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Format:
***Page # P# - Panel # B# - Bubble # SFX - Sound effects Lit: - Literally what was said, in case I rewrote it or had to make it more meaningful in English
I tend to self-edit my translations as I go along, so the only real editing that is required will probably be rephrasings to make it sound better.
***Page 1 - Title Page
Black Chapter # Box - Chapter 3 - Akoya and Mao
Overlay - The Mao that became a girl and the tomboy Akoya. The memory of a promise.
***Page 2
Right side box - Mao and Ako, the memory of the twin older sister and younger brother
P4 B1 - Wake up, Kagu-chaaan~ B2 - You've got a student council officer's meeting this morning, right?
P5 B1 - Maoooo~ I'm sleeepy~ B2 - Help me change~ B3 - Jeeez~ Fine, I'll help out~
P6 SFX top - dadadada - running SFX door lock - gacha - unlock
***Page 6
P2 B1 - What's wrong, Ako-chan? B2 - Wha-What are you doing! B3 - Isn't doing this really embarrasing, Mao!!
P3 B1 - Huh? Why? We're sisters. B2 - All girls here B3 - No... but...
Profile gap - Noto Mao - 1st Year High School Student. Became a girl for certain reasons. The details are a mystery.
***Page 7
P1 B1 - Sisters. B2 - Girls.
Profile Gap - Noto Akoya - 1st Year High School Student - Third sister in the Noto household. Mao's twin older sister.
P3 B1 - ... B2 - Pardon my intrusion
P4 SFX - Patan - door shutting B1 - What's wrong with Ako-chan? B2 - Nothing, just the usual.
Profile gap - Noto Kaguya - 2nd Year High School Student. Second daughter in the Noto household.
P5 B1 - Puberty. B2 - Eh? Really?
P6 B1 - ... B2 - I see-- That's what it was-- SFX - fu - heh
***Page 8
P5 SFX - pishan - slam
***Page 9
P1 B1 - It really does take time for a girl to prepare B2 - I need to get used to this quickly
P2 B1 - I wonder if Ako-chan doesn't like this appearance B2 - Even though I'd like her to teach me more things about being a girl
P3 B1 - ... Well, Ako-chan has never... B2 - really acted much like a girl...
P4 B1 - Just kidding. Ako-chan will get really angry again B2 - I'm leaving! (Lit: Ittekimasu)
***Page 10
P1 B1 - Thanks for waiting for me! B2 - Huh? Where's Ako-chan? B3 - She left early today B4 - Mao, please get along with Ako-chan
P2 B1 - Yep, but Ako-chan has... B2 - been acting kinda strange recently...
P3 B1a - Is this also... B1a - because of puberty? B2 - ?
P4 B1 - Mao-chan!! B2a - Eh? What? B2b - What is it, Saku-neesan!
***Page 11
P1 B1 - What is "pu-ber-ty"? (Note: She's spelling it out in kana (phonetic symbols) instead of kanji here, indicating she really doesn't know since she's just putting letters together.) B2 - Huh...?
P2 B1 - I guess it's still too early for Nee-san B2 - Uh, uhhhhm... B3a - Puberty is.... B3b - Uhhhm...
P3 B1 - ... What is it? B2 - Ka-Kagu-chan! B3 - Is it possibly something that's embarrasing not to know!? B4 - ...
Profile Gap - Noto Sakuya - Eldest daughter in the Noto household. Takes care of the house.
***Page 12
P2 B1 - Aaah, crap, stop crying
P3 B1 - If you keep acting like a crybaby, you can't be a groom, and no bride will come to you!
P4 B1 - ... SFX - gushu gushu - (Not sure, would make sense if it's tears getting ready to flow) B2 - A bride... won't come... B3 - ...
***Page 13
P1 B1 - Well, when that happens B2a - it can't be helped so Ako B2b - will marry Mao.
