My second coloring

Sednahq

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Hey Guys,
I have done now my second Panel coloring and I think for the second time it isn't such a bad coloring

Here it is:



What do you think about it ?
 

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Still needs some work. The colors are still a bit too flat. It's also a bit too obvious where you used the paintbrush to try to shiny up his skin. But keep at it.
 

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Not bad but it still needs some work. Deidara-senpai eyes are not red. :blink
 

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Pretty good for a second time imo.. But you could vary a bit with the shades of the colors.. The blacks of the Akatsuki uniforum and the headband are the same, and it looks a bit to plain to the eye.. Probably the grays are the same too.. But good job nontheless! =D
 

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nice but use better colours and shades
 
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