Original Manga Story/Outline

KazigluBey

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Here's a piece I've been working on, on and off, for the past year. It's in a chronological outline form, as that seems to be the best way for me to get the general idea so I can go in later and flesh things out with more detail and dialog. The initial introduction part might be a bit confusing, as I most likely will re word it and post some text from books I have to make things a bit clearer, so please bear with me at this point in time. :)

I'd appreciate comments/critiques on what you guys think needs improvement (ie. any flaws in continuity or logic), or anything in particular that stands out in which you like. Anything is fair game. This is supposed to be a Seinen manga for those who are wondering.

http://rapidshare.com/files/59708873/Story_Outline.doc

I know this is my first post and I promise I'm not going to bail after posting this. :tem
 
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