my ultimative work CH.256 P13 i have found my way of coloring, merged colors

[getiton]

my ultimative work CH.256 P13 i have found my way of coloring, merged colors none of those tutorial worked for me this is my own style it took 3 hours to color it


http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eyeshield21256p13copyde7.jpg
it took really long to color so please appreciate a 14 year old boy's coloring by commenting and saying things like thanks for the nice coloring and words that would encourage me.

 

[Ayle]

I think you should have kept the same shade of red for the rotation...

 

[getiton]

ahh i know but i'm showing the devil bat light hurrican so i slightly changed the color for the spin lightly so is it nice.
the first 1 is a ghost so i colored like you say smoke.
so it is like this.

 

[OS.Hoshi]

err... what do you mean the tutorials didnt work? '_' It's not very encouraging to try to encourage you if you say such things... What software do you use for coloring, anyway? Maybe knowing that can help us help you ^^'

Maybe you should try coloring only one panel. Start with something simple. If done really well, one panel alone could take you the 3 hrs. You'll be able to focus in less subjects. & I don't recommend trying to achieve effects (such as the DB ghost) so early on.