P2 SFX - chira - glance
P3 B1 - What the heck! B2 - Don't tell me you don't like that, Mao... SFX - furu furu - shaking head back and forth B3 - Nope!
P4 B1 - Because I really B2 - love Ako-chan!
P5 SFX - kyu in <3 - heart squeeze
P6 B1 - But getting married is impossible. B2 - Eh? But why? B3 - Because siblings can't get married
P4 B1 - If you're looking for Mao, she isn't here.
P5 B1 - What? What is it?
Profile gap - Irie Jiu - Classmate of Mao and Akoya.
P6 B1 - Today, I've got some business with you!! B2 - I wanted to talk to you somewhere where Mao isn't around!! (Lit: I have something to talk about with you in a place where Mao isn't around!!)
P7 B1 - !!
***Page 16
P1 B1 - Well I'm sorry!! B2 - That's right! Everything is my fault!!
P2 B1 - !? B2 - ... What do you mean?
P3 B1a - But... Mao told you about it... B1b - !? B2 - ... I see B3 - That guy Mao wouldn't say anything...
P4 B1 - It looks like asking you about it really would be the fastest way to go. B2 - !!
***Page 17
P1 SFX - Ba - sudden turning
P2 B1 - Hold on! B2 - You running away!?
P3 B1 - You're annoying, let go! B2 - Listen to me! (I'm iffy here, because the same kanji can be used to ask something or to hear something)
P6 B1 - Heeeeeey!
***Page 18
P1 B1 - Jiu! B2 - Mao... B3 - You're absolutely not allowed to make Ako-chan cry! SFX - Za - suddenly appear
P2 B1 - I.. I wasn't doing anything...
P3 SFX above Mao - pun pun - angry, like in a puffy cheeks kinda way SFX from ako-chan - pu - restrained laughter
P4 B1 - Huh? What? Why's Ako-chan laughing? B2a - Sorry... it's just that, that crybaby Mao... B2b - to talk about not crying... SFX next to Akoya - kukuku - more restrained laughter B3 - Eh? Why are you bringing up something old like that!?
Floating text block 1 - Memories carefully locked away inside the heart
Floating text block 2 - Though they sparkle so brightly
Floating text block 3 - Why do they inevitably become so painful?
Floating text block 4 - They are different from the now that is this instant
Floating text block 5 - For they are moments frozen in time
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Revisions: 1/4/11 3:04PM MST - Changed the ending passages after consulting with a more experienced friend.https://mangahelpers.com/t/circularlogic/releases/26934Translation: Mao Marimo 22011-01-01T06:15:38+00:00CircularLogicadmin@mangahelpers.comMao Marimo Ch 2
Format:
***Page # P# - Panel # B# - Bubble # SFX - Sound effects Lit: - Literally what was said, in case I rewrote it
I tend to self-edit my translations as I go along, so the only real editing that is required will probably be rephrasings to make it sound better.
Also, first translation, though I had someone go over certain parts of it to be sure.
***Page 1 (Title Page)
Overlay - This place is my town (where others reside).
***Page 2
P3 B1 - Mao turned into B2 - a girl!
***Page 3
P1 B1 - What the hell is going on here...
P2 B1 - Damnit SFX - Keho keho geho - coughing
P3 SFX - kiiiiin - bell ringing B1 - Stand up! B2 - Bow!
P4 SFX - zawa zawa - excited chatter
P5 B1 - Hey Mao-kun, Jiu ran off with you in a hurry. You alright? B2 - That's not right! B3 - It should be Mao-chan now, right?
***Page 4
P1 B1 - Either way is fine by me! B2 - Use whatever you'd like!
Profile gap - Noto Mao - 1st Year High School Student. Became a girl for certain reasons. The details are a mystery.
P2 SFX - Chatter
P4 B1a - Hey Mao! B1b - You know... about becoming a girl... B2 - For example... that place too... B3 - That place?
