Motoh attempts Training Ground #1 1/2

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Looks pretty good. Your top Naruto bubble seems a little odd though, kinda like you added extra white to the bubble.
 

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motoh said:
Excellent job. Only two minor things to mention the second panel text bubble is a little off where the black meets the white. Panel 5 the white detail lines of kakashi's chin/neck on the right side is not completed. Otherwise it's a great job. You definatly pass.
 
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