, I think I’m going to die of boredom! I poke Rinvak again, wondering if she knows anything to do, but unfortunately she’s still asleep. I glance out the window again, hoping for something, anything!
……………………………
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Damn. Nothing. I pick up the mission information book, and idly flip through. I’ve already read it so many times; I could probably recite it from memory. “The town of Opalo reports of a strange woman………blah blah blah……………appearance of akuma………blah blah blah…………..high probability of being a Noah………blah blah blah.
Eh? What just fell out of the book? ‘Good luck, Come home safely. Love, Ed.’ Heh, figures my brother would put a cheesy note in here. He’s so overprotective when is he gonna learn? ‘P.S – Please, no sugar or poking people, your annoying enough already’?!?!?! Hmph! I am not that annoying!

………………………………………………

Okay. So maybe I am.

“Estación de lavanda. Próxima parada, el Opalo!” Calls a conductor from the next car over. Did I just hear Opalo? YUSH! Almost there~!


((Afternotes: We’re in South America right? So I put all the names in Spanish. Yay for Google~ So…..
Opalo - Opal
Estación de lavanda! Próxima parada, el Opalo! - Lavender Station! Next stop, Opal!
I think it’d be cool to have the townspeople have a little Spanish in there sentences~ Sorry for sorta hurrying us to the town, but does anyone really want to be on that train for extended periods of time? =_=;;;;? Oh, and if Tabby doesn’t seem as peppy as her profile made her sound, its ‘cause she’s bored to tears. Or death. …………whatever.))
 

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haha, cool chapter ^_^
"Tree. Bush. Fence. Another Tree. Hey! A cow! Oh. It’s gone.
made me laughing ^o^
 

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Re: D.Gray-Man, an MH Original Story or "Infinite imagination of obsessed DGM-fa

If I am allowed to do continue it... you can give me a sign.[br]Posted on: February 04, 2007, 05:48:06 AM_________________________________________________Djmewmew - Opalo, yatta. Finally we are at our destination. Bye, bye train...

Rivnak - Oy, where is snoogen. Our third excorsist...



Djmewmew - Third excorsist?

Rivnak - Did you pay attention on readin that mission infromation book. Idiot. You knew we were with three excorsist on the train.

Djmewmew - euhm, I was so bored I was so excited jumping off the train without looking behind me (thinking how beautifull snoogen was sleeping). Weren't you the second walking off the train?

Rivnak - You?... Being with you on a mission always takes little problems with us

Djmewmew - Sugoi, they are riding on bulls here

Rivnak - You, I was talking to you... Okay let's go to Opalo. Snoogen0120 will get there by his own.

Meanwhile on the train...

Snoogen0120 - euhm, I must have fallen in sleep. But where are Rivnak and Djmewmew?
Sir: "when do we arrive in opalo"

Conductor - No le entiendo

Snoogen0120 not understanding

unknown woman - he says he doesn't understand you sir. But you said opalo. We passed it by.

Snoogen0120 - ... *those bastards forgot to wake me up and take me with them*

unknown woman - but the train stops in el toro, only 4 miles of Opalo. it's the only way to reach Opalo fast

Snoogen 0120 - thank you miss

Train arriving in el toro. Snoogen 0120 walking off, headed towards Opalo thanks to a mysterious woman.
 

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Re: D.Gray-Man, an MH Original Story or "Infinite imagination of obsessed DGM-fa

Great thanks, okies, then it's my turn.
Ah, how I love to write such stories ^_^. And the idea with the mysterious woman, sugeeee~~ *_*

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Snoogen headed towards Opalo and the mysterious woman stared at her for a long time until she disappeared in a cloud of dust. She didn't know what would waiting for him.

Schwindelmagier (aka mysterious woman):" Bye, bye...Miss exorcists. Unfortunately I have something to do, so I can't watch you dieing."

The woman turned around staring at some strange Akuma faces. A smile appeared on her face that slowly turns into a greyish-brown colour.

Schwindelmagier:"Kill her!"

With laughter, the Akuma are heading towards the exorcist who was trying to find it's way to Opalo, not knowing of the trap she's going to step in. The woman drove off the hood of her black coat, releasing her short yet curly black hair and some crosses that were slowly appearing on her forehead.

Schwindelmagier:"Maybe I.Amaterasu already arrived here. Argh, don't he dare bar my way when I want to kill those exorcists. There are enough for both of us."

With this she moved in the opposite direction, about to prepare everything for a attack that will definitely destroy the mansion of those annoying exorcists.

Schwindelmagier:"There are certainly some exorcists at the church I was in. Where I killed this damned weak exorcist. That was no fun at all. Maybe I should pay a visit. Just for a little bit random fun. I guess I will change my plans."

Changing her original plan, the Noah was heading towards the church near Opalo.

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Re: D.Gray-Man, an MH Original Story or "Infinite imagination of obsessed DGM-fa

Guess I should start writing this before I lose my idea. Enjoy!
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Chapter Four: And the night grows darker...