P5 B1 - Ah! Yep! B2 - I'm 100% girl B3 - Seriously!? B4 - Awesome! It's like a dream! Girl in background - Guy's are so...
***Page 5
P1 B1 - Ack! B2 - Ugh!
P2 B1 - That hurt. What do you think you're doing... B2 - Ako-chan!
P3 SFX - Zuoooooo - Pissed aura
P4 B1 - You idiots, if you guys are making Mao listen to such garbage... B2 - I'll let you all see a dream for all eternity! B3 - Now now, Ako-chan, we can just leave it at that SFX next to Ako - baki boki - knuckles cracking SFX near the guys - gata gata - shivering
Profile gap - Noto Akoya - 1st Year High School Student - Third sister in the Noto household. Mao's twin older sister.
P5 B1 - You don't need to stand up for these guys, Mao! (Lit: Stop saying unnecssary things, Mao!) B2 - Next period is music class, right? Hurry up and go! B3 - Okay
P6 B1 - ... Jeez, even though they're twins, they're nothing alike... B2 - You didn't know? They're fraternal twins, so even if they don't act the same, it's not really strange or anything. SFX - Chi, chi. (kinda like tsking, to indicate he should have known that)
***Page 6
P1 B1 - Right? B2 - Yep! B3 - ...
P6 - Kiiin kooon kaaan - bell ringing to end the day
***Page 7
P1 B1 - Ako-chan B2 - There's someplace I want to stop by first, so go ahead and head home before me.
P2 B1 - ...Fine. B2 - ...
P3 B1 - Ako-chan B2 - ?
P4 B1 - I really am alright. B2 - So, Ako-chan should cheer up, too! (Lit: So, Ako-chan should also hurry up and return [to her previous cheerfulness] B3 - !!
***Page 8
P1 B1 - I-I'm doing just fine! B2a - That's right, that's the way! B2b - That's the usual energetic you! B3 - I told you, nothing's wrong!
P2 B1 - Okay, okay B2 - Well then, seeya at home! B3 - Jeez!
P3 B1 - ... B2 - What the heck... Mao is such... (I'm stretching this portion because I can't really translate "Mao no kuse ni..." into something recognizable) B3 - ...an idiot...
P1 B1 - She had something to do. B2 - She really does keep busy, doesn't she. B3 - Something like that. (Lit: Well, yeah)
P2 B1 - ... B2 - About that thing, you haven't told her yet? B3 - !
Profile gap - Noto Kaguya - 2nd Year High School Student. Second daughter in the Noto household.
P3 B1 - O-Of course not! B2 - I'm all sweaty, so I'm going to take a shower!
P4 B1 - ... Ako-chan looked kinda angry just now. B2 - She really is angry.
P5 B1 - To me... SFX - Shaaaaaaa - Shower running
Profile gap - Noto Sakuya - Eldest daughter in the Noto household. Takes care of the house.
***Page 10
P1 B1 - ... You idiot... B2 - How can you keep smiling like that.
P3 SFX - saaaa - more shower
P4 B1 - .... can't go back...
P5 B1 - Even though everything... B2 - is all my fault...
***Page 11
P2 B1 - Unume-sama!
P3 B1 - Mao-chan SFX - peko - bowing
Profile gap - Unume - Miko (Shrine Maiden) of the Otama Shrine. Believes that Mao's situation is a mark from the guardian spirit,
P4 B1 - You came. B2 - Yes!
***Page 12
Profile gap - Irie Jiu - Classmate of Mao and Akoya.
P2 B1 - I knew you'd be here B2 - Mao, huh? B3 - I didn't really get a chance to talk to you today. B3 Small text - ... and Jiu didn't come back...
(I'm fudging panel three a bit because there's a kanji combination I can't seem to read well) P3 B1 - Here! I brought some leftover bread you can split up with them! B2 - Nice, they'll really like that stuff. (Lit: Oh, such things will be really effective with them.)
