Submissions MH Art Contest Week #13-14 - Innocence Poem

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    MangaHelpers Art Contest #12-13 Innocence Poem
    We have Poem as this week's category and the theme is Innocence. Your task is write a poem based on this word. You can draw from your own experiences of moments of innocence or interpretation of the word.

    Category: Poem
    Theme: Innocence

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    What do I need to know before submission?
    • All members are welcome to join the contest. There is no minimum post or user status you need to have to participate.
    • Entries for the contest must be posted in this thread.
    • Each participant can only submit ONE ENTRY and it should be a new piece. So don’t try to be smart and enter a piece used in past contests.
    • Submissions not following the weeks theme will result in disqualification. If you have any question about the contest, you can ask it here.
    • No excessive, suggestive, spoiler, or porn-related imagery in the contest.
    • No plagiarizing is allowed.
    • Submission is open until May 7th, at 23:00 (GMT)

    Post Format:
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    "Theme Name" - "Work Title" by "Artist Name"
    
    "Comments"
    
    Voting Details:
    • Voting will commence after submission period is over, that is 7th May at 23:00 (GMT).
    • Announcement of winners, next contest dates and theme will be done soon after the voting period is over.
    Good Luck, Everyone!
     
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    "Innocence" - "No Longer Innocent" by riki
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    The making of a cynic
    I used to be an innocent girl
    and believed in the good in people.
    But now I know the truth
    after I encountered you.

    I'm no longer that foolish girl
    who believes in true love.
    Your deceptive tongue and empty promises
    have taught me that so very long ago.

    I'm no longer that guillible girl
    who believes in every one of your lies.
    Now I am wary of everyone I meet
    and question their every moves.

    For I'm no longer that innocent girl
    because you took that away from me...
    but then I was stupid enough
    to let you into my life.

    And I have regretted it every since.
     
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    Theme: Innocence
    We are the same by Lovemagi

    The sounds of the Sea
    Gallow in her soul
    That cold small body
    So strong, yet fragile

    Standing near the water
    Thinking about the future
    with occasionally
    A glimpse of the past

    The soft breeze
    Going through her body
    As a lone turtle in the field
    independent, yet lonely

    A little innocent animal by the water
    Looking straight at her
    She recognizes herself in the animal
    Knowing they are both the same

    We are strong, we are independent
    We are the innocent being in this world
    But that is exactly why
    We are so breakable


    Comment: It is been a while again that I actually wrote a poem. Honestly, I got plenty of deas but didn't find the time to make them and eventually I forgot about them and started to draw instead xddd. However this time, it is different! Anyway, whoever thought about this theme, good job. You gave me the inspiration to make this poem and finish it in my spare time that I had atm.
     
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    blissful innocence comes before the bite - by TSPanda - Innocence

    there was a time
    some time
    you don't remember
    but you were truly innocent

    a child poking a cat
    a kitten clawing at a ball of wool
    a young couple sharing apples under the mid-summer sky

    something we may bear witness to
    but something we may never truly feel

    because to know is to sin
     
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    "Innocence" - "An ageless innocence" by Asia Run

    Innocence
    Is the blind man
    That walks by the side of his loyal dog
    Trusting unconditionally

    It’s the voice
    Of the lonely singer
    Whose voice only reaches
    The walls of the bathroom

    Perhaps, it’s the kid
    Playing freely inside you
    Reviving
    The nostalgic old times

    Or the light
    Dwelling
    Deep inside the tired eyes
    Of those that consider themselves too mature to be innocent.
     
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    Innocence is a lie by Belserion

    They say we're all born innocent
    But that's a lie
    Our first act is to bring pain
    Bloodstained, screaming

    For a while it's idyllic
    There's joy in your guileless eyes
    Long sunshine days
    Warm, safe, protected

    Then there's a knock
    The barrier is about to break
    The world has come to collect
    On the debt you haven't paid

    There's no such thing as innocence
    You were simply being molded
    To fit the empty space in the puzzle
    Of the world that just keeps turning
     
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    "The epic innocent"

    I used to love, I used to believe.
    No ill feelings, No grudge or peeve.
    Trusting blindly like a naive.

    Tasted pain, Misery and deceive.
    Tears are falling but i got my sleeve.
    No more innocence i must change or leave.

    Hurting them back that what i hope to achieve.
    Don't judge me, I was as pure as Adam and Eve.
    You think i'm corrupted?! Good grief!
     
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    Innocence - Heaven awaits by me.


    Heed to the Styx, salvation is beyond,
    You may loathe what fate decided to thou,
    Yet Charon finds hilarious what lifes drags off.

    Heaven or Hell, solely culprits or innocents may enter
    Easiest for the innocent, like yes or not is the answer.
    Hardest for the culprit, flip your coin, head - yes, tail - not.

    Tail!? Who told you you were going to be asked?
    Salvation is here, Charon pushes you at the big gate
    It does not opens, guilty you are not.

    Heed to the Styx, fate wonders your soul
    Peter you will be seeing at the time of redemption
    Because through life, fate did not took your innocent soul.


    Comments: My first poem ever D:
     
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    "Innocence" - "off-white" by Lord Maple

    stained halls echo words of the capable
    take it from i, do not heed to their lies
    supposedly white walls built with cable
    couldn't even last through small wear and try
    words tell you not to say or hear one's affairs
    you break from command, rebellious change
    but painless as if it's kind stagnant air,
    you stop, felt dismay, and stay within range
    the threat of innocence that marred the grime
    though they say, good riddance, they too, are impure
    they too, have sinned, became wise, sculpted mimes,
    holding highly, the sceptre of grandeur
    prohibit yourself from the perceived
    and you'll see, you have died in misery

    Comments: Last time I made a poem was 8th grade, but hey, entering seems lit '-'
     
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