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Here is the first one..
do i have to do the other one too?
do i have to do the other one too?

It looks good. The grays are solid. A few of your lines get a little thin but not to bad. The main thing that you need to redo is the white lining around the sfx text. Those were outlined in white in the orginal and should still be outlined in white. Fix that and I can give you a pass on this one.Kratos said:here is the other one
but i thinks is not good