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[icarium2]

Raw

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Cleaned

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EDIT: I changed the page.

 

[hatsuharupeace]

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woah.... nice job icarium!!! though i'm not a full-time Manga Editor, i reckon that would be a HQ scan job right there.

 

[spades]

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i would rate it low hq coz of ur very very baaad raw
just a few things:
~the page is slightly not straight
~few dust aroung the borders, but it's not that noticible
~2nd panel there's a white dot in reborns hair that shouldn't be there
~3rd panel background, u need to clean the dust
~7th background, need to make the blacks bit more black
~GET A BETTER RAW. (i learned that from neobody )

good things:
~nice denoising (for some reason, reborn suits denoising alot)
~u gave a crappy raw a good clean
~nice resizing
~nice determination (i would NOT have wanted to clean sth like that)
~thx for Editing d-grayman

 

[icarium2]

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Um... I did not use denoising. I think the dots are supposed to be there since its Amano's style to put dots for no reason. Thanks for pointing out the dust on 3rd panel, didn't notice it. Oh, and I doubt there's a better raw. I wish there was a better one too since this one was really crappy.

 

[spades]

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!!!!! seriously?? then that's really really gay!!
great job man

 

[Obxist]

okay bumping a little ;p
just a little suggestion overall its MQ,.. u could do better than that... dont forget to watch the pre cleaning step... the page is not upright enough,..

 

[Vato Loco!]

Err... one last thing! Poor re-sizing. Always remember that it's really bad idea to go lower than 1100.

 

[spades]

oh! a new page! haha

 

[Vato Loco!]

This is pretty nice. A solid MQ. As long as you do the re-draw for the bubble and do a pattern stamp over the grays this would be a great HQ.

 

[Obxist]

this is nice.. no denoising ? so i must say you put a lot of work in here... same comment as vato LOL XD

 

[icarium2]

Yeah no denoising. I actually tried re-doing the grays before but it didn't turn out well.