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Translation: Himawari Youchien Monogatari Aiko Desho! 23

2008-12-30T12:22:30+00:00

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Chapter 23
VS the beloved one

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Kisaragi : I'm telling you, it's hot, don't get too close to me // Hey !

Kagurazaka : Why don't you learn from ronin, he hasn't complaint for a little bit
Suimei : .... Why can't she let me go .... ?
TN : Ronin is a student who failed to get into a university

Suimei : Wait .... // Such a heat in this season ... // What would I become if the summer reaches its peak !?

Aiko : Onii-chan, is it hot ? // < The sweat is drenching you >
Suimei : I'm totally fine
Kagurazaka :
Kisaragi :

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Suimei : Sono-chan ?

Sono :You must have a hard time, Suimei-sensei

Suimei : Thank you Sono-chan //
Sono : You are welcome
Aiko : !

Aiko : Let Aiko wipe your sweat too
Suimei : Awa wa wa wa
Kisaragi :

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Fumi : Children, get ready to go home

Children : Okay~~ !
Fumi : Hey !

Fumi / Sono : My my my

Sono :

Sono : Though they've been told to clean up so many times already // They always leave everything in mess after the finished playing

Kisaragi :

Kagurazaka : Good job, Sono-chan
Sono : No no, it's nothing
Kisaragi : <..... Youu~>

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Chitan's mother : Good afternoon
Fumi : Today, Chitan-chan is the first to be picked up
Kisaragi : Ah, Chitan !
Chitan :

Kisaragi :

Hana : Excuse me
Kisaragi :
Kagurazaka : ..... Ronin, someone at front, go meet her

Sono : It's not polite to make someone waits
Suimei : Okay okay

Aiko : It's not polite to make someone waits
Suimei : Yeah yeah yeah

Hana : Excuse me
Suimei : Yeah, I'm coming

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Suimei : //

Hana : Good afternoon, I'm here to pick my sister up
Suimei : Aa~~~

Chitan's mother : Hee~, you are picking up your sister ?
Hana : //

Suimei : So, who is your sister ?
Hana : Ah ... I'm sorry ... uhm ....

Sono : Aahh~ !

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Atsushi : Don't go away

Suimei : This little brat again

Hana : What do you think you are doing to Sono-chan !? //

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Sono : Hana-chan

Sono : Why are you here ?
Hana : Mother said she's going to come home late
Sono : I see

Sono : Oh yeah, she is Aiko-chan and he is Suimei-sensei

Hana : ...... I already thought so, so you are a teacher ?
Suimei : Yes, I am .......

Hana :
Sono :

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Hana : I mean, you are being to clingy with one kid

Suimei : ....... heh ?

Hana : Well, that's what I thought // You are a teacher but you hang around only with one kid // That's quite WEIRD

Hana : Sono-chan lets change your clothes
Sono : Yup

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Suimei : .... So I'm weird !

Suimei : ... Someone whom I met for the first time said so, maybe I'm really weird
Aiko : Onii-chan
Suimei : ..... Though I don't think that I'm weird
Aiko : Onii-chan

Aiko : Onii-chan

Suimei : What ... what is it ?

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Aiko : ..... Is Aiko weird ?

Suimei : No ... she didn't say that to you

Suimei : That's right, being yearned by a kid is not weird

Kisaragi : Hey ! ronin ! will you make Aiko-chan change her clothes

Suimei : I'm not weird, I'm not weird

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Hana : // Lets take your clothes off // // Sono-chan, say banzai

Kisaragi : What a good older sister she is
Fumi : Though Sono-chan is always independent, but in front of her sister she still becomes a spoiled child

Hana : Good, next is your coat

Hana : ..... ?

Hana : Sono-chan ?

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Hana : C'mon, spread your arms

Hana : Gezz~, Sono-chan it's okay, I'll do it later
Sono : Hana-chan, can you leave me alone ?

Hana : Eh ... ?

Sono : I'll do it myself, so leave me

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Aiko : Onii-chan, take it off

Hana :

Hana : ... Then I'll wait over there ... will you be all right?
Aiko : //

Sono : I'll be fine, I can finish it myself

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Suimei : Wow ~, Sono-chan is so a firm girl, she can do everything by herself

Suimei : She can change her clothes alone // Great isn't she ?

Suimei : // Say banzai

Aiko : Aiko can also change alone
Suimei : Is that so ?

Aiko : Just leave me !

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Suimei : < ...... Is she angry ?>

Hana : Suimei-san, I see that you are very close to her

Suimei : Very close ... well, how should I put it ...
Hana : You are a ronin, right ?

Suimei : // Where did you heard that ?
Hana : You must have a lot of free time to spend

Suimei : ......

Suimei : // You are just being sulky because Sono-chan refused your help
[SFX] : twitch

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Suimei : What kind of big sister would get irritated because her yourger sister is becoming matured ?

Hana : I don't want to be told by a ronin who is ogling for a kindergartener !

Suimei : // <*sob* *sob* *sob*>

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Aiko : Don't pick on onii-chan !!

Hana : It's hot

Hana :
Aiko : Are you okay, onii-chan ?

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Aiko : Onii-chan // What's wrong ?

Aiko : Jeezz~

Suimei : Ah

Aiko : Onii-chan ?

Suimei : .... Aiko-chan

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Suimei : Wow~, you can change your clothes alone

Suimei : You are good, Aiko-chan
Aiko : Te he

Hana : ..... He still want to fight

Suimei : Huh ? Aiko-chan, you forgot your tie

Hana : Speaking of which //

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Kisaragi :
Sono :

Sono : Hana-chan, thank you for waiting

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Hana : You are great // You have done everything by yourselves

Sono : Really ?

Hana : Sono-chan ?

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Sono : I'm sorry about earlier, Hana-chan

Hana : ..... Don't mind it, I'm fine !
Sono : Glad to hear that

Hana : ....... What is it ?
Suimei : Nothing

Suimei : Good isn't it Hana-chan

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Suimei : You always wanted to be praised by your sister, right !?

Hana : Ronin ! You ....

Hana : Sono-chan

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Hana : Sono-chan is the best !
Sono : He he he
Hana : You are so pretty, Sono-chan
Sono : Aww~

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Sono : See you

Suimei : Don't you forget anything ? //
Hana :
Sono : Ah !

Sono : Hana-chan, where is your bag ?
Hana : Heh .... !

Sono : Sono will take it for you

Suimei : It seems that Sono-chan pays a better attention to things than you

Sono : Hana-chan, here
Hana : Thank you .....

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Suimei : <*giggle*>

Hana : See you LOLICON-SENSEI !

Aiko :
[SFX] : <*spurt*> // Lolicon-sensei

Kagurazaka : .... What happenend to you, ronin ?
Aiko : I don't know either

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited Omake 4

2008-12-26T23:59:38+00:00
The second and last part of the omake
Special thanks to raph986 for providing me the RAW

I wish a merry christmas to everyone who celebrates (sorry, a little bit late)
and a happy new year to you all

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Girl : Andou-san~, what's wrong ? // Why did you lock the door, is everything okay !?
Soako : I .... I'm fine, don't worry .... // Just let me have some rest in this prep room until the club is over

[Soako] : My name is Andou Soako (14) // 2nd year middle school, clumsy girl, a member of art club and now I'm soaking wet ..... what should I do ?
Narrator : For details, please read Hatsukoi Limited Vol. 1 - 3
Last Chapter

Soako : ~~~hatshuu

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Soako : Right now, I should hurry and dry my clothes ! // I can't show myself in front of everyone like this ....

Soako : Hmm .... seems that there is still some gas left // Lets turn this thing first on and hang my clothes near it ....

Soako : ..... But I don't wear anything underneath // Ah ..... // If I take my uniform off, I'll be completely naked ....

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Soako : Being naked in school is really absurd ! It is absolutely abnormal !! // But .. but it will only take a while until my clothes are dry ! just a little while ....

Soako : There is nothing to worry about !! The glass on the door is covered with a poster ! // I have locked the door, now just close the curtain and I'll be fine ....

Girl1 : Soako-chan // Let us know if you need something okay
Girl2 : I'm sure she'll come out after her clothes are dry !

[Soako] : I'm doing this though everyone is still there beyond this wall // I ... I ....

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[Soako] : I'm indeed abnormal ....

Soako : I .. I got to hurry // I need to dry my uniform quick ...

Soako : I can't stay calm, my heart keeps beating fast ... // After my clothes are dry, I'll go home immediately and take a rest ...

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Soako : Lots of things happened today .... // I feel so tired ....

Mamoru : I told you already, I'll open the door alone later !!

Chikura : But she's been there for a long time already, maybe something is happening to her ....
Mamoru : Don't don't don't - don't worry !! I know how to perform first aid !!! // You can go home now !!

Girl : Chikura-chan, c'mon lets go, just leave everything to Zaitsu-kun
Chikura : ........

Chikura : ..... Zaitsu-kun, you are a gentleman, right !!? //
Girl : ?
Mamoru : Uh

Mamoru : That's right .... except me, maybe no one else know that Andou-san doesn't wear any bra .... // Uaa~ // And here I am, alone, volunteering myself in order to protect her shameful secret from the other members

Mamoru : But I am a gentleman !!

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Mamoru : And that's why ... ! // A - Andou-san, I'm going to open the door ....

Soako : KYAAAAA !!!
Mamoru : Ah it's .. it's okay, it's okay !

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Mamoru : Look, I can't see anything at this moment !

Mamoru : The other members have gone home already ... // Take your time to calm down and lets go home, Andou-san

Mamoru : I - I'll leave you a towel here ... //
Soako : Ah uh okay .... //
[Soako] : At that time ....

[Soako] : I fell in love to someone for the first time
Soako : Does this mean that he is aware that I don't put any underwear on me ... !?

Ayumi : Hey, the story is already complicated enough
Koyoi : ha ha ha

Limited Girl (FIN)

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I want to take this opportunity to thank you for reading Hatsukoi Limited Vol. 4.
Since this is the last volume, I want to give you some afterwords.

The story
Talking about the story, most of the stories in this manga are about brothers and sisters. Well, maybe I was a little bit carried by my first plan of making a manga about siblings. That plan was sadly rejected. If I think over about it again, it was obvious that the plan got rejected.
So, my manager got somehow the idea of making this manga into a compilation of short stories. The fruit of the thought that we put together was Hatsukoi Limited. The serialization of this manga wasn't very long though. The following is some review about the characters.

Arihara Ayumi
She appeared in the first chapter already. Actually I wanted to make the story to be focused on her. And Yuuji, her brother, was planned to be the main character (Changing the story into girl's point of view was a suggestion from my manager).
Originally, I was thinking about a love-comedy story inside a family.

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Name : Arihara Ayumi
Birthday : 3rd July
Blood type : O
Hobby : Thinking about her future together with Zaitsu-kun
Favorite food : Yakiniku

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However it ended to become a school-life story. Though the manga has been altered into this (?), for me, the main characters are still Arihara siblings. I don't care what the others may say !. I love self centered girl, a girl who act first before she thinks, that's why drawing Ayumi was a great fun for me.

