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It seems I had this one posted in the wrong thread...

In short:

I've had a story in my head for years and especially lately I've been working more and more on this story lately but since I'm not up to the level to draw it out myself nor write it down properly I made it in story board style:

part1:http://www.zshare.net/download/2408543832206b/ *redone txt pages 46-48*
part2:http://www.zshare.net/download/22948323f24ea0/
part3:http://www.zshare.net/download/harrytxt3-zip.html

So I hope you guys (and gals) can look through the rough sketches and don't mind the typos and grammar since for me it's really all about the story itself. PLease feel free to comment.

Here you get an idea of how the main characters should look.....







The long version:

After years of doing cartoony stuff (I worked for Hallmark and Jamba, http://members.home.nl/d.boxtel/Heiny/heiny.html <-- what I normally do) I decided to do more the work where my heart lies: Comics/Manga. But I'm no where as good in this area as I am in making cartoony stuff http://members.home.nl/d.boxtel/Heiny/heiny.html <-- what I normally do. But I am practicing more and more to get to a level that the story deserves, but to be honest if I can find someone up to a level that the story deserves that would make me very happy since I doubt it will be me the next few years.....

This story is a non commercial project of mine just to tell the story I have in my mind. So I'm just looking for a podium to tell my story and where people honestly give their opinions and perhaps even find people who want to get involved...... I hope to have found it here, or else I would be very glad if people know where this would be apreciated....

This story will mostly contain all the things I like about comics and Manga and hope to break many of the (to me anoying) cliche's you see coming back time after time..... So many tributes can be found in the story based on stuff found in battle chasers, bleach, naruto, Bone etc etc..... Although not too obvious I hope.....

Im already writing the script of future issues, almost done with issue 15.....(this x48 pages story).... And don't expect to be done at issue 40..... But it did force me to change some things in part one....
 
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So many who check the topic and so little who actually try and read it :(...... Come on guys give it a swing ;).....
 

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I'm giving it a try now :D

I adore your drawing style, and I'd like to see more. So I'm wondering whether you've done pages already?


Btw, that's an impressive website :)

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It's a bit more graphic than I'd expect it to be. I'm still in the first file, but I'm lking what I reading so far :) There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes. But nothing big, jsut things you can edit easily.

I can see where you got influenced by Naruto thugh. XD But even so, you've still retained originality (especially liked the bit about the balance) with the whole violence bit. Though next time you should put a warning sign about the graphics XD (if you do post the cleaned version), since that's a whole lot of violence there. XD Nothing I didn't enjoy though :D
 
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im just about to go to bed, but ill subscribe the thread and check your stuff tommorow.
ill be back to tell you what i thought :XD
 

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Finished reading it, and I'm really impressed! I like how you stated the fact that to fight evil, greater evil should be created, or such. Please keep them coming :D And if you do finish the pages, post 'em up here too :D
 

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read all 3 parts?

Glad you tried it... Would love to hear more details about your likes and dislikes...

I finally finished writing the scripts of all storyboards.... The story ends at issue 48..... Still misses alot of details but the big red thread is completed..... Now working on character design... Wil adjust the first post to show the other characters in better detail...
 

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Yep, I have.

I see you've added a couple more art to the first post. I really like that cat, I have to say. XD Nothing I dislike, since I quite enjoyed reading it XD

Though there are a few grammatical and typographic errors, but that's all I can really ask to fix. XD The story's addicting enough.
 

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Yep, I have.

I see you've added a couple more art to the first post. I really like that cat, I have to say. XD Nothing I dislike, since I quite enjoyed reading it XD

Though there are a few grammatical and typographic errors, but that's all I can really ask to fix. XD The story's addicting enough.

Yeah I was fammilliar with that problem.... But I put the focus on the story itself just as that the arty itself is far away how that should be ;)......
 
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