Mao Marimo Ch 3

Format:

***Page #
P# - Panel #
B# - Bubble #
SFX - Sound effects
Lit: - Literally what was said, in case I rewrote it or had to make it more meaningful in English

I tend to self-edit my translations as I go along, so the only real editing that is required will probably be rephrasings to make it sound better.

***Page 1 - Title Page

Black Chapter # Box - Chapter 3 - Akoya and Mao

Overlay - The Mao that became a girl and the tomboy Akoya. The memory of a promise.


***Page 2

Right side box - Mao and Ako, the memory of the twin older sister and younger brother

P1 B1 - Wait for meeee~ Ako-chaaaan!
B2 - Mao--- Hurry up---

P2 SFX - patan - plop

P3 B1 - Ah...
B2 - Oooh...

P4 B1 - Uwaaaaah!
B2- Can't be... Read More " "

Mao Marimo Ch 2

Format:

***Page #
P# - Panel #
B# - Bubble #
SFX - Sound effects
Lit: - Literally what was said, in case I rewrote it

I tend to self-edit my translations as I go along, so the only real editing that is required will probably be rephrasings to make it sound better.

Also, first translation, though I had someone go over certain parts of it to be sure.

***Page 1 (Title Page)

Overlay - This place is my town (where others reside).


***Page 2

P3 B1 - Mao turned into
B2 - a girl!


***Page 3

P1 B1 - What the hell is going on here...

P2 B1 - Damnit
SFX - Keho keho geho - coughing

P3 SFX - kiiiiin - bell ringing
B1 - Stand up!
B2 - Bow!

P4 SFX - zawa zawa - excited chatter

P5 B1 - Hey Mao-kun, Jiu ran off... Read More " "