Bessho Koyoi
I have mentioned earlier that I wanted to write a manga about siblings. Koyoi is the second character who came to my mind and that's why her initial also begins with "B". By the way, during the announcement of the serialization of this manga, the character design of Koyoi and Chikura-chan hasn't had been completed yet. At first, I wanted to make her to have long hair and the tip of it is curly with a flat noodle - like shape (TN: Maybe like Hiro in Hidamari Sketch). Due to lack of popularity, my manager one sidedly changed the design and because of that I was once fell out of love with her (Oi !). As I continued to draw her, her stupidity came more and more on surface (In the new year - chapter in 2nd Volume, her stupidity came into perfection). After turning into her third character, she is the one I like the most within this manga.

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Name : Bessho Koyoi
Birthday : 25th October
Blood Type : O
Specialty : Cooking
Favorite food : Dried horse mackerel

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Chikura Nao
Chikura-chan, that's how I call her since the first time I begun to draw her. She is a quiet girl, diligent and also rather plain. That part of her seems to make her pretty popular. Will she always keep her feeling for her Renjou-sempai in her heart ? Or will she finally accept Sogabe-kun's feeling ? I'm afraid the answer will remain a mistery forever. Speaking of Chikura-chan, she also has a brother. Actually I already have finished the main plot regarding him. However, my current manager insisted "Chikura-chan must come from a normal family !" and therefore my plot of making them to have a rich family background was rejected. Well, that was just a stupid matter, so I think it was the right thing not to write a story about him, yup.

Dobashi Rika
Also her, I call her "Doba-chan" since the beginning. My plan at first was to make this girl a rough girl, a tomboy and has a lively atmosphere around her. And then I wanted to give the impression "This type of girl will unexpectedly make the fastest progress" and she ended up to have a boyfriend at the first shot. But even so, Doba and Terai are lacking of communication that often lead into a crisis between them.

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Name : Chikura Nao
Birthday : 30th December
Blood Type : A
Hobbies : Reading, Painting
Favorite food : Ice Cream

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Will this crisis get worse and become a disaster !? I was intending to write some episodes about that kind of critical situation ! seriously. Well, it's already over and I want now to hear what you all are thinking about their relationship. If possible, please make Terai become a stronger man ....

Enomoto Kei
Drawing her hair is so tiresome !! Why did I give her such a hairstyle !? But curly hair was popular, wasn't it !? (Year 2007). That is my impression about Enomoto-san.
"She is beautiful and she will fall in love with a boy who doesn't have any good looking side at all", from this basic idea, the girl was born. But still, at the time we reached the story about Kusuda in the second chapter, I didn't really feel like making Kusuda to be her love partner. I just got remembered about that time (Though I actually don't want to look back at my old manuscript). I'm now regretting that I drew him with such an ugly face. If I have the opportunity to draw his adult form, I swear that I will draw him as a tall young man with a long hair and he has the eyes that make him look like a bad person. Enomoto-san will then fall more and more in love with Kusuda. That kind of future is what I'm hoping from them.

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Name : Dobashi Rika
Birthday : 7th June
Blood type : A
Speciality : Sport generally
Favorite food : Curry Rice

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Enomoto Yuu
Next is the high schoolers to have their turn. She is Kei's older sister, Yuu. The girl was created to have a love affair with her teacher. However, it will be only her teacher who gets madly in love with her. This plan was also rejected and only her character remains. She appeared as a little devil who makes every type of men fall madly in love with her. Sadly, she didn't get any role anymore after the third chapter and became a side character only. She is the kind of girl whom I really like to draw a lot. If someday Yuu appears again with a different name in my other manga, please don't think "Ah ! She is just her copy !!". By the way, Enomoto sisters are a quarter englander, their grandmother come from England. Well, it's not really that important.

Watase Meguru
Among the 8 girls-main-characters, she is the last one I created. The person she loves looks her as his rival. Her situation is rather complex but all of the sudden she could come back to her old daily life, a life with her swimsuit on.

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Name : Enomoto Kei
Birthday : 1st August
Blood type : A
Speciality : Handicrafts
Favorite food : Natto

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I was thinking that maybe her story could become a separate serialization as a sports-love-comedy story ? Now that the manga turned out to be like this, in my heart I kinda feel like a waste that I have included her in the story. I made her become the class representator and also the manager of swimming club, but I didn't have the chance to draw her much (*sob* *sob*). At first, I was intending to draw her Takei-sempai like a normal sportsman, but my current manager said "He looks better as a hot blooded and heroic character !". That's the story behind his thick eyebrow and somehow he became a favorite between the girls-assistants at my work place.

Yamaoto Misaki
It would be the best if the opened page of her love story could be closed neatly at the end of this manga. Having her love story to have such a rush end made me feel really uneasy .... right Yamamoto-san !?. Within this book, I was given the chance to make some revisions to her story with Arihara Yuuji (TN: there are 8 extra pages for chapter 31, please read below). Yamamoto is really hard to draw .... in many aspects. Beside her, Sogabe-kun is also as hard to draw as her. Their personality, their hair, Yamamoto-san and Sogabe are in general very hard to draw ! (What's with all the complains !?). To be viewed as whole, I think Yamamoto-san is very popular.

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Name : Enomoto Yuu
Birthday : 22nd February
Blood type : AB
Hobby : Observing people
Favorite food : Cheesecake

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And about Sogabe .... I believe that his popularity was rising a little bit within the last chapters !!

Fudounomiya Sumire and Kyuuma Nanoka
Sumire was actually born when I was thinking about another story. At that time, I was holding the position vice-head in the manga club. My previous and current manager seemed to have some affection for her. We made a change of plan and put her as one of the characters in Hatsukoi Limited.
Q(Kyuu)-chan is taking the role as shorty girl. At first, she was planned to have long hair but that long hair looks pretty annoying when it comes to swimming. If I make her hair short, it will overlap Chikura-chan's hair and Meguru has also short hair, and so I came up with her present hair style. For the other characters who came afterwards, there is no other way but to dispose them. I myself think that the name Nanoka suits her well. I always have trouble when I have to give a character a name, but for this girl and Meguru, I came up pretty quick to their names.

Andou Soako
She is the "Limited Girl", the girl whom I thought out as a supplement for this comic.

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Name : Watase Meguru
Birthday : 12th May
Blood type : O
Speciality : Swimming
Favorite food : Chocolate Parfait

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How many percent of the readers who keep buying this comic because of her is a secret. Basically, I like to make this kind of idiotic story and therefore drawing her was so much fun. However, it will be soon out of the border if I continue making a story about her. To end her story only in 4 chapters is maybe the right thing to do .... ha ha ha

And lastly ....
There are some characters who didn't come into scene. They are all my precious and beloved sons and daughters. There are parts of this serialization that reflect some of my incapabilities, but if reading this manga can fill your heart with joy and make you cheerful even for a little bit, that will be the greatest pleasure for me as an author.

Until next time

2008.8 Kawashita Mizuki

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Name : Yamamoto Misaki
Birthday : 28th May
Blood type : B
Hobby : Watching martial arts - show
Favorite food : Yakiniku

Chapter 31, extra pages (Replace page 11 and 12 with these 8 pages)
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Yuuji : Yamamoto was always so cool, it was like she was made of steel ..... // It's so strange to see her all worked up ...

Yuuji : If you are not watching the TV, then turn it off
Ayumi : Just leave me alone, I'm thinking right now !!

Yuuji : You must be thinking about him, right !? About that Zaitsu !! //
Ayumi : Will you just be quiet ! You don't have any right to complaint !!

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Ayumi : Onii-chan, I don't think that you will understand this // How the words and actions from someone you love could make your heart jumpy

Ayumi : There are also times where I don't want to think about him .... // But I still can't help but thinking about him ..... it's because I love him

Yuuji : I see // So that how it goes ....
Ayumi : Yup, so it is
[Yuuji] : Speaking of which

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[Yuuji] : I'm always thinking about Yamamoto lately
Mother : Misaki .... ?

Mother : You see, mama has some works to do, so I will not come home again today // Papa is also still in his business trip, I'm sorry okay, you must feel lonely

Mother : But I know that you are a strong girl .....

Misaki : That's right, I have to be strong .... // Being like this is not like me at all ..... !

Misaki : ..... I already thought about it all night long

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Misaki :And I made my decision // I will keep my distance from Arihara

Meguru : Eh~~ What are you talking about !?
Yuu : But you like him, why you have to do that ? //
Misaki : I have already decided !

Yuuji : I already thought about it all night long // I'm going to seriously go for Yamamoto !
Yoshihiko : ...... There is no need for you to tell me this ....
Yuuji : But, you still like Yamamoto, am I right ?

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Yuuji : I don't want to have a bad relationship with you just because of thing like this

Yuuji : That's why I want to clear it up properly with you first
Yoshihiko : ......

Yoshihiko : It's - it's ..... it's not that I'm going to be angry because of that
Yuuji : Why are you getting away from me while you are saying that ?

Yoshihiko : It's okay ! // I mean it, it's okay .... // But promise me that you will treat Yamamoto properly, okay !

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Meguru : Ah Arihara-kun !

Meguru : Say, what did you do to Yamamoto !? // She suddenly said that she will keep her distance with you, what is happening ?
Yuuji : Haa~ ?

Yoshihiko : A - Arihara ....
Yuuji : W - wait ..... first, how about her ? where is she now !?
Meguru : Ee~ she went home already ....

Yoshihiko : Go for her, Arihara !! // I'm sure that Yamamoto-san has her own reason for this

Yuuji : Ah ... okay !

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Meguru : ........
[SFX] : Stare
Yoshihiko : W - what ?
Meguru : Well ..... Bessho-kun, I always thought that you also like Yamamoto-san ....

Yoshihiko : ha ... ha ha ha .... // // He is my best friend, isn't it my job to support his love ?
Meguru : // Is that really the truth ?

Yoshihiko : I'm telling you the truth

[SFX] : Stare
Yoshihiko : W- what now !?
Yuu : Bessho-kun, you are really a great man .....

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Yoshihiko : No ... Well ....
Yuu :
[SFX - Yuu] : Stare
Yoshihiko : Don't - don't stare at me like that ..... please ?
[SFX - Yoshihiko] : thump thump

Yuuji : Ah

Yuuji : Yamamoto ! // .... So this is your way home. I'm just heading down to the bookstrore, can we walk together 'till then ?
Misaki : !

Yuuji : Ugh
[Yuuji] : She is indeed in a bad mood .... // Is it really because something I've done ? Anyway, I need to find something to talk about ....

Translation: Himawari Youchien Monogatari Aiko Desho! 22

2008-12-21T23:37:47+00:00
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Chapter 22
Puzzle (2)

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Haru : I see, so the puzzle is crumbled // Don't cry, let's make it again with Haru-sensei

Aiko : ....... it's not about that

Aiko : This puzzle ......

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Atsushi : Good Mor~ning~~

Noboru/Kyousuke : Haru-chan, Aiko-chan, good morning
Haru : ! // Ah .... morning everyone

Atsushi :

Haru :

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Haru : Aiko-chan .....

Haru : Aiko-chan, should I help you ?

Aiko : No, it's okay // Aiko will do it ....

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Akko :
Suimei : // ... It seems that Aiko-chan is already leaving

Suimei : Haru-chan, I'm back
Haru : Suimei-san ?

Haru : Ehmm .... Do you know something about this ?
Suimei : Ah ....

Suimei : It's all crumbled

Suimei : I promised Aiko-chan, that we will continue making it together ...

