SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace FINISHED :D

[lee-nus]

okies, another wip! im trying to get somewhere with my first-ever lineart, and for this, i've just blotted out some colors on it. a very rough draft of what's to come, you could say. i know sasuke's hair looks just too funny, and their should be more shading on his neck, in between his collarbones and stuff... and the background is nothing but a color drop, but its a wip, so bear with me on this!

http://www.deviantart.com/view/42245647/

so, whaddaya think? comments are welcome, of course.

the final version should be up tomorrow, and if not, in the next coming days. it all depends on how much time i can make for it. keep your eyes open for it, and i'll promise to try my best!

link to lineart:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/42222787/

dont be too hard on me! its my first lineart EVER after all!

 

[kyubisharingan]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

Hmm....its alright....not one of ur best though, BUT keep trying. Ur gettin better everyday

 

[lee-nus]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

heeey, dont be too quick to judge me on this! as the title implies, its still in progress. so far its only taken me about an hour, and i guess it'll take at least four before its done, so hold your horses!

 

[nixuboy]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

Sasuke seems very.. yellow xDD
But I'm sure this gonne turn out nicely ^^

 

[lee-nus]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

oh, does he? its good to know, cuz im sure it looks very different on my laptop. its not the first time, either... not sure how im gonna deal with it, but i'll try my best!

 

[Zoe303]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

I'm sure you're going to try it!^^* And I'm also sure you'll make it!lol I'm agree with them as I also think it's not one of your bests but it's really great!^^, Can't wait to see more of you!!^.^

 

[angry]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

You're doing line art now? I think its pretty good for you're first line art.. The only thing that looks weird is Sasuke's arm around Naruto's shoulder... his elbow looks like it belongs to a 2 meter arm ^^ if you know what i mean. The proportions of his embracing arm looks off.

Other than that this is very good imo.

Greets, Angry

 

[lee-nus]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

@angry: yup, i guess i am! my first though... ah, yeah, i think i know what you mean. the original looks like that too, actually. it took a while before i saw what is what. if we're talking about the same thing, that's actually the sleeve that is blown open, and not an actual part of his arm... i mean, only cloth! his elbow isnt even visible, as its behind naruto from our point of view. see the darker shades (still too bright though)? that's inside his sleeve. see it different now?

oh, and yeah, sasuke's skin looks way too yellow now, as im viewing it on another cpu. thanks nixu, i'll fix it somehow.

 

[angry]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

Ahh, i see... its the inside of his robe! Yea, then ignore my comment ^^

 

[lee-nus]

Re: SasuNaru ~ The Last Embrace WIP

okay, WIP updated! sasuke and naruto now have more decent hair. naruto's hair was a bitch, since i've never done it that way before, but im happy with it. also, i have a little more to do to sasuke's hair, but it'll be done soon too. plus, i made his skin less yellow, at least on my monitor! hope you like it better now, nixu! at least im experimenting my way there...

http://www.deviantart.com/view/42245647/

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EDIT: image updated and finished (at least, temporarily! :P)

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/42477047/

hope it looks allright on all monitors now...

 

[angry]

hehe is that your signature i see there? It looks nice. I haven't noticed it on any of your previous pictures.

Greets, Angry

 

[lee-nus]

hehe is that your signature i see there? It looks nice. I haven't noticed it on any of your previous pictures.

Greets, Angry

lol, i didnt expect to hear any comments on that! but yes, it is. and i have it on a few of them! :P
thanks for complementing my lazy ass signature (only my first name)!

 

[angry]

lol, you're last name doesn't happen to be Torvald... or is it? ;-]

 

[Zoe303]

Cool!I like all the colors!But what I most like is their hair!!^^*
Great job man!

 

[lee-nus]

lol, you're last name doesn't happen to be Torvald... or is it? ;-]

lol, it most certainly is not! that's a first name, as far as i know. know anyone by that name? my last name is zetterlund btw... [br]Posted on: November 06, 2006, 11:00:54 AM_________________________________________________

Cool!I like all the colors!But what I most like is their hair!!^^*
Great job man!

cheers woman! yeah, i guess i kinda agree. at least, im happy with the way naruto's hair turned out.