My first Colored Manga page. Bleach.

[Haxor_Leo]

This is my First Colored Manga Page Ever.....it's not Totally Finished though.

Pls tell me What you think. Is it good for a Rookie like me?

 

[destinator]

Looks already nice but I guess it needs a lot more work...like the background and all the details like renjis tatoos. But I really like it cant wait for a 100% complete version.

Moved over the Bleach Art section ~ TL

 

[Haxor_Leo]

Ok....Took me last night and This morning to Finish it.

Here it is.
I wasnt sure whether i should add a color to Yumichika' and Ikkaku's shirts. Since the School Uniform in my coutry is a White Shirt, i Did another Layer of Pure White over All White SHirts.

 

[destinator]

Hehe I like it...the scene is cool and and most of the color parts you did too. Still there are a few details you should look at.

1. I dont like the green/blue color of the wall but thats just my opinion. Still you forgot to color a few little parts over and under the left bubble.

2. You could have redrawn a few black parts like renjis tatoos in his face/chest and his mouth too^^

But looks good for your first try. I hope to see more soon =)

edit you also forgot to color rangikus arms..right side of hitsus head^^