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since theres not a thread already like this i guess i should start one although i dont know how many people like poetry or write at manga helpers but here goes
this thread is for people who like to share some the stuff they write although i would suggest going here first www.allpoetry.com cause they can copyright your piece for free and all you have to do is just post it also a place for people to discuss books and poetry but please no bashing and no critquing unless you like someones write then dont comment on it and if someone really wants a critque on thier piece then ask people to send you an email in your post or better yet join the site mentioned above
also feel free to post any stories or poems or essays just dont post someone elses without permission and dont spam and dont make it extremely long one and im talking over 150 lines and if you do have one like that then just post a link to it
ok
so i guess i should start
edit-decided to change it to something a bit smaller there still lyrics and the order of the song is verse chorus verse bridge also theres a specific refernce to a certain anime/ manga in the last stanza
Titel-The Arrow and The Missing Eye
Whether I like it or not
Whether you can stand me or
You cant stand me
I guess that's my fault
I don't feel it though
Were just the common threshold
And its been years since I wore my welcome away
I got no idea why I'm afraid, 'not to stay'
I'll never get the exaltation
Of you
If I lie down with your expectation
Of me
Like the arrow in the soldier's eye
The point won't hurt
If something was never there
You can't take back what you lose
That's why I swear to use
Every last part of you
So will you take this
For what it is
And just leave it be
Or will you bleed
Until there's no fight left
Could you except the fate
Or do you still believe in closure
I'll never understand the concept
something i can accept
Will this thread
hold
Hold our heads
From falling away from the ground
Cause after all
these are our worst fears
We haven't seen the evidence of the ninth
For twelve years
this thread is for people who like to share some the stuff they write although i would suggest going here first www.allpoetry.com cause they can copyright your piece for free and all you have to do is just post it also a place for people to discuss books and poetry but please no bashing and no critquing unless you like someones write then dont comment on it and if someone really wants a critque on thier piece then ask people to send you an email in your post or better yet join the site mentioned above
also feel free to post any stories or poems or essays just dont post someone elses without permission and dont spam and dont make it extremely long one and im talking over 150 lines and if you do have one like that then just post a link to it
ok
so i guess i should start
edit-decided to change it to something a bit smaller there still lyrics and the order of the song is verse chorus verse bridge also theres a specific refernce to a certain anime/ manga in the last stanza
Titel-The Arrow and The Missing Eye
Whether I like it or not
Whether you can stand me or
You cant stand me
I guess that's my fault
I don't feel it though
Were just the common threshold
And its been years since I wore my welcome away
I got no idea why I'm afraid, 'not to stay'
I'll never get the exaltation
Of you
If I lie down with your expectation
Of me
Like the arrow in the soldier's eye
The point won't hurt
If something was never there
You can't take back what you lose
That's why I swear to use
Every last part of you
So will you take this
For what it is
And just leave it be
Or will you bleed
Until there's no fight left
Could you except the fate
Or do you still believe in closure
I'll never understand the concept
something i can accept
Will this thread
hold
Hold our heads
From falling away from the ground
Cause after all
these are our worst fears
We haven't seen the evidence of the ninth
For twelve years