Airy Releaseshttps://mangahelpers.com/t/airy/rss2006-02-24T19:36:47+00:00/favicon.icoMangaHelpers Adminsadmin@mangahelpers.comhttps://mangahelpers.com/t/airy/releases/3034Translation: Bleach 2162006-02-24T19:36:47+00:00Airyadmin@mangahelpers.comHiya! This is my very first post on this forum, so I hope I get this right.
This is my version of chapter 216. Not for Scanlation. I took liberties with Hiyori's thick accent in an effort to make it pronounced and notable, but I feel I've done badly in that area. I would greatly appreciate any feedback from fellow Bleach translators.
Originally posted yesterday on the LiveJournal community "soul_society" under my username "rukia."
Page 2 ...何をビビってんねん。面を持っとるから『仮面の軍勢』言うねんぞ。虚化ぐらいするわい。ビビんな一護。うちは真子みたァに甘ないで。ビビリよる前に虚化せんと... Hiyori: ...What'cha so scared of? We call ourselves "Visored" 'cause we carry around masks. (1) Turnin' into a Hollow ain't that tough. Don't be scared, Ichigo. I ain't gonna be no where near as easy on ya as Shinji was, so if ya get all scared before ya go turnin' Hollow -
Page 3 あんた Hiyori: you -
Page 4 ほんまに死ぬで Hiyori: are seriously gonna wind up dead.
Page 5 216. The Supression of Darkness
Page 6 だいじょうぶ?ハッちん。 Short Stuff: Are you doing alright, Hacchin? Not 大丈夫デス... Hacchi: NOT alright... (2)
Page 7 はっ　はっ　はっ　...ぐ...ッ... Ichigo: Haah Haah Haah ...guhh... ...ええ加減にせえよ。まだわかれへんのか。 Hiyori: ...Gimme a break. Ya still don' get it yet?
Page 8 ビビんな言うてるやろ、一護。 Hiyori: I told ya not ta be scared, Ichigo. ...ビビってねえよ。 Ichigo: ...I'm not afraid. ...ええこと教えたるわ。卍解しィ。 Hiyori: ...Lemme teach ya somethin' good. Use the Bankai. ...うるせえ。 Ichigo: ...Shut up. わかってるで。うちみたァに強いのと戦うてる時に卍解なんかしたら、アッという間に虚を抑え切れんようになる思てビビってんやろ。 Hiyori: I know all 'bout it. If ya use the Bankai while goin' up against someone strong like me, yer scared of the Hollow breakin' free before ya can do a single thing. ...うるせえっつッてんだ! Ichigo: ...I said shut the hell up!
Page 9 ハゲが。オマエ見とるとハラ立つねん。ビクビクビクビクしゃーがって!ええわ、もう。そないイヤなら好きにしィ。卍解も虚化もせんでええ。オマエ殺して、終いわ。 Hiyori: Fool! (3) Lookin' at you really makes my guts boil! Acting so freakin' ner-ner-nervous! Fine, whatever. If yer so against it, then do whatever the hell ya want! Don't ya bother with usin' the Bankai or goin' Hollow! I'm gonna kill you and end this.
Page 10 考えるんだ。こいつは何で虚化しても正気でいられる!?こいつはどうやって仮面を着け外ししてる!?直接戦ってるんだ。いくらでも見られる。見て、考えれば解る筈だ!!その為にここに来た!! Ichigo: I'm thinking this over. How can she stay sane even when she turns into a Hollow!? How does she pull on and take off the mask!? She's fighting me straight on. I can watch her constantly. If I watch her and think this through, I should be able to figure this out!! That's the reason why I came here!!
Page 11 卍解もしねえ。虚化もしねえ。あいつに魂を明け渡すのは　二度　と Ichigo: I won't use the Bankai. I won't turn into a Hollow either. Surrendering my soul up to that thing yet again is not -
Page 18 ___...充分や。文句無いな?ひよ里。 Shinji: ___...That's good 'nough. No more complaints, Hiyori?
Page 19 ...オマエもよう解ったやろ、一護。オマエの虚は頭やら体やらで考えたぐらいで押さえ込めるような代物やない言うことが。合格や。虚の抑え方、魂の芯まで叩っ込んだるわ。 Shinji: ...Got it now, Ichigo? You've figured out that your Hollow ain't the sorta pushover you can supress just by thinkin' with your mind or body. (4) You pass the test. Learnin' how to supress the Hollow is somethin' we're gonna pound right into the core of your soul.
(1) "Visored" = "Legion of Masks." It should be noted that the spelling "Vaizard" and "Vizard" are also used in various translations of the word.
(2) "NOT" = English "not." Just add that to list of oddities in Hacchi's speech pattern.
(3) Lit. "baldy" She referred to Shinji this way in the past as well. I'm not sure of the best way to translate this comment because A) I could be misinterpretating what she means by that, B) she is just using it as a general insult with very little meaning behind it, or C) she knows something we don't and seriously thinks that Ichigo and Shinji wear wigs. I can only conclude one thing: I really need to study more Kansai.
(4) Hirako says "shiromono," but I'm having a hard time trying to define that. I settled with "thing," but that doesn't seem enough. Changed to "lightweight"
EDIT: Added in the Japanese script as well. EDIT2: Changes made to the terms "vaizard" and "thing."