first clean/rate it plz

[kain]

raw
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8439/01sb1.jpg

clean version
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2051/29969413nd2.jpg

but my stile is this

raw
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3070/54617232aj5.jpg

clean version
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7597/71231430mc6.png

 

[ddadain]

Heheh... nice~

Cleaning for coloring, eh?

Wanna clean stuff for Isane? XD We color bleach!

 

[Obxist]

hmm i dont have any comment if its for coloring,. but if its for Edited Manga, for me personally the line is not thick enough its to thin for me ...and nice redrawing ^^

 

[ddadain]

in colorings... the thinner the lines, the better XD