dane attempts Editing Test #001

Kilik

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here you go, I had a little bit of free time so I gave it a go

 

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Looks nice...this time another approach with not killing the original sfx =)

Still some bubbles don't really are in the diamond shape, maybe you should look into the cleaner compendium or the typesetting tips?
 

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well, one of the bubbles you cant really put in the diamond shape because it would probably require a three letter word to be split up and that looks bad. The typesetting job is good enough methinks. I also prefer not editing the sfx. (a bigger hieght would look better but that is part of the rules)
 
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