Misc Attempt Is this blurry?

DTNR

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So i'm practicing my cleaning. Most of the time time i don't know what i'm doing. It's either that i'm getting it or not.

Aside from needing to burn and such -- how is it? Blurry/sharp?



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Here's the download link if you want to try it out yourself.

http://www.mediafire.com/?3i2pa39i7d4333b
 

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It's too sharp. lines should have gray pixels between them and the white background

I'm guessing that after you resized the page you used some filter with incorrect settings which over-sharpened it.
 

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Aside from burning and such, how does it look now? o.O


 

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dont you think you sacrificed gray area too much? on middle left panel it almost become white.
well, i tried your raw and this is what i've got
i could make it cleaner but it will sacrifice some small detail, like dirt on wall on upper-right panel
 

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there is a way to clean it better without sacrifice details



anyway, the raw itself it's too sharp
 
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