Saaruto's editing practice #2

Saaruto

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I didn't clean it, I just typeset it using the exact translation given. Any and all help is welcome :).
 

abu_89

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It's not bad... but you should try to keep a uniform space between the text and the speech bubbles. Your font was just a bit too large. Diamond formation problems too but I'm not too big on that myself :p.
 
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