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ahfei

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I'm currently making a manga but only have 7 pages so far. Its a One Piece style manga called "ZeroFly". My plan is 300+ chapters. I will post it when I fininshed 4 chapters, for a reason(spoiler).

I even wrote a theme song for it called "Let It Fly".

Here's the 7 pages without any captions.















Any comments are more than welcomed. Now I really need a scanner cause i dont have one. Feel free to donate though. hehe. PM me.

Sorry if the sizes are too big.
 
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Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

I like it. A couple of things bother me though. The people look kinda stiff and a lot of them are leaning to the left when they should just be standing up straight.
 

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Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

Fairly good concept,i like how you screen tone and how you shade ,but the art needs work.
 

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Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

I like your artwork, its so cute. Keep it up. :D
 

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Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

keep up with it.i'm been doing my own mangas too and you have to go back and change things till there just right. keep up the good work.
 

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Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

It's interesting i like the idea
 
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