Haru : ..... I see
Suimei : I haven't met her lately, by the way

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Haru : Aiko-chan was crying today when she saw this

Suimei : But it's only a puzzle ...
Haru : Maybe this puzzle means something important to Aiko-chan

Haru : She said about a promise with you, Suimei-san

Suimei : ..... Huh?

Suimei : I'm pretty sure that we have done this part before ....

Suimei : A missing part ?

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Father : Ah Ai-chan

Father : // Papa still has some holidays left, and papa has also talked with mama about making a trip //

Father : ...... Is there something with that puzzle ?
Aiko : Ah ... no, it's nothing

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Father : Ai-chan, are you okay !? //
Aiko : Phew .... // Yup .... I'm fine ....

Aiko : Waa~~

Father : ..... Should I buy you a new one ? //

Aiko : Ee ........

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Father : Ah ...... You don't want another puzzle .... // I'm sorry

Father : There was also a time when papa got a handkerchief from mama

Father : And one day, papa lent it to a friend // And then he used it to wipe the table

Father : For that guy, it was just a normal handkerchief //

Aiko : ...... Did mama get angry ?
Father : It was so scary, mama was next to papa and then mama ....

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Mother : Masaki ! You have a call !!
Father : She screamed ......

Mother :
Father :

Mother : Did papa tell you about the trip ?
Aiko : Yup

Mother : //How about if we buy some clothes tomorrow //

Mother :
Aiko :
Mother : Eh ?

Aiko : Tomorrow .... right ?

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Mother : Aiko ...... will you stop crying please // It was not papa decision to leave
Father : Ai-chan, papa want to see you're smiling when we part

Father : .... Ah that's right, Ai-chan

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Aiko : ..... papa !?

Father : I borrowed it from you and varnished a little bit // With this, you can complete your puzzle now right ?

Aiko : Thank you

Father : See you again // Ai-chan

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Aiko : Good Morning

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Haru : Good morning Aiko-chan

Aiko: Haru-chan .....
Haru : Morning

Aiko : ...... Haru-chan, look look

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Suimei : Oh // Morning Aiko-chan

Aiko : Onii-cha .......

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Aiko : Onii-chan

Suimei : // It's been long time already
Aiko : Te he he

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Boys : //

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Atsushi : Hey Suimei, you'd better play with us !
Suimei : I'm going to make a puzzle with Aiko-chan today

Aiko : ...... He remembers it
Suimei : Right ?

Aiko : Yup

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Aiko : Say, onii-chan // Did you make this all ?
Suimei : Yup, it was me

Aiko : You are great ! It must be very hard ?
Suimei : ...... Is that really a compliment ? //

Suimei : ... But it seems that one part is mising

Aiko : // Don't worry, you know what .......

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Aiko : Finished !

Boys : Have you done with the puzzle ? //

Aiko : Noo !

Boy : What's your problem !?

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Haru :

Father : With this, you can complete your puzzle now right ? //

Aiko : Yup

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Aiko : Thank you

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Translation: Hatsukoi Limited Omake 4

2008-12-21T16:52:53+00:00
The first part of the Omake. The second part will follow (Soako-chan and some words from the author about the characters).
Don't ask me when, hopefully soon.
If you want to scanlate this, please proofread first if possible.

05
The story so far

There are various types of loves. An ignored love, like Ayumi's to Zaitsu Mamoru. A rejected love, like Zaitsu Mamoru's and Bessho Yoshihiko's to Yamamoto. A love without an answer, like Zaitsu Misao's to Ayumi. A love like Kei's, though she has interest in Kusuda, for some unknown reasons she is always so harsh to him. Meguru who finally could settle her complicated love problem. Dobashi's love that goes slow but sure forward. Chikura whose love ended before it begun. Sogabe's love that couldn't make those tears stop. And Yamamoto-san who gets to know how love feels like.
Anxiety, pain, but they still keep going, reaching out their hands for hope.That is their one and momentous "First Love" afterall. Please watch how the book of love they write will end.

Love Chart:
Fill their names in the circle
Small circle : Brother / Sister
If you forget their names, this is a love chart that I made once
Love Chart

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Emergency Omake

Sumire : And regarding that // I'm planning on making a "Hatsukoi Limited - Hot Spring Trip" // But in order to make you appear in the story, I also need to invite the other boys. Hmm, let me think

Sumire : ..... // Not a chance

Mamoru : WHATT !! // Why can only the girls go !? In this manga, we have given lots of contribution !
Kusuda : Yeah, I also have done much
Sogabe : What a disappointment, right Zaitsu ... ?

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Sogabe : And therefore ... !! // We are going to secretly go there and join the girls, YEAHHH !!!
Mamoru : Se ... secretly ?

Emergency Omake to fill the empty pages !!
If it comes to hot spring, there might be a nipple slip !?
Those three boys are again, making a journey with their bikes !
A story of Delusion ! Wild Imagination !! And Rampage !!!
Kawashita Mizuki

Mamoru : I don't think that we need to do that far, it's not that I want to go to hot spring that badly
Kusuda : By the way, I heard that the high school girls in third class are also going

Mamoru : I ... I'm in !!
Sogabe : Hnn? So you decided to come along after get lured with Yamamoto-san ?
Mamoru :Exactly !!
Sogabe :

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Mamoru : In order to protect Saki-nee's naked body from being seen by you guys, I'll come with you !!
Sogabe : What's with that lame excuse ?
Kusuda :

Mamoru : I did say that I'll go with you guys ....

Mamoru : But why do we have to ride the bikes again !!? // With the train, we only need two hours to get there !
Kusuda : This is the only option we have. We don't have any tickets and neither do we have money !

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Sogabe : But ..*pant*.. there is still .. *pant*... other method than bikes .....
Kusuda : Like always, what a weak guy

Kusuda : If you feel like giving up, then think of her !! // Think of her naked body without a single thread to cover it !!

Sogabe : Chikura-san !!
Chikura : No ... nooo Sogabe-kun !

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Sogabe : NOO !! NOO !! I'm not supposed to think dirty of Chikura-san ...
Mamoru : Sogabe-kun !! Don't shake your head like that ...

Sogabe : Ugyuu~~
Mamoru : Hey, be careful !

Kusuda : Anyway, one thing in your imagination is improper
Chikura :
Sogabe : What !? Where !?

Kusuda : It's her breasts
Sogabe : UH
Kusuda : Even a blind could tell that Chikura has A-cup breasts //

Mamoru : True, in our class, Enomoto-san is the one who has the best tits ....

Kusuda : Don't you dare thinking about Enomoto !!
Mamoru : GWAAAA

Mamoru :
Sogabe : T - then, how about this ?

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Kei : Do you guys want to play ping-pong ?

Dobashi : Let's make this a punishment game !
Kei : My pleasure !!

Kei : Hey, c'mon, I already have nothing more to wear
Ayumi / Koyoi : // // Doba-chan is really strong at ping-pong
Dobashi : I'm only following the rule !

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Sogabe : ........ WOAAAA
Kusuda : God's punishment for you

Kusuda : Speaking of great body, nothing can beat the high schoolers .....

Kusuda : Though Yamamoto onee-san's body is also irresistible // But the one I set my eyes to is Watase Meguru onee-sama ...
Meguru : No ... stop it .... Yamamoto ... !
Misaki : Tell me, what does it take to get this magnificent boobs ?
Yuu : Uwaa ~ so bouncy !

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Mamoru : Saki-nee is not that kind of pervert

Mamoru : The one most likely to do that kind of thing are those two

Ayumi : What a breast, I also want to have something like this !!
Meguru : W -what's wrong with these kids !! //
Koyoi : Perhaps we can make our breasts bigger by touching it ! //

Ayumi / Koyoi : There she is, Yamamoto-san ! // Boobs ! boobs! let us touch yours !

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Kusuda : I never thought that Zaitsu's mind is so corrupted .... // Making Arihara and Bessho to become an Ero-character
Sogabe : Apparently, the quiet one is the most dangerous one ?
Mamoru : I - I was only trying to correct the story that Kusuda-kun made

Mamoru : The one I'm curious about is Dobashi - san ... // I - I want to kow whether she has suntan on every part of her body .... //
Sogabe / Kusuda : A pervert, indeed

Mamoru : Heh !! Everyone would like to know about it, right !?
Kusuda : But every part of her body .... // < Which part is it !? >
Sogabe : Uwaa~ pervert ! You are beyond help !!
Mamoru : You guys are much more perverted than me !!!

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Kusuda : We were doing the same thing a couple of months ago, what a memory ... // We were chased by a pack of stray dogs that time //
Mamoru : Today's dinner is not another 'nmai snack, right !?
Sogabe : Don't worry, I also brought some lettuce with me this time !
Mamoru : EH
Narrator : But even so

Narrator : Their dreams continue // And also their imagination ...

Girls : Waa, it's beautiful !!

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Koyoi : With some good foods, this will be perfect
Ayumi : I can't wait for the hot spring !
Kei : Behave yourselves this time, okay !?
Meguru : It says that the hot spring is facing to the ocean !

Meguru : How 'bout if we take a short bath before we eat our dinner ?
Nanoka : Let's have a swimming match there !!

Guys : Please ~~ !!

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Ayumi : Zaitsu-kun !
Kei : Kusuda ....
Chikura : Sogabe-kun ... !?

Sogabe : I beg you ! Please let us join you !!
Mamoru : Hueh ~ why are you kneeling !?
Kusuda : We have taken a long distance with our bikes to get here // Please share us some of your great times !!

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Sogabe : HEY Zaitsu, on your knees
Mamoru : I ... I beg you ... please

Kei : If .. if you ask us like that .... // Kusuda ...

Meguru : Now listen, you guys // Do you bring enough money to pay the lodging expenses ?

Meguru : If you can't afford it, you can just go back home !
Kei : Now, you don't have to be that cold

Meguru : But, we can't let them stay in our room ....

Kei : Where the hell are you looking at !!
Meguru :

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Kei : I'm sure that you guys were having some dirty expectations while you're riding your bikes ! // There is no way that we would let some perverted guys to stay with us !!
Ayumi :

Mamoru : ..... She got everything right, I can't argue

Mamoru : C'mon, let's go home // Just be able to have another journey with you guys was a great pleasure to me ...
Kususda : I ... I ...

Kusuda : I won't give up !! Enomoto ! You damn girl !!
Mamoru : Kusuda-kun, you are at fault ...
Sogabe : And you too, four eyes girl ! How dare you get in our way !!

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Kusuda : The size of that four eyes' breasts is unforgivable !!
Sogabe : Making it to grow that big .... I'll caress those breasts like this ! and this !!
Mamoru : // Seems that you two are big breasts maniac ....

Kusuda : Speaking of which, Yamamoto onee-sama's breasts are also unbearable !!
Sogabe : Ah, I also think that she has nice tits
Mamoru : Will you stop taking Saki-nee into your fantasy !! //

Kusuda : Soo~~, a change of plan, we'll sneak into the girls' bath
Sogabe : Let's try using the back side of the inn
Mamoru : A change of plan !? You guys were planning this since the beginning

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Mamoru : The back side of the inn ..... This is a cliff !!
Kusuda : Well, they won't make it an open air bath if it's easy to be peeped at the first place ....

Kusuda / Sogabe : However, we are the man of our words, we won't take any step back !!
Mamoru : You guys aren't cool at all, you know !? Peeping is your goal afterall !

