Naruto ~ CH 341 PAGE 01-02 in HQ (cleaned)

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Hey guys !

Here's a cleaned version of CH 341 page 01-02... (It's my first time cleaning from a colored page ^^") Im kinda learning

Please credit me if u would like to use it :tem

Any comments r welcome, Thx very much :p

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I would say it looks really good.
My only criticism would be that some lines of the gods (this scroll or whatever thing that goes to the top) arent blacked completely at least they look like the white spaces shouldnt be there. Hope you got what I tried to say otherwise I'll upload what I mean xD
 

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Yes i think i know what u mean...

But i think kishimoto-san drew the lines of the gods with a brush so it wouldn't completely be black ^^

and I dont understand ur white space sentence XD
 

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Dralaquan said:
Yes i think i know what u mean...

But i think kishimoto-san drew the lines of the gods with a brush so it wouldn't completely be black ^^

and I dont understand ur white space sentence XD
No I think you got it because some of the thicker lines arent full black but seem like the brush hadnt enough color anymore ^^
 

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i think its good. there are some black parts on the upper top/background that could be worked on some more, but actually, i think it works fine the way you've made it. it neednt be so clean, given that the background looks kinda like its meant to be a painting, if you know what i mean. anyway, im not making my point here, but it looks good! ^^
 

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It really looks good. This is the second clean of this that i have seen. This one looks a lot more true to the colored version though.

Good job. Lee-nus-- will you color it?
 

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GREAT JOB DRAL-kun^^im still wondering how u guys do it(u, shade etc). tablet?
 

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@lee-nus: Thank u, i thiunk i understand what r saying

@venicia777: thx and i cant wait to see lee-nus color it ^^ (im coloring it though :D)

@KS: hehe ill explain to u on MSN when i get a chance ^^ its not that hard ^^
 

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@venicia/dral: yup, as soon as i get the time, im starting on it right away. also, i plan to do a shippuden wallpaper, but i doubt i can have it ready until part 2 begins... *_*
 

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I think the background lines are supposed to be like that. They seem to have been drawn with a real brush to give it a more traditional feel, so Dral's done a great job preserving that actually. :amuse
 

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Thx very much Amaretti-san ! :D
 

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Whoa, this is great. ^^ Hope to see more from you in the future. Keep up the good work. :kkthumbs
 

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Awesome. I liked how you kept the original brush strokes

btw I used this for the colored version I made :tem
 

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Great...! thx eveyone ! :tem
 
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