[studio] Editing Practice #002

[studio]

There is mine. First post...Maybe I should go intorduce myself after this...

Personally I would have left the SFX's alone. I like it when the images are in their original forms minus the text translation

 

[shinwei]

Not bad. I've never seen this font that you're using, but I like it.

Couple comments.

1) You don't really need to put everything in one line. "An, oar eh?" and "All tied up." can easily be made into two lines and font size a little bigger.

2) Don't be afraid of separating one word into two lines if necessary. Especially for the last bubble. Deranged could have been split de-ranged.

3) Text is a little too close to the edges.

 

[studio]

thanks for the tips. This was my first time. :P