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Ayumi : This Sashimi is really delicious ! //
Koyoi : Yup, it tastes really good
Misaki : Let's send some MMS !
Chikura : I feel somehow sorry for the boys .....
Kei : Just leave them ! Sleeping outdoors is what they deserved

Narrator : Though that what she said, she actually put a thought on it .....
Yuu :
Kei : Though that was a great chance for me to spend the time together with Kusuda ... // Haa~~ I am really short tempered ...

Girls : After we finish this meal, let's go take a bath ! // Yeah, agree ! // Let's enjoy this hot spring like never before !

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Sogabe : O ... oi ..... // Do we really have to go through such danger just to peek .... ?

Sogabe : Furthermore, w -why are we naked ... ?
Kusuda : We are going to sneak into a bathing place, being naked is more natural

Sogabe : .....

Sogabe : I ... I can't go any further ......
Kusuda : Idiot don't look down, you'll fall !!

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Sogabe : AAAHHHH !! My legs are frozen, I can't move it !!
Kusuda : Tch, this guy causes only troubles .....

Kusuda : Just imagine, Sogabe ! The scene you'll see after you arrive !!

Narrator : Before your eyes, awaits the garden Eden ... !!
Chikura : Everyone have big breast !

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Maguru : Hang on there ! Just a little bit more, Sogabe-kun !
Kei : Sogabe-kun, I'm sure you can climb that cliff
Misaki : Yup, Sogabe-kun, you are the type who can do anything if you try

Kei : Do your best !
Meguru : Go, Sogabe-kun !

Meguru : I'm going to feed you after you get here
Kei : I will play ping-pong with you

Misaki : And I // I will wash your back

Chikura : And from me // I will always stay by your side, Sogabe-kun ....

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Sogabe : I'm cominggg~~~~ !!!!

Kusuda : He ... he's fast ...!
Mamoru : What is that exactly in his imagination !?

Kusuda : Damn it ! Me too ... imagine .... imagine ...

Narrator : Within that cloud of steam .... // Her body is glimmering with waterdrops // Those fruits are rippen, swaying, ready to pick ...

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Mamoru : NO, if I stay like this ... // Saki - nee's naked body will be seen by Sogabe-kun !!!

Sogabe : Tits, Enomoto's tits
Kei : Help me, Kusuda~~ !!

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Kusuda : Sogabe-kun, You~, don't you dare to look at Enomoto's naked body !!!
Mamoru : He's running vertically !

Sogabe : Yess ! Just a little bit more !!

Ayumi : WAA !! // Watase-senpai, your breasts are really big ! Bigger than Kei's !! //

Meguru : Don't .. don't stare at my breasts like that ... it's embarrassing

Koyoi : How nice, I also want that kind of breasts ! // With those breasts, I'll be able to beat the Demon Queen easily .....

Misaki : Demon Queen ? What is it, Koyoi-chan ?
Koyoi : AH ...... hahahaha ....

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Girls : !?

Girls : Kyaaa ~~~ !! // It's the boys !?
Kusuda : Fuwa~

Girls : Gyaa ~~ !! // Why are you guys are naked !!?

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Girls : W - what are you trying to do, coming here naked !? Idiot ! Pervert !! // 'Till when are you intending to show us that thing !!?

Girls : Get out, NOW ! // You are the worst !!
Boys : Y - you got us wrong ! // It's only natural to come naked into a bath, right !?

Sumire : ..... // I was actually planning on making a bikini camp to satisfy you readers // Well, nevermind !!

Emergency Omake (FIN)

Translation: Himawari Youchien Monogatari Aiko Desho! 21

2008-12-03T20:00:08+00:00

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Kagurazaka : The weather is getting hot

Haru : Yup, today especially // I'm sweating a lot already just from cleaning only

Kagurazaka : ..... Haru, you should be more careful with your dress //
Aiko : Onii-chan

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Chapter 22
Puzzle (I)

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Aiko : It's a good weather today

Haru : Aiko-chan is more cheerful than usual
Kagurazaka : Hnn

Kagurazaka : It's perhaps "that"

Kaguzaka : Say, Aiko-chan // Did something good happen ?

Aiko : Te he he, do you want to know ? // Should I say it to you ?

Aiko : You know ....

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Aiko : Papa is coming home

Suimei : Hee~~ ! That's great
Aiko : Te he he

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Kisaragi : Fuu~~ they are finally asleep
Kagurazaka : Aiko-chan didn't cause any trouble today
Haru : She must be happy because she can meet her father

Kisaragi : Aren't you being lonely, Ronin ?
Suimei : ... Not really

Kisaragi : He is acting strong
Suimei : I'm not !

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Suimei :
Aiko :

Aiko :

Haru : Aiko-chan // You are being picked up

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Aiko : Right away

Aiko : Noo~~

Aiko : We are going to continue it tomorrow // Leave it that way, okay

Aiko : It's a promise
Suimei : Okay

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Aiko : Pa~ pa~

Mother : Now Aiko, papa can't eat that way you know
Father : It's okay Asaka-san

Aiko : It's okay right
Mother : Gee~ Masaki, you are always that soft

Mother : //

Father :
Mother : <..... Idiot>

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Father : Hey

Father : Ai-chan, want to go to disneyland tomorrow ?

Mother : That's a good idea, I'm going to prepare something to eat
Aiko : Eh? tomorrow ... ?

Father : What's wrong, Ai-chan ?

Aiko : It's nothing

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Kisaragi : They say that Aiko-chan is not coming today

Fumi : // The weather is good today, they must have a family reunion after so long

Atsushi : What is this !? this puzzle is hindering

Suimei : Wait, stop, I'll clean it up

Atsushi : Don't forget to clean it up after you use it

[Cabinet] : Aiko
??? : Suimei-sensei !

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[Cabinet] : Aiko

Chitan :

Yuuko : Eh

Yuuko : It was such a good weather this morning .....

Yuuko : Suimei-chan, will you bring the laundry inside ?

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Aiko : Heh ? // Onii-chan is not here ?
Haru : Suimei-san has class in yobikou today

Aiko : I really want to tell him about disneyland though

Haru : But Suimei-san should come back earlier today
Aiko : ! // Really
[Title] : Schedule
[Horizontal] : Mon. // Tue. // Wed. // Thu. // Fri. // Sat.
[Vertical] : Ronin // Haru
[Above the X] : Come in the morning // Come in the evening // Come as much as possible

Haru : Don't you want to talk with Haru-sensei about it ?
Aiko : Not before I tell onii-chan first

Kyousuke :

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Girls :

Aiko : Sure

Aiko : Onii-cha .....

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Aiko : Papa !

Father : I want to see you Ai-chan, so I come here and pick you up

Father : What's wrong ?
Kisaragi : Aiko-chan's papa !

Father :
Kisaragi :

Haru : Aiko-chan // Don't worry about Suimei-san, you can still meet him tomorrow

Aiko : You are right, see you tomorrow

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Haru : He looks like a very kind papa
Kisaragi : Well, maybe

Haru : Suimei-san ? // // He is very early today

Fumi : Did you run at your way home ?
Suimei : After the run, it feels so hot here .... // ..... Eh?

Fumi : If you are looking for Aiko-chan, she went home already
Suimei : Ah .....

Chitan :

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Haru : Aiko-chan, good morning

Haru : A ..... Aiko-chan ?

Aiko : Onii-chan .....

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Haru : Suimei-san said that he has a supplementary class today

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Aiko : Leave it that way, okay
Suimei : Okay

Aiko : Puzzle .....

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Akko : Haru-chan, what are we going to do today ?
Haru : Any suggestion ?

Haru : Aiko ... chan ?

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Haru : Wh ... what is it ?

Haru : Aiko-cha ......

Aiko : ...... I've done it

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Aiko : I ruined it all ...... // I promised him .....

Aiko : Aiko ruined it all .....

Haru : Don't worry about it, you will be able to meet him again tomorrow
[Title] : Schedule
[Horizontal] : Mon. // Tue.
[Vertical] : Ronin // Haru // Kagurazaka // Kisaragi // Fumi / Enchou

Aiko : I also said to onii-chan that time that I will meet him tomorrow

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Aiko : I promised him ....... !

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Aiko : We are going to continue it tomorrow // Leave it that way, okay

Haru : Aiko ... chan ?

Translation: Himawari Youchien Monogatari Aiko Desho! 20

2008-12-03T19:58:42+00:00

It seems that my partner has gone MIA.
I can continue translating this manga upon request, but it's going to take some time because I don't have much time lately.
Just let me know if you are interested in this manga.
Like always, all translations that I put here are free to use. You don't need to ask for my permission first to scanlate or re-translate etc. etc.
Just proofread it if possible.

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Chapter 20
The children in the AQUARIUM

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[Sign] : Nagawa aquarium

Yuuko : Everyone, don't get away from the teachers okay~

[Flag] : Himawari Kindergarten

Chitan :
Akko :

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Aiko : There is a lot of fish here, onii-chan
Suimei :

Suimei : Gwoa .....

Aiko : Onii-chan, are you okay ?

Suimei : .... Aiko-chan, are you going to bring that thermos with you ? //
Aiko : Yup, it will be just fine

Suimei : .....
Aiko : I'll be going first

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Girl : So cute // It's pretty //
Aiko : Clione is so pretty, right onii-chan
Suimei : Yup, it is //

Suimei : Next week is the time to turn in the application for the summer course ......

Aiko : You were thinking about something else, right ?
Suimei : She ... she is sharp !

Girl :
Aiko : It was so cute and you spoiled the moment !
Suimei :
Akko : Look, meal time

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Boy :
Haru : Look kids, cute isn't ? the clione

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Suimei : Is ... is everything fine, Aiko-chan ?

Aiko : Waa~ so pretty //
Suimei : It's pretty indeed

Aiko : Say say, what is its name ?
Suimei : Eh ?

Suimei : ...... errrr... uhmm ....? what was it again ? //
Kyousuke : It's Parrotfish

Kyousuke : Their habitat is from Ogasawara island till Ryuukyuu island. The adult male grows a bump on its head // They feed themselves from the coral using their solid beak

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Aiko : You are great Kyousuke-kun ! so clever
Kyousuke :

Kyousuke : And you know, its poops become the sand on the beach

Aiko :

Aiko :

[Sign] : Umizuki Chouchouo // (Chouchouo Family ) // 15 cm // Origin: Pacific Ocean, Indian Ocean

[Sign] : Itten Chouchouo // (Chouchouo Family ) // 15 cm // Origin: Pacific Ocean, Indian Ocean

[Sign] : Mizore Chouchouo // (Chouchouo Family ) // 15 cm // Origin: Pacific Ocean, Indian Ocean
TN: I have no idea what the fish is called in english. The information about the origin is actually more detailed, like Pacific Ocean in south of Japan, but who cares.

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Chitan : So tired
Aiko : I'm done

Girl :
Haru : Stay up kids, you are blocking the way
Kagurazaka :

Chitan : How 'bout a piggy back
Haru : Don't be a spoiled kid
Kisaragi :

Chitan : Piggy back // Piggy back // We are not going anywhere if you don't carry us

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Aiko : Onii-chan, I'm tired

Suimei : I just have to, I guess

Kids : // // // // //

Yuuko : Everyone

Yuuko : You will get left behind if you don't hurry up
Teachers : Yes mam

Yuuko : So next is ...