"Excuse me, could you please tell me where the Franciscan monastary is?" the exorcist asked to any bystander that walked by. Unfortunately, they could not understand what she was asking nor could she comprehend their responses. Snoogen let out a deep sigh in frustration. It was bad enough that her companions abandoned her in the train but this language barrier was making the situation worse.

How on earth would she be able to find the home of Black Order's supporters who were letting the visiting exorcists stay with them? Grrrrrrr... if she ever got a hold of Tabitha (Djmewmew) and Rivnak, she would personally kill them for leaving her on the train like that. However, she didn't want them to know about her misadventure in Opalo; they would never let her hear the end of it.

As she wandered through the alleys of Opalo, she glared angrily at her useless golem. The Asian and European branches had all sorts of amazing technology namely the golems. Theirs could translate languages and could locate any buildings within seconds. The North American kinds were lacking. "Damn, 2.0 golems!" muttered snoogen. "Why couldn't I have a 5.0?"

"Excuse me, miss. Do you need help?" Snoogen turned around only to come face to face with a kindly looking old woman. "I beg, your pardon?" the exorcist replied. The old lady was moving towards her slowly; she didn't appear dangerous and reminded the girl of her mother. Still, she gave snoogen a feeling of unease like that one time...

"Well, I don't recognize you from anywhere and you look like a tourist by the way you dress. I've never seen any young woman from Opalo dressed like that before or even look like you before. Are you lost?" the old woman said. She was carrying a fat cat and stroking it, making it purr.

Even though she didn't completely trust her, snoogen knew that wandering the city for the rest of the night wouldn't be helpful at all; getting help from a clearly lonely cat lady was better than nothing at all. After a few seconds of examining the woman, she answered, "Yes, I'm looking for an old monastary. My work requires me to go there for a task and I need to get there ASAP, Ms...?"

"Call me Maria. The monastary is not near here, silly. A young lady like you shouldn't be walking in these types of alleys; they're far from the main street. You could get hurt; you don't know what kind of dangerous people live around here." The cat Maria was holding kept purring as if it was agreeing with everything the old woman had said. She was still approaching the exorcist even though it was clear that the exorcist was not comfortable.

Snoogen brushed her hair aside and responded, "I have my own reasons for choicing my paths. Just point me to the direction of the monastary please and I'll be on my way." Maria shook her head vehemently and started tsk, tsk-ing. She placed the cat down and spoke sinisterly, "Young girls should accept help when offerred. They never know when trouble will strike."

SLAM! It occurred so fast it took the girl a while to register what had just happened. One second ago, an old, harmless lady was in front of her and a second later, she went through two buildings. "Damnit! I let my guard down," cursed snoogen.

"Ho ho ho! I got you, Miss Exorcist!" the Akuma formerly known as Maria (a Prince pun => haha) declared. No longer human, the Akuma had grown two feet taller and its hands formed a claw. Its eyes were blood red and snoogen knew that she had to act quickly to prevent any more damage. But before she could act, something hit her leg, causing her to fall under the rubble.

Maria giggled, "I hope you don't mind if I invited some friends. Killing an exorcist is much better if one shares with her friends." Snoogen slowly got up and observed her situation. Five Akuma against one exorcist - the condition looked grim and she definitely didn't like the looks of it. "I'm not going to die here like this. Definitely not here or now. I have to destroy my mother's sin," thought snoogen.

Looking at the mess around her, she noticed that her golem was still fluttering around her. "Golem, prove your usefulness! Find the others and bring them here! I need help!" the exorcist commanded. The black golem nodded and flew around quickly before the Akuma could catch it.

"Oh, bringing reinforcements? That will be useless because that means we'll kill more of you by the end of the day," mocked one of the new Akuma. Snoogen smirked. She knew that she was lacking endurance but she would have to try her best until the others arrive.

Limping towards her enemies, she whispered, "INNOCENCE, ACTIVATE!"
 

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Re: D.Gray-Man, an MH Original Story or "Infinite imagination of obsessed DGM-fa

My Chapter btw I love your chapter snoog

-----------------------------Back at the Mansion

Lione: Flames can I speak with you for a moment.

Flames nods his head and begins to follow Lione

Lione : I should have you put on a mission soon but with your Innocence....well I just don't trust it you might lose control but I do have something that you can do, only you can do in actuality. Our Chapter of the Order is the only one that doesn't have magical protection. In other words we need it so we aren't bombarded with Akuma attacks everyday.

Flames: So you want me to awaken that

Lione: Will you need an escort?

Flames: In my tribe it is forbidden that anyone trods those grounds but tribal members, but since I am the only one I must make this journey......alone .

Lione: I see but you must not let what happened to your tribe, affect you......it was-

Flames: Do not continue. I see you have looked at my personal file I was told that it was.....private.

Lione: as the Head of Operations here in North America It is required of me to know everything.

[Flashback]

Flames : I .....I can't control th-this.....f--f-feeling anyMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(flashes of blood and screams)

[End Flashback]

Flames: My road is arduous, and mine alone. This cross I bear not as an Exorcist but as member of the forgotton Tribe Powhaten is what keeps me alive.

Lione:......

Flames: I must head to the Burial Ground of the Ancients
 

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