First clean plz check it out

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hey...
gonna show you guys my first clean (belmonde ch6, pg 1)
would be nice if you guys gave suggestions, improvements, etc..
o, and rate it please.:)

And i have a question. What should I do for the grays?
in my clean i didn't do anything with the grays.

anyway, thx and sorry for asking for so much..

heres the raw(for some unknown reason, it doesn't zoom in like my clean):
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4830/belvisituer1lh2.jpg

Heres my clean:
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4802/belmonde1copyeg4.png

Thx.
 

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You can just leave the grays there. Nice leveling, Good Rotation, and you uses black brushes to cover the dust, but a pretty big problem here.

Why did you use a LQ Raw? When there's a HQ Raw for Manga Editor?

Pretty awesome for your first piece.
 

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ok, i'll leave the grays then.
haha, i didn't know there's a HQ raw.. (yes, im stupid)
next time, i'll find HQ raws to clean
Is there anything i need to work on? any suggestions?
thx for replying me :) (I thought everyone thought it was bad, that's why no one replied:p )
 

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It looks very nice to me. Only things I really have are little ones. In the bottom left hand corner, the light-haired dude's hair needs a bit of redrawing because some of the lines are splotchy. Also the white outline of the same dude in the upper left hand corner is pixel-y, I don't know if you can really do anything about this, or if you did anything to make it this way (Overleveling white maybe?).

But overall, a very good job.
 

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i'll try to make lines less splotchy next time i make a clean (dunno how to though ,but will find out somehow).
haha, okay. I'll try to make my leveling skills better.
thanks rebel.:)
 

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It looks very nice to me. Only things I really have are little ones. In the bottom left hand corner, the light-haired dude's hair needs a bit of redrawing because some of the lines are splotchy. Also the white outline of the same dude in the upper left hand corner is pixel-y, I don't know if you can really do anything about this, or if you did anything to make it this way (Overleveling white maybe?).
Gosh, I thought the same thing as rebel when I saw it, it looks pretty darn good for an LQ RAW. As for the "splotchy" part, er...if it was me I would try to mask that part off and then darken the lines to give the illusion that it was thick...by curves/levelling. As for the pixelly whites...maybe a technique is to select the white/select similar and then expand the pixels, then fill with white?

And er, I am a beginner...not sure if those techniques work, XD;;;
 

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i dun think ur a beginner :p
but thx for helpin me with the splotchy part
i guess the simplest way is to denoise it..
 

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try to denoise it a bit as they're from LQ scans,.. so the line will be less sharp and smooth :D,... btw its a very nice job,.. you just need to learn how to denoise and more practising,.. :D
 

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yep, i agree
i didn't know about denoising until after i did the scan
denoising's abit difficult, but i'm gettin the hang of it (i hope)
thx :) (btw, thx for ur reborn scans obxist)
 
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