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Kids : Woo~~ww ~!!

Yuuko: Children, don't run around
Kids : Yes mam

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Aiko :
Suimei :

Kagurazaka :
TN : Shouchuu : Japanese liquor
Suimei : <.... What are they doing !?>

Haru :

[Sign] : (Na)gawa Aqua(rium)

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Aiko : Ah

Suimei : What is it ?
Aiko : My thermos ....

Aiko : //
Suimei : You mean you forgot that big thermos ?

Aiko : .......

Suimei : // It .. it's okay, I'm sure that we'll find it

Haru : Suimei-san, I'll hande the things over here, just go after her

Suimei : Aiko-chan !

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Suimei : Aiko-chan, wait over here okay

Suimei: Excuse me, can you please let us in again ?

Suimei : Aiko-chan ?

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Aiko : I found it, onii-chan ....

84 -85
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Suimei : Aiko-chan

Suimei : Don't just leave by yourself like that again

Suimei : I'm glad that you found your thermos ....

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Aiko : ...... Papa bought this for me
Suimei : Heh ?

Aiko : ... that's why

Aiko : It's an important thing to me // Thank you for coming for me ..... onii-chan

Suimei : So your papa sent it to you ? // // I see

Suimei : // But no matter how you see it, it's just too big for her
Aiko :
Suimei : He mustn't have been home for a long time

Suimei : And forget the size of his daughter .....

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Suimei : Even though, he is still being loved by Aiko-chan

Suimei : ...... Why the hell am I being jealous !?
Haru :

Haru :
Aiko :

Haku : Ah that's right, we got some souvenirs from the aquarium

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Haru : Cute isn't it ?

Haru : ..... What is wrong ?

Suimei : Look, Aiko-chan //

Aiko : Idiot~~

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Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 3

2008-08-14T16:04:05+00:00
A big thanks to raph986 for the RAW
http://www.megaupload.com/fr/?d=3VRWBXRF
Don't forget to credit him in case you want to scanlate this.

00-03
(Cover)

04-05
(Love chart)
(Put their names in the circle.)

[small Circle]
Yoshihiko & Yuuji : Big Brother
Koyoi & Ayumi : Little Sister

Summary
The sweetness of heart is a warning of danger !?
A bomb of love is being lit !!
That's how the things happen in this vol. 3.

Last time, for the first time in her life, Yamamoto-san is taking Valentine Day seriously. She asked Bessho Yoshihiko for some advices about her love. While she was doing that heartless act, her feeling toward Arihara Yuuji is keep growing.
But that's not all !!

Yamamoto-san likes Arihara Yuuji. Arihara Yuuji is being mad about his own sister, Ayumi. Ayumi is in love with Zaitsu Mamoru and Zaitsu Mamoru has an unrequited love for his childhood friend, Yamamoto-san. Accidentally, Koyoi's brother, whom she is extremely tremendously extraordinarily in love with, has also an unrequited love for Yamamoto-san.

...... Oh yeah, right now, the situation can turn really nasty.
How everyone is being dragged into this Valentine Day's incident ("The Melancholy of the Chocolate Bomber") will welcome you in this 3rd Volume !!

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Chapter 18 - 26 + Titles

Omake
Gentei Shoujo (Limited Girl) - Chapter 3

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[soako] : My name is Andou Soako (14). Nickname: "Klutz Girl" .... // Read Vol. 1 for more details // The class today has already ended and I feel so relieved .....

[soako] : Until .....
Nao : Uhmm~ it's about the club // It is your turn today, Soako-chan. I'm looking forward to it.
Koyoi :

Soako : Heh ?
Nao : It's about ........ you know ......

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Nao : Being a painting - model for the art club

Soako : Wh ..... Why this ... !?
Schoolmate : Andou, will you sit properly !
Soako : Right now, I don't wear any underwear ...... !!!

[soako] : Even though they can't see the lower part ...

Soako : But ... but the upper part .... !! // When they come to the part around the breast ....

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Soako : Noo~ ..... all eyes are aimed at me ... // What's with this sensation ? I feel that they can see through my clothes ....

[soako] : I .... I can't bear it anymore .....
Schoolmate : It's 30 minutes already // Let's take a break

Nao :
Soako : Water ..... I need water ..... // //
Schoolmate : Huh ? Zaitsu, why are you filling the bucket with water ?
Mamoru : Oh, this ?

Mamoru : I think that maybe we will need it for the tint

Mamoru : Whoaa

Mamoru : I'm .... I'm sorry ....
Nao : Soako-chan, are you all right !?

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Soako : I ..... // I wasn't also paying attention ....

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Soako : Kyaaa

Nao : Soako-chan ......
Soako : I'm fine ! I'm fine, just don't mind me .... !!

Schoolmate : //

Soako : What should I do ? Did they find it out ? // I should not have come to the club .....

Nao : I couldn't see any mark of underwear on Soako-chan's back ..... // But that thing can't possible happen ...... it can't be ..... isn't it ?

Mamoru : I ..... I must have been seeing things ..... // This is bad ! This is really bad .....

Gentei Shoujo (Limited Girl) (FIN)

Translation: Freezing 2

2008-06-07T08:57:22+00:00
There will be no translation from me for the next chapter.
This is a translation that I made about 4 weeks ago, but we decided at the end not to scanlate this manga. And so I make this translation public now.
I hope you enjoy

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Nova Blade
TN: In original manga : Nova Blatt. Blatt is the german for leaf or sheet, but Blatt can also be used for blade (GER: Klinge)

Roland : Uh ... !?

Chapter 2
Targeted Girl

48 - 49
Roland : Satellizer ! El ! Brigitte !!

Roland : My ... Nova .. Weapon ....

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Aoi : A-amazing ... !

Aoi : Genessa's Pandora Mode is .... // Just with one single strike .... !?

Roland : This is ... unforgivable ....

Roland : I haven't lost yet !! // Satellizer !!!

Brigitte : !?

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Brigitte : !?

Chiffon : Ah ... ?

Yumi : That's enough, second year Satellizer El Brigitte // I'm not going to let you off with more troubles

Elise : If you girls use the Pandora Mode without any back up from the academy, your suit will get overheated. It's an old model afterall // Deactivate, now

Chiffon : Are you all right, Aoi-kun ?
Aoi : Yes... I'm ok

Aoi : Tell me ... // Who are those people ?

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Chiffon : Those two girls are "Numbers"
Aoi : < The uniform is ..... restoring itself ? > // "Numbers" ?

Chiffon : During the 8th "Nova Crash" 4 years ago, they belonged to the 4 people who are said to be the key of the war // Those two quit from the army and work as teachers, here in "Genetics"

Chiffon : Teaching physics and responsible as a drill instructor, Kim Yumi - sensei

Chiffon : And she is our school doctor, Elise Schmitz - sensei

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Chiffon : The teachers are here, you don't need to worry anymore
Aoi : < Numbers >

Aoi : < 4 years ago ... > // < They fought together with Kazuha-neesan .... >

Aoi : < I see, so everyone .... > // < were safe .... >

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Aoi : Hee~~?

Aoi : What a luxurious room, and all is mine alone .... ? // Is this really my room ?

Aoi : The room number ... is correct ... // 302 .... I can open the door with the key, this should be it

Arthur : Yoo~, so you are the one who live in that single room ? // I knew it, you are the rookie who made the ruckus in the campus. There is no mistaking it.

55
Arthur : If you caused so much trouble, there won't be any nee-san who wants to "baptism" you // To find a suitable nee-san is our most important task as a limiter, you know !?
TN: Remember that nee-san is not only to call actual older sister, but also for a girl older.
Aoi : ......!?

Aoi : "Babtism" .... ? And who are you ?
Arthur : Ah, pardon me

Arthur : Arthur Clipperton, 1st Year, the same like you // I'll be your neighbor from now

Aoi : I'm Aoi Kazuya, nice to meet you
Arthur : I knew you already, you are the super rookie who jumped on the queen and caused trouble, right ?
Aoi : ha ha ha ...

Aoi : By the way, what is that "babtism" you mentioned earlier ? // And about the importance of finding a nee-san ... ?

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Arthur : Well, I think you'll find it out soon enough yourself after you start your curriculum tomorrow ... // A Pandora choose her partner, which is the limiter, from her underclassmen in 1st year ... // That's what we call "babtism"

Aoi : Why it has to be from the underclassmen ?
Arthur : There is a reason for that

Arthur : EREINBAR // An enigmatic sensory organ which control the human's five senses from deep inside, a lot deeper than a neuron // During the battle, the pandora and the limiter will combine their EREINBAR and make their five senses into one

Aoi : EREINBAR ... ?

Arthur : It's still unknown why, but it seems that the combining ratio of the EREINBAR is the highest if it's done with the junior male // That's why the pandora normally choose their partner from their underclassmen // And once the partner is decided, their relationship will last until the graduation. If one of them can't maintain their ability, both of them will be treated as failure. That's why the mutual relationship is also important

Arthur : It seems that you are being hated by the seond year Satellizer
Aoi : !

Arthur : I'll give you and advice ....

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Arthur : No matter what happened, don't get involved with that woman // She doesn't trust the limiter // You will only turn yourself into a failure if you get involved

Arthur : This academy has a four year couse and the fourth year students are also a reserve army .... // I heard a rumor that the fourth year students also don't like her and set their eyes on her // It's because that In this academy, the hierarchy is absolute
Aoi : < Even something like that ... >

Arthur : My nee-san is incomparable, you know !? // She is a lovable person, beautiful and strong. She is also kind to me // < She is the best >

Aoi : That's a nice thing to hear, I wonder who she is ?
Arthur : I see, so you want to know it .... don't be so pushy

Arthur : You are my neighbor, so you'll find it out yourself even if I don't tell you // Well, because you are really insisting to know, there no reason for me to hide it anymore
Aoi : Thank you ....

Arthur : The second year Genessa Roland - senpai
Aoi : Huh ? Who did you say ?

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Sign : Teacher's Room

Computer : Member of The United Service Order // Aoi Kazuha's Brother

Yumi : Kazuha's ..... // One and only ....

Elise : How 'bout a cup of coffe ? // Kim Yumi - sensei

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Yumi : Elise !! Don't just show up like a ghost !
Elise : Okay okay

Elise : So, it's him .... // Kazuha-chan's brother
Yumi : ....

Elise : Well, I understand why you can't keep yourself calm // You love that girl very much

Elise : That time ... // I really miss it ...

60
Aoi : //

Aoi : //

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Third Year School Dormitory
Miyabi : The second year Satellizer El Brigitte ? // Today's commotion was caused by her right ? I already heard about that girl, she is pretty famous

Miyabi : But she's not the kind of person I like

Miyabi : Anyway, how about the new enrolled limiter who caused her the humiliaton ? // I wonder whether I can make use of him ?

Miyabi : This is his photo ....
??? : Ahh, just what I need

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Miyabi : Let me see ....

Miyabi : Nice ... // He is very cute ...