P4 B1 - Hey now, no need to rush now! There's plenty to go around. B2a - Huh? You gotter bigger again B2b - Jeez, are you properly giving thanks to Unume-sama?
P5 B1 - Of course I have. You're nosy.
***Page 13
P1 B1 - Ah, Unume-sama! SFX - bi tsu - small fright
P2 B1 - Mao-chan, you're looking upbeat, huh? B2 - Did anyone say anything to you? B3 - Nope, everything went fine
P3 B1 - Jiu-kun, please protect Mao-chan. B2 - After all, all of this is the will of the guardian spirit. B3 - Uh, Yes! SFX - gusu - giggle
P5 B1 - It's because Jiu loves Unume-sama. Bag - (I think it's cat litter)
***Page 14
P1 B1 - Huuuh? What are you talking about? That person ain't like that. B2 - Not very honest, are you? You're always like that SFX - yo - heaving the bag
P2 B1 - You sorta wanted to become a veterinarian, right? B2 - You never come to class and you're always studying in secret. That's kind of strange. SFX - yoro - stagger
P3 B1 - W-Why do you know about that!? B2 - Cause we're best friends! B3 - If it's about Jiu, I know everything! (Lit: If it's about Jiu, no matter what the outlook is!)
P4 B1 - You can't tell anyone about that! B2 - Absolutely no one! B3 - Eh?
P5 B1 - Wah! B2 - Idiot! Whare you are doing? SFX - dosha - I think it's the dropping of the bag SFX - zaza - rustling of stones
***Page 15
P1 B1 - Haha, since I'm a girl now, I'm not as strong anymore.
P2 SFX - fuwa funi - soft and light sensation
P3 SFX - pito - gentle touching P3 SFX - sawa - more touching :P
P5 B1 - Waaah! SFX - Bah! - Shock
P6 SFX - Dosa - fell down B1 - Ouch! (Or "Ow!")
***Page 16
P1 B1 - S-stop being a wuss! (Lit: Don't be delicate/weak.) SFX - pori pori - rub rub
P2 B1 - I can't help it! B2a - I'm a girl now... B2b - Jeez.
P3 B1 - ...
P4 B1 - ...Hey, how did you become a girl? B2 - Is... there no way to go back...? To a guy... B3 - But... it's the will of the spirits...
***Page 17
P1 B1 - It's not about that. I'm asking about what happened. B2 - I'm not telling Jiu... cause you'll get angry. B3 - I'm not gonna be angry, so tell me.
P2 B1 - No way~ B2 - I told you already, I know everything about Jiu!
P3 B1 - It's just... I don't know... B2 - I wonder if I can really go back to being a guy... B3 - It feels kind of like that...
P5 B1 - That's it!? B2- Are you really okay with that!? SFX - kyoton - dumbfounded, dazed
***Page 18
P1 B1 - It's fine, I'm me after all.
P3 B1 - Ah, oh no! B2 - I need to hurry back home and start preparing for dinner!
P4 B1 - ... Don't you have your older sisters to help with that? B2 - If I'm not around, it'll be troublesome for everybody
P5 B1 - Noooo~ The meat~ Above Ako-chan - Not again... B2 - Mao... please hurry back...
***Page 19
P1 B1 - Well then, Jiu! B2 - See you tomorrow! SFX - shubo - flipping lighter on B3 - Yep
P3 B1 - After all, you're not really inhaling anything B2 - You're just holding it in your mouth~
P4 SFX - geho geho geho - cough hack spit :P
P5 B1 - Shut up, you! Floating text - How'd you know that!!
***Page 20
P1 B1 - There's no way... B2 - you can just be fine like that. Floating text block 1 - Kindness can be a cruel thing at times, can't it? Perhaps it's because some people don't know true kindness. Floating text block 2 - Once we overcome our cruel nature, as well, we'll be able to show kindness to others.
Right bottom box - Blessed by fate, a friend comes to be earnest for her. With only that... Next issue!