Lineart Chapter 365 Page 17

Warrd

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This is my 1st lineart , i hope to get comment or suggestion to improve :)


*Warning, Very High Resolution*



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I think it's really good. You didn't do his sharingan though.
 

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now u mention, no wonder i feel something wrong... thanks
 

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well done, but personally, i prefer using linearts with a little roughness to them, and if not, i like them to be more dynamic. that is to say, you neednt make you lines so perfectly uniform, i think its just a good thing if they are bolder where need be, and the other way around of course! but you've done well, nonetheless!
 

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what do you mean by dynamic lineart? and thanks for the tips
 
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