Naruto 322 p. 01-03 Help ^.^

[DWZ]

Hi,
I tried out sth. new and I think it improved my Edited Manga
but my next problem are the gray areas

as you can see on page 2, panel4: I havn't cleaned anything
and on page 3, panel 3: I redrawed most of the lines and took the gray of the raw ^_^

I dont like redrawing so much, cause my brush settings arent optimal, too

so mabye you can give me some hints/tutorials, not only for grays,
for everything that stil can be improved

oh, and I havent cleaned everything 100%,
so dont care about some spots in white/black areas

http://mitglied.lycos.de/dwz/Naruto/322/Naruto-322-01[DWZ].png
http://mitglied.lycos.de/dwz/Naruto/322/Naruto-322-02[DWZ].png
http://mitglied.lycos.de/dwz/Naruto/322/Naruto-322-03[DWZ].png

thx,
DWZ

 

[Ayah]

The Tutorials section of MH Academy is your friend Oh, and moving this to MH Academy, where cleaning questions should be asked.

 

[hashikei]

The lineart looks a bit thick, what filters did you use? You shouldn't use any filters that can potentially destroy the lineart
As for redrawing in the grey areas, you can use the pen tool, and erase unneccessary lines.

 

[shinwei]

Comic Sans is a blasphemy amongst Manga Editors. Please please please please please please please please please do not use comic sans. Hook yourself up with some real fonts at www.blambot.com.