Kratos attempts Training Ground #1 1/2

Kratos

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here is the attempt 1/2 i hope i did it right
 

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Kratos said:
here is the attempt 1/2 i hope i did it right
Pretty good for the most part. The blacks are the area that need the most work. Especially in small areas or near transitions from solid black to white or white detail lines. To be sure you are getting the blacks solidly black be sure to zoom in to 400%. Panel five text bubble one has a speck in it that should be made white. Panel seven did not orginally have a border on all four sides. The border should have been on the top and the right side only not the bottom. Also when sfx text expands outside the panel borders you need to leave a little white space between the border lines and the text, about 2px worth. Please fix the border on the last panel and touch up the blacks a little and resubmit.
 
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