Rating Please - Mx0 c54 p001 & FMA c73 p001

ssjohn

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I didnt look at the FMA page but here is what i saw on the Mx0 page.

You did a good job i love that it's nice and HQ *so pretty* but you messed up on the Reframing *get's yelled at for messing up on it all the time XD* on the inside border you brought it in more then it needed to be and you cut into some of the art work..

Anyways i thought over all you did a good job ^-^
 

abu_89

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you overlevelled the page: the building's side on the right of the page is gray in the raw but whitish in your clean. And the grays on and near Kuzumi are too dark and the halftoning is too visible.

As far as i can tell, the raw seems to have been levelled already so you should only level slightly. Also, you lost parts of the page to the border which are a bit too far inside.

Also, where you redrew the lines on the building, it looks really artificial and out of place. Should have used 1px higher and manually broken the lines at a few areas to make it more natural looking. (or left it alone altogether since if it's not there on the raw, it probably wasn't in the manga).

So, all in all, MQ.
 

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thansk for the rating,.. i'll try my best again then :D
 
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