Miyabi : I'm going to make this new enrolled limiter mine .... // He is worthy enough to have a babtism from me, Kannazuki Miyabi-sama

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Aoi : My name is Aoi Kazuya // Some circumstances of mine made me have to transfer here // Nice to meet you all

??? : //

Aoi : //

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Hiiragi : Hi~ // I'm the class rep., Hiiragi Kaho

Aoi : Nice to meet you Hiiragi-san

Hiiragi : You are also a japanese, right ? I'm so happy

Hiiragi : But your early day here was really a disaster // You got involved with that Satellizer straightaway // For your own good, I recommend you not to do anything that concern her

Hirragi : That senpai is a little bit crazy // Anyway, don't get too close to her

Aoi : I ... I don't think I can do that. You don't even know her and yet you say bad things about her ...

65
Aoi : Besides, it was my fault. The one who got into trouble was her, right ? // I have to apologize to her ..!

Hiiragi : Aoi-kun ...

Arthur : Don't you ever do that !!
Hiiragi : Never !
Aoi : ........

66
Aoi : Wow~~ // Even japanese food is here ! // Korean food // Chinese food // French food // Is here really the school cafeteria

Hiiragi : This kind of treatment is only natural // The students of "Genetics" are the one who carry the future of the humanity on their shoulder

Aoi : And what's with that long queue ?
Hiiragi : Burger Queen, no top class food can beat its popularity .... //

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Arthur : Then, I'm going to go first
Aoi : ?

Aoi : Arthur ?
Arthur : The food from the infirmary doesn't meet my nee-san's taste // I'm going to deliver her this french set menu B now

Arthur : Then, 'till the afternoon class
Aoi : Okay
Hiiragi : He is so devoted to her

Aoi : Arthur has sure a good relationship with his partner
Hiirgai : That one is too clingy

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Aoi : //

Hiiragi : Ah! Aoi-kun!!

Cashier : This is your order, a bacon burger set menu

Aoi : Please, Wait !!
Brigitte : !

70
Students :
Hiiragi :
Brigitte : !?

71
Aoi : Senpai, wait !!

Aoi : I have something to talk with you !! // Wait !!
Hiiragi : This is a wonder .....

72
Aoi : There you are !!

Aoi : Why are you avoiding me ? I just want to talk with you ....

Aoi : I want to say I'm sorry, because of me .... // You lost in your synthesis carnival .....

73
Aoi : And you were also forced to transform into pandora mode ... // All was just to save me

Brigitte : It was because that you also tried to save me ...
Aoi : !

Brigitte : That's why I saved you ! // It is always be my policy to pay back what I owe ....

Aoi : I'm so glad to hear that !! // I knew it that you are not a bad person like the others say // I can see it, the true you ... !!

74
Aoi : Is it true that you will kill everyone who touch you ? // There is no way it can be true, they are just exaggerating it, right ? // Look, nothing is happen

Aoi : Waaa !! I'm sorry !! // It was an accident ... !!

75
Brigitte : It's fine .... // I can't stand it if I were touched by someone else .... // But I don't mind it if it were you ...

Brigitte : I wonder why ... ? // I can't find the answer myself ....

Aoi : //

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Aoi : Please .... // Take me as your limiter

Brigitte : ....!?

77
Miyabi : What is this ? A babtism in this kind of place ?
Brigitte : ... !?
Miyabi : What a bother, at least look at your surroundings

Miyabi : This is a public place, can't you control yourself ? // Don't you know it .... // That a babtism should be done only between the two in secrecy

Aoi : ... !! // Satellizer-senpai !!

78
Miyabi : Wait
Brigitte : !

Miyabi : Being an underclassmen ... // Aren't you going to give any greeting to your senpai ? // Where is your manners ?

Aoi : Senpai, wait for me !

Miyabi : Stop right there, rookie !

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Miyabi : You are not going anywhere // From now on ...

Aoi : .... !?
Miyabi : You'll be my limiter ....

Miyabi : Because I'm going to give you a babtism

Aoi : I'm afraid I don't understand you ....
Miyabi : It's a very simple thing

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Miyabi : You will become this Miyabi-sama's little brother // And I'll make sure that you will have a splendor life in this academy

Miyabi : Of couse your answer will be "yes", right ?
Aoi : Uhmmm ....

Aoi : I'm sorry

Aoi : I never thought about that kind of thing .... // Please excuse me !

Miyabi : How dare you insulted me // Do you think that you can leave just like that ?

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Miyabi : !?

Brigitte : Lay a finger on him ... // And I'll make you pay for that ...

Miyabi : "You'll make me pay for it" you said .... // It seems that I have been taken very lightly

82-83
Miyabi : This "full of herself" girl ..... // Now, what should I do to make her realize....

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Miyabi : That the second year and the third year ... // Are in the different level .....

Bolt Weapon - Homing Dagger

Chapter 2 End

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 2

2008-05-10T12:18:39+00:00
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Page 01
Limited Girl
Chapter 2

I am
The clumsiest girl ever in history, Andou Soako (14)

Even picking the eraser that I dropped gives me a really hard time

Soako : I went to school without wearing any underwear // Anyway, I just have to behave for today and spend the day like a good girl
Koyoi : Soako-chan Soako-chan, big news !!
SFX : Creeekk (door opens)

Page 02
Soako : What .. What's wrong ?
SFX : doki doki
Koyoi : They are now selling that special melon-pan in cafetaria !!

Koyoi : As the member of the "Promotion Committee for Melon-Pan's Lover and Research", we can't miss this !!
Soako : HYAAAA
SFX : grab

They only sell it once in a month, that fluffy special Melon-Pan ....
Soako : I really love that Melon-Pan, but ....

SFX : JUMBLE
BUT ... !!
Student : Oba-chan, is there still some Melon-Pan left !?
Oba-chan : Only one for each, okay
Koyoi : We are charging in, Soako-chan !
Student : Oba-chan, one Melon-Pan for me !!

Page 03
I didn't notice it until now
If you look at it closely, there are only BOYS ... !!

Soako : I .... I can't do this today ....
Because, if I go into that human mass ....

Koyoi : What are you talking about !?
SFX : push

Soako : What would happen to me ...!? // Ahhh...!!
SFX : Squeezee

Page 04
SFX : Byooonnn
Soako : Uhh ...

SFX : bump bump
Soako : Ughnn ...

SFX : Squeeeezeeee
Soako : Ahhhnnn ...... !!

Sogabe / Mamoru / Kusuda : Huh ?

Soako : I'm getting pulled deeper and deeper // Nooo !! Let me out, Let me outtt....
SFX : rustle rustle

Page 05
Oba-chan : Today's Melon-Pans are sold out !!
SFX : clink clink (bell)

Student: Geezzz, sold out already // Let's go back

SFX : droppy
Soako :
SFX : ragged

Soako : What was actually the purpose of me being in that human mass ...?
SFX : *sob sob*
SFX : Hoamm

Kusuda : It is perhaps just my imagination, but I felt that 2 Melon-Pans were pressed against my back ....
Mamoru :
Sogabe :

Limited Girl (Fin)

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 30

2008-05-10T02:47:44+00:00
Let me know if you spot mistakes or have questions

Page 01
The journey reaches finally its climax !!
In the box:
It's because of her appearance that stands out from others
Since the first time I saw her, I got somehow interested in her

Kusuda : RUNNNN !!
Koyoi : Hey, stop right there !!

She is not like the way people would expect her to be
She is diligent and reliable .... I was a little bit surprised myself ....

Kei : I'm going to chase him ... Koyoi, hold this for me !!
Ayumi : Please take mine too, Koyoi-chan !
Koyoi : Woaa !

Page 02
Koyoi : Heee~~ what's with you all ?

Koyoi : Chikura-chan, even you
SFX : Surprised // Bow

Chapter 30
The Boys' Escape
Part 4 - Sprinting, The Sleepless Dreamers

Carrying the feelings that can't be expressed by words ....
That day, we went on a journey

Page 03
SFX : tap tap tap tap
Mamoru : Woaaa !! They are chasing us
Kusuda : Just run, it will be all over if they catch us !
Sogabe : ....... ughh ..... !!
SFX : haa haaa

Sogabe : I ... I get tired after riding the bike all the way // My legs feel heavy because of the sand
SFX : haa haa haa

Sogabe : Uwaaa !!
SFX : stumble
Kusuda : Sogabe !!

Page 04
Last Issue : Finally, Kusuda (unexpectedly) confessed to Enomoto

Sogabe : I .. I can't run anymore .... // You guys .... bring this journey to its end ....

Kusuda : Sogabe, what are you ....
SFX : pat

Sogabe : It was only two days ..... // But ... it was fun .....

Kusuda : ..... damn

Ayumi : Wait for meee.... Zaitsu-kunnn ..... !!
Kei : Stop running, Kusudaaa ..... !!
SFX : stepped
Sogabe :

Nao : haa haa haa
SFX : whizz

Page 05
Nao : haa haa haa
SFX : whuzzz

Nao : Sogabe-kun ! // Are you all right !? You are covered with sand

Sogabe : Chikura-san // I ... // I like you, Chikura-san ....

Page 06
Nao : Heeee !?

Sogabe : I... I'm sorry ... I made you listen to this ....

Nao : ........ // I .......

Sogabe : I understand ! It's about Renjou-senpai, right .... // You liked him, right ? ..... and you still like him now

Nao : .....
Sogabe : Compared to him .... // I lose to him in both face and brain. I'm not even good in painting, but ... but still ...

Sogabe : Someday ....

Sogabe : I'll show you that I can catch up with him !!

Page 07
Nao : You are wrong Sogabe-kun .... // You have something good in you that Renjou-senpai doesn't have
SFX : stunned
Nao : You come this far to search for it, don't you ?

Nao : It's true that I still can't forget about Renjou-senpai ..... but little by little, I also want to grow up // That's why .... // Let us support each other, Sogabe-kun ... !!

Page 08
Sogabe : ..... Yup ....

Kusuda : They are really persistent ... !
SFX : haa haa haa

Ayumi / Kei : Haa Haa Haa

Ayumi : Zaitsu-kun ! // Why are you running away ? // Is it because that you still like Yamamoto-san !?

Page 09
Ayumi : There is nothing you can do against that feeling // Do you think that running away will make you forget about her !?

Kusuda : ..... Zaitsu !?

Mamoru : I'm not running away
Kusuda : Zaitsu !
Mamoru : I'm sorry Kusuda-kun, you can go ahead

Kusuda : ...... Damn it

Page 10
Ayumi : ... Then, why were you leaving ?

Mamoru : ... I ... I want to stand on my own feet again ...
Ayumi : Did you get it already ?

Mamoru : ...... I don't know

Mamoru : But, I feel somehow relieved ! // I have made it this far, I think I already get used to this feeling

Page 11
Mamoru : Actually, I still wanted to go further, but ...?

Mamoru : A ... Arihara-san ?

Ayumi : Sorry // Your smiling face ... I never saw it up until now ....

Ayumi : Furthermore ... you are safe .... // I'm really glad ...
Mamoru : Thank you, Arihara-san // For coming this far for me

Page 12
Kei : I have enough already // Until when will you keep running away, Kusudaaa....!!!

Kei : Hop !
Kusuda : Owaa !!
SFX : tackle !

Kei / Kusuda : haa haa haa
SFX : bump

Page 13
Kei : Haa

Kei : He he ....

Kei : My legs are longer than yours, I could catch you right away if I were serious

Kei : I said something bad again about Kusuda .... // I'm ... I'm sorry

Kusuda : You don't have to apologize // It's all true

Page 14
Kei : Why did you make this journey ?

Kusuda : Why should I tell it to you ?

