Naruto Chapter 361 [10-11]

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i hope you like it :amuse

i like the result but i want your opininions and suggestions
bye^^
 

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You've gotten better, man. That's nice!
 

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Really nice :)

Thanks
 

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Looks good :amuse
 

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thanks all^^
 

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Nice stuff :D
 

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This looks very nice :)
 

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thanks.
i want to join zarosaki but i dont know what i do to speak whit their members any solution?


i want to join zarosaki
stiluz or reaver, can you give me a chance to join to zarosaki.com?
 
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okay, here's some tips i hope will help you. first off, use cleaner scans/linearts. this looks too messy for my tastes, and some of the lines are jagged. plus, its a little too "black", if you know what i mean.

secondly, the noses and the lips, especially in the upper left panel, are way too defined. look at real life pictures or the works of other good artists, and try to find a better way of doing these areas.

thirdly, clothing folds are a great way to give depth to a picture, but the two bottom panels have waaaay too many, especially sasuke's arm in the right one.

also, you could work more on the skin areas, but i think the quality of the lineart is at some fault here, cuz there is way too much black to see what is really going on.

lastly, look at tutorials, other ppl's work, etc, and try to learn as many of the good aspects you find as possible!

keep it up!
 

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#zarosaki @ rizon.net

If you want to wait for the site, it's gonna take few more days. And the irc is 126 times better option anyway.

Aanywaayyss.. Try keeping your softie a lot more simpler. It's extremely difficult to make it look good with that style. As for your celly, try adding some highlights and pay attention to the details.. With some practice you could be fine enough for Zaro in few months <3
 

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i have some pictures in cell shaded
these are the pictures i hope that are goods for you The Exa^^

 

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Yes, I noticed them and was talking about them earlier <3
 

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Since you said give suggestions I will give you some, I think Deidara's skin tone and hair should be very different. In this coloring, it seems very similar. Otherwise, everything is very nice. You have improved, great work. Shading with the blood adds a nice effect. And i love the sharingan panel, very nice. :)

-AF.3
 

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can't wait for more of your work in the future zarosaki releases.. :thumbs
 

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great coler very dark
 
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