<<<<My First Try>>>>

Daruko

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jorge__itachi

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where are the sadows?
 

lee-nus

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omg, please do something about the font of your post, it hurts my eyes! :p anywho, i cant see any shading or highlighting... so, its just filled in colors...?
 

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you should put some shadows, and clean a little the page of the manga :)
 

Zwivix

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Uhh whats up with your fonts?

Anyway it's good for the basics but you need to shade it like everyone says and clean more especially on Jiraya's jacket.

Good job! :amuse
 

Daruko

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thanx guys...
It was my first ((have mercy))
ok I'll work on my shadowing skill (I don't really have any))
May be I need some more time 2 master it

thx 4 ur comments
 

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good joob keep it up:)
this isnt bad compared to my first coloring just keep practicing:)
 
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