Kei : I think I have the right to know it
SFX : rolling over
Kusuda : ....... Because I have short legs and I'm ugly !!

Kusuda : Someone like you wouldn't understand about me

Kusuda : Because .... you are beautiful ....
She perhaps didn't even think about me
If only I didn't fall in love with her

Page 15
Kusuda : You could just go out with a cool guy ...
Kei : I know what your good points are

Kei : When the class was in a bad mood, you made jokes and broke the ice // You also value friendship highly // And I know that you are very reliable and like to help people

Kei : .... At the sport festival, we were together as the Cheerleading Committee // You helped me a lot back then ....

Page 16
Kei : Me too // I really like you .... Kusuda ...
SFX : stunned
Kusuda : Wh ....

Page 17
Kusuda : Don't joke with me !! I know that you hate me a lot !! // I heard you said it loudly at the doorway, didn't you !?

Kei : Wh .... It was a lie !! I like you, it's the truth !!

Kusuda : It's ... it's impossible !! It's me you are talking about, I'm even shorter than you
Kei : Then what ? As long as you have a good heart, the outward appearance doesn't really matter !

Kei : What's with you !? When I came to the seaside to pick you up // You said that you love me ! loud and clear

SFX : Ugghhh ....

Kusuda : It's true that I said that, but ....
Kei : Wait // Why are you running away !?

Page 18
It's a miracle
To have someone I love, to have someone who appreciates me
I feel that I can be a little bit prouder to myself than before ....

SFX : gloom
Kei : Why are you so cold though you know that we like each other !?
Kusuda : And why are you always using that tone like you are looking for a fight !?
Kei : No I'm not ! You are the one who always get angry first !

SFX : Dyooon

Ayumi : Yup, that's right. Just follow that road .... // Ahh ! Here, I'm here, Onii-channn !!

SFX : delight
Koyoi : !!

Page 19
SFX : hug
Koyoi : Onii-chan ! So, you are worried about me and come to search me ... I'm touched
Yoshihiko : okay okay

SFX : hug
Misao : Mamoruuu~~~ thank God you are alive
Mamoru : ?? Why should I be dead ..!?

Ayumi : Huh ? My siscom brother looks kinda strange ???

Yuuji : We will get scolded by our parents and school at the time we come back // Oi, doesn't someone want to take that bike back home ?
Kei : Why can't you hold my hand while we are walking ? Don't you understand girls' feeling ? Idiot !!
Kusuda : Everyone is watching us, there is no way I could do that ! You dummy !!
Finally, the boys are returning home !!

Next : Arihara (the brother) rises up, at last !? What will he do to solve that complicated love pattern of Yamamoto-san !?

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 29

2008-04-26T00:41:07+00:00
Page 01
Upper right : Chikura-chan, your skin is so smooth !!
Upper left : Aa..., uhmm... thank you ...

Chapter 29
The Boys' Escape
Part 3
Crossing Each Other, The Sleepless Dreamers

Lower Right : Groowwll~ Groowwll~
Lower left : .......... bon appetite

TN : Apperently, there will be a new character in Vol. 2

Page 02
Last Issue : Enomoto is coming back to herself !! The pursuing of the lost children begins !!

Rika : Heh --------------

Terai : Wh... what's wrong ? What's in the mail ?

Rika : It's from Enomoto // They managed to find the boys, but they couldn't catch them. They are going to spend the night over there today.
Terai : siiigh.....
Rika : What exactly are the boys doing, running away from reality

Terai : ---------- // I don't think ..... that they are just running away

Terai : How should I say it ..... they also have something that they want to accomplish with their own power // I know how they feel. I'm sure that I will also do the same if I'm in despair .....
SFX : grab
TN : aya ya ya ya .... they are holding hands

Page 03
Rika : Even if you get yourself in that kind of situation // Please don't run away // I absolutely won't like it ....

Terai : Do... Doba... Doba ....
SFX : thump thump

SFX : whizzzzzz
Sogabe : It's cold.... give me some of the sleeping bag
Mamoru : You guys should at least be prepared for camping, you know !! // Agghh.. my sleeping bag ....
Kusuda : It's not even 9 PM yet ... isn't it still too early for us to go to sleep ?
Mamoru : I'm so hungry, I don't want to feel it. Sleeping is the best choice !!
SFX : *shiver* *tremble*

Page 04
Sogabe : We had 2 bars of "nmai" for our evening meal and we drank the water from the park .... // I can't sleep if I'm hungry
Mamoru : Stop grumbling, it annoys me !!
Kusuda : ............

Kusuda : Zaitsu, so you are the type who get angry easily when hungry
Mamoru : Just knock it off and be quiet !!

Nao : I wonder what the boys are doing right now

Kei : Who knows .... // I think there are gazing at the night sky and trying to sleep with their empty stomach somewhere around here
Nao : Really ! // But they must have made enough preparation before they left ..... maybe
SFX : splash splash splash

Page 05
Kei : Anyway, the are heading east ... // If they keep going that way, they will reach the seaside .... where exactly are they intending to go ?
SFX : plunk

Koyoi : !?
SFX : Stare

Kei : Wh ... what's wrong with you two !?
Ayumi : How nice ~
Koyoi : You have a big breast, Im so jealous
SFX : sploosh

Koyoi : Tell us, what did you eat to get that big breast ?
Ayumi : C'mon, let us see it !!
Kei : Hey ... give me a break !!
Nao : ..........
SFX : splash splash

Page 06
Kei : Please, I pray to you // Let Kusuda be safe ...

Koyoi : Yess !! I won !!
Nao : Kei-chan, let's play trump together
Ayumi : So, 9 diamond is Koyoi-chan's last card
Kei : If you really worry about the guys, hurry up and go to sleep !!
SFX : roar

SFX : crunch crunch crunch
SFX : crunch crunch crunch

Page 07
Mamoru : Aaggghh !!

Mamoru : This is ..... our precious food supply // It was all being eaten !!

Mamoru : I have counted it, there should be 18 bars left !!
Kusuda : ...........
Sogabe : Who was it !? Who ate all our food !?

Sogabe : ------------ // Why do you keep silent, Kusuda ?
Mamoru : Don't tell me that you are the culprit .....

Kusuda : Yes it was me, I ate the last bit of our food ! // However !!

Page 08
Kusuda : I only ate two bars !! // In other words // There was someone else who ate the other 16 bars ... !

Mamoru : I ... I ... // I didn't eat 16 bars !! I only ate 5 or 6 bars at most

Sogabe : Ahh......
Kusuda : Then, Sogabe was the one who ate the rest 10 bars !!
Sogabe : It ... it's all six of one half-a-dozen of the other, isn't it ?
TN : In case you don't understand it, it means "it's all the same"
Kusuda : Shut up !! There is a huge difference between 2 bars and 10 bars !!

Sogabe : But, I'm the one who brought it
Kusuda : That is not the problem
Mamoru : Just stop it, getting angry will only make you hungry !!

Misao : Onii-san .... do you want to eat some oranges ?
SFX : zug zug zug zug

Page 09
Yoshihiko : That's the one I gave you .......
Misao : Onii-san, do you have stiff shoulders ? // Onii-san !! Are you bored ? Should I entertain you with my performance !!?

Yuuji : No matter how nice you are to me, I will never give my precious Ayumi to you !!
Misao : I don't ask for much !! Just please allow me talk to your sister !!
Yuuji : Leave me alone !!

SFX : zug zug zug zug zug

Yuuji :Perhaps you really like Ayumi, but my love is ten thousand times or even a hundred million times greater
Misao : My love for her is a trillion times greater !! // .... No, I'll give her my life !!
SFX : Stare

SFX : zug zug zug zug

Yuuji : If you scare me like that again, I will never let you meet Ayumi again ...
Yoshihiko : Arihara

Page 10
Yoshihiko : The one you always talk about is only Ayumi and Ayumi // .... You should think a little bit about Yamamoto-san ....

Yuuji : Ee....
SFX : zug zug zug zug

Ayumi : If they take that road, they will surely come to the seaside over here // Then, let's get off at the station near that beach
Girls : Yup !
SFX : zug zug zug zug

Page 11
Mamoru : Being hungry is so painful, that's why we used our money to buy some food in a convenience store .... // We only have 150 Yen now, what are we going to do ?
Sogabe : Don't get angry .... You'll get hugry again soon ....
Mamoru : Guys, don't you think that it's better for us if we go back home now !?

Kusuda : As if you can go back now .... // You got rejected by the girl next to your house. Have you find a solution for it already !?

Mamoru : But ... but.. I'm not in that condition anymore ....
Kusuda : You are still in that condition, that's why you can't forget her. Am I right !? // If you want to stand on your own feet again, then shut up and just pedal !!

Page 12
Mamoru : It's true that I was only thinking about food last night .... // But with only this much, I can't forget her yet, about Saki-nee !!

Sogabe : You are right !! // Me too, I can't still forget about Chikura-san !!

Kusuda : Sogabe, you make this journey in order to be born again ...
SFX : swoosh
Sogabe : Chikura-san is so kind and pretty ! // And most of all, it's her smile !! it's a wonderful smile !!

Sogabe : I'm a hopeless guy right now !! // I have to make myself become a suitable man for Chikura-san !!

Mamoru : As for me ! // Saki-nee is being taken by a guy who don't even have a single good point that I can see

Page 13
Mamoru : I'm sure that I can bring her more happiness !!
Sogabe : I wan't to make Chikura-san happy !! // I'll show her that I can become a better man than that guy !! // I .... I have a bad shape, I want to look better !!

Mamoru : Kusuda-kun ! Why don't you say anything !?
Sogabe : That's right !! Tell us the reason why you are feeling down !!

Sogabe : I'm sure that you had another fight with Enomoto-san, right ?
Mamoru : I see, so he got rejected by Enomoto

Kusuda : Sh .. shut up // What I want is self confidence !!

Page 14
Mamoru : Self confidence !? What for !?
Sogabe : Of course it is concerning Enomoto, right !?

Mamoru : Let it all out, Kusuda-kun !
Sogabe : It will make you fell better, shout it loudly

Mamoru : Kusuda-ku.....

Page 15
SFX : *soud of waves*

At the moment we saw the sea
None of us said a single word

Page 16
We only look at the wide sea in front of our eyes
And the fist thing that appear in this empty mind

This is the reason why
I need self confidence

Kusuda : .... damn it, don't come into my head .....

Page 17
Sogabe : I LOVE YOU, CHIKURA-SAN !!

Mamoru : Me too....

Mamoru : I LOVE YOU, SAKI-NEE !!

SFX : *soud of waves*

Page 18
Kusuda : I'm ......

Kusuda : I LOVE YOU, ENOMOTO ---- !!

??? : Heeee..... !!

Page 19
Koyoi : Is that really true !? Kusuda-kun !! // Uwaaa~~ what a suprise, right Kei-chan !?

Kei : Ku... Kusu ....

Kusuda : RUNNNN !!

SFX : dash
Koyoi : Hey // Stop right there !!

The destination of the journey is unexpectedly turned into a confession !? Chasing or running, those unerasable loves are going to be settled !!

Next : The road of youth comes finally to an end !!
The destination of this chasing and running game is .... !?

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 28

2008-04-19T01:41:26+00:00
I wish we could have a better quality of RAW.
There is always lots of text and it's hurting my eyes.
This one is a good chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Page 01
................ We will chase them.

Chapter 28
The Boys' Escape

Part 2
The Tracing of the Sleepless Dreamers.

Page 02
Kusuda : I'm a weird guy, deal with me, look me as I am .... // Someone like you is something I hate the most !!

Teacher : ...to // ...nomoto // Enomoto !! Seat number 17, Enomoto Kei !!
Kei : He ... here !!

Ayumi : What's wrong Kei-chan ? You look lost .....

Absent Book : Class ...
Teacher : Sooo..... the one who absent today are ... // Kusuda, Zaitsu and Sogabe. The three of them.

Page 03
Last Issue : Reaching for tomorrow, we travel !!

??? : Let's take a break here .....
TN : Have a Kit Kat

Sogabe : This juice is good !!
Kusuda : We have traveled quite far
SFX : whoosh

Mamoru : ...Say, aren't you guys hungry ? // I didn't eat breakfast this morning .....
SFX : Gyuu ~~ (sound of hungry stomach)

Kusuda : Now that you mention it, I feel hungry too // Hmm... the one who in charge for the food is Sogabe, right !?
Mamoru : Yup

Sogabe : Here
On snack : Nmai (This is an abbreviation from "umai", means "tasty" )
TN : Like I said, Kit Kat

Page 04
Kusuda : You call that food .... it's just sweets !!
Sogabe : But this one is "Nmai" ("Nmai" brand ) // Moreover, they also sell it in economical pack !
TN : "Nmai" means tasty
Mamoru : That ... that is not all, right !? I see you still have something on the back of your bicycle.....

Sogabe : Ah... that is my pillow

Sogabe : I'm sensitive, that's why I never change my pillow
Mamoru : How much money do you guys bring with you !?
Sogabe : I have 300 Yen ....
Mamoru : Let's have a meeting, right now !! it's an emergency meeting !!!

Mamoru : We only have 2000 Yen altogether ..... and 24 pieces of sweets are still left .... // We still have 3 days ahead before we go back home .... Agghhh ... I can't belive this !!
SFX : twitch twitch
Sogabe : I said I'm sorry, you don't have to get that angry
Kusuda : HA HA HA HA HA ........

Kusuda : But something like this is somehow fun
Mamoru : It's not fun at all !
SFX : Gwaaa

Page 05
Mamoru : You guys really haven't planned anything .... // Agghhh... my head is aching
SFX : twitch twitch
Kusuda : So, this is how our journey looks like

Ayumi : I wonder how Zaitsu-kun is doing ? He perhaps catched a cold // I'm sure he is now groaning with pain
Koyoi : Three of them get ill at the same time, I bet they are just playing around
Kei : ..............

Nao : How about if we also go visit Kusuda-kun ?
Kei : Eh // No, it's fine .... I think visiting Zaitsu-kun should be enough

Ayumi : I'm really worry about him ....
Koyoi : So, where is Zaitsu-kun's house !?

SFX : BAMP

Page 06
Misao : Ma .... Ma ..... // Mamoru is ....... Mamoru ...... !!
SFX : Hosh..... Hosh..... Hosh...... Hosh.....

Girls : !! // GYAAAA--------- !!!

Misao : Mamolluu ------- Mamolluu ------- !!!
SFX : Roaarr
SFX : Kyaaa
Misaki : What are you doing, Misao !?

Page 07
Misaki : You are scaring those girls, you know !?

Koyoi :
Misao : Misaki ~~~
SFX : Gloom
Misaki : What exactly happened to you ... !?
Ayumi :

Misao :
To everyone who worries about me
I'm a useless guy who will never be able to stand on my own feet again.
I really detest this state of mine. That's why I went for a journey. Please, dont look for me.
Zaitsu Mamoru

Girls : ......... // ..... This

Page 08
Misaki : This.... From the letter, it looks like that he is running away from home or perhaps ... suicide ...
Ayumi : NOOOOO !!!
SFX : GAAAA
Misao : A... Ayumi-chan !!

Kei : Look, there is some more at the end of the letter !

This has nothing to do with Sogabe-kun and Kusuda-kun. Don't get missunderstood.

Misaki : ..................
Kei : It means that he went together with the other two, right !?

Kei : I will try to call Kusuda ........
SFX : bip bip

Someone like you is something I hate the most !!

Koyoi : Is there something wrong, Kei-chan ?
Kei : -----------------
Ayumi : ........ Let me use it !
SFX : Snap

Page 09
??? : ........ I have the feeling that we took the wrong way

Sogabe : We had no other choice, do we ? If we rode straight away, we would get into the highway
Mamoru : Hmm.... I can't locate our position even after I looked at the map

Kusuda : By the way, which way is east ?
SFX : Riiingg Riiingg

Kusuda : Yup ? Hello
Ayumi : Hello !? Hello !?

Sogabe : Are you stupid, we are now running away from home. Don't answer the phone !! // Quick, hang it up !!
Kusuda : Ah.. uh ... ok

Ayumi : Zaitsu-kun ! Is Zaitsu-kun also there ... ?

Page 10
Koyoi : .......... Disconnected !?
Ayumi : Yup, but it seems that the three of them are together !

??? : ..... But, where could they be ?
Misaki : !

Misao : Mamoru ~~~
SFX : uwaaa uwaaa waaa
Misaki : Misao // I know that you are worry about Mamoru // His mobile has a GPS function, right ?

Misaki : Then // We can know where he is now, do we ?

Kusuda : ...... from Enomoto ........

Kusuda : Guys !! Turn off you mobile ! // Maann, now I'm thinking about the one who I don't want to remember the most ....

Page 11
Misao : ..... What is he doing in such a remote place ?

Ayumi : He is already unreachable !

Nao : At least we already knew where they are and how far they are !!

Ayumi : ......... Let's go after them !

Ayumi : Right, Kei-chan ...... !

Kei : ..... Ah

Page 12
Kei : I'm ..... // I'm not going

Ayumi : Why ? // Aren't you close with Kusuda !?

Ayumi : Are you going to leave Kusuda like that !?

Kei : But ....

Kei : He said that he hates me the most .... // To be picked up by someone he hates the most, it will only piss him off

Page 13
Nao : Kei-chan .....

Misao : Even though you are being hated, there is something you still want to say, right !?
SFX : UWOOOO

Misao : RIGHT !? // Don't hesitate ! // Are you still going to be fine without saying anything about your feeling !?

Misao : ..... Me too

Page 14
Misao : I already knew how the outcome would be ... but .... // It is better than living wihtout saying it ... !!

Kei : Ayumi !
Ayumi : Y - yes
SFX : suprised
Kei : Check the route and their speed from GPS // Koyoi .... find out what they are using to move !!
Koyoi : Yes Mam !!

??? : They are using a narrow street and judging from their average speed .... // Bicycles !! Speaking of which, the bicycle is gone from this morning !

Kei : And now we should look for a train that stop nearby. Chikura-chan, you do it ! // They need a rest at night and will continue traveling tomorrow. We'll predict their route and pursue them there
Ayumi : Ke..... Kei-chan

Page 15
Kei : We'll go home first, pack our luggage and then meet in front of the station in 30 minutes !!
SFX : Smiling

Kei : We are going to find those idiots !!
Girls : YEEAAHH !!

Page 16
Misao : ..... Aren't you going with them ?
Misaki : I do want to go and whack him ....

Misaki : But if I go, I will only do harm to Mamoru

That's why // I'm counting on you, Ayumi and friends ....

Sogabe : Why we are always going uphill !! // I'm tired ! I can't move anymore ! Waaa..... !!
Kusuda : Just shut up, there is nothing we can do until we find a place to sleep // My stomach is also empty. Save your power, don't use it for crying, geeezzz
SFX : Haa... Haa...

Page 17
??? : Aren't we supposed to be born again, Sogabe !?
Sogabe : It supposed to be ..... uuggh
SFX : Step

Sogabe : Huh ?
SFX : Grrrrrrr ........

SFX : zug zug zug zug

Koyoi : Kei-chan, have some oranges
Ayumi : Koyoi-chan, why are you coming with us ?
...I wonder whether Kusuda is taking a rest right now ....
SFX : zug zug zug zug

Page 18
Kei : Or perhaps he is going somewhere .... // .... Huh ?

Mamoru : Waaaa .... A group of stray dogs !! // Sogabe stepped on its tail, It's his fault !!
SFX : woof woof
SFX : Wooommm

Kei : Kusuda !! Kusuda !!!
Ayumi : Ke.. // Kei-chan, stop it, it's dangerous !!
SFX : Gaaaa

Page 19
Kei : Stop it !! Stop this train now ~~ !!
??? : It .. It's not possible, Kei-chan !!
??? : Pedal !! Pedal like you are going to die ~~ !!

Misao : I should also search for Mamoru !

Yuuji : Damn it. Ayumi, where are you going to in this late night ... ?
Letter : I'll be leaving for 2-3 days. Don't worry about me, I'll be fine. Ayumi
TN: I can't really read it. The text is all blurry, but it's not that I made up the translation. At least the first line is still accurate

Yoshihiko : Koyoi, Koyoi !!

Boys : Hah

Misao : .........
Yoshihiko : Do... do you want some oranges ?
SFX : zug zug zug zug

One after another, they are gathering, the youth of the lost childs !!

Next : Even the elder brothers are gathering, the journey is getting wild !?
Part 3

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 27

2008-04-12T12:40:20+00:00
I see that cnet has already posted his TL.
I actually don't like to make a double TL, but I have done 2/3 of it already yesterday.
I think I just have to finish it.

Page 01
------ We will be born again.

Chapter 27
The Boys' Escape
Part 1
The departure of the sleepless dreamers

Page 02
It was in my 4th year in grade school. I could not swim for 25 m during the swimming class. Still wearing my swimming trunks, I ran away until I reached the neighbor town.
If I think about it, I always ran away everytime I was troubled. I think it's already became a habit of mine.

??? : Oi, Kusuda !

Page 03
Kusuda : What ?
??? : You often talk with Enomoto-san, right ?

??? : Here .... // Could you hand it to Enomoto-san ?

??? : It's so nice to be you // Being someone who Enomoto-san likes to meddle with
Letter : To Enomoto-san

From my point of view,
I don't understand why he can't hand this letter by himself. He is tall and his face is not bad at all.

Kusuda : .......
SFX : gloom
SFX : flutter

Kusuda :
Trash bin : Throw your trash here

Last Issue : Watase Meguru, a lot of things has happened that made her unafraid anymore to wear a swimsuit

Page 04
SFX : swhoosh

Kusuda : I think this settled the matter
SFX : ha ha ha ha

Koyoi : There is no class shuffling for the 3rd year. I'm so glad that we can be together again
Nao : Me too
Ayumi : Kei-chan is in a good mood because she can be in the same class with Kusuda again
SFX : smiling

Page 05
Kei : ha... Haaaa!?
SFX : shocked

Ayumi : But you played around with him a lot .... you like him, right ?
Kei : What are you talking about !? // I was only get irritated by his attitude !

Kei : Do you think that I will fall in love with that ugly ? // It wont happen ! A man is his face !! The face is everything !
Ayumi :
Kusuda : ..........

SFX : peek

Ayumi : By the way, about tomorrow .......

Kusuda : ----------- // humph !

Kusuda ..... Even though he likes Enomoto-san, he is cold toward her and they are fighting all the time. Men are complicated.
