Linkmasta attempts Cleaning Basics #001

Linkmasta

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Spent 2-3 hours on this.

Please give some feedback, thanks! :)

 

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hmm let see,.. its MQ for me,.. theres still many dirts :D try to clean it up using zoom at least 300%,.. and i find some big dirts on panel 2,7...one more the line is to sharp,.. and well done :D
 

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Thanks for feedback! :)

I'll keep in mind to clean up more. :)

Also I'm not sure what you meant about my lines being to sharp?

Could you specify which one?:darn

Thanks!
 

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well,.. your line art is all sharp or should i say to many noise on the line art
 

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Ah ok.

Thank you for feedback, much appreciated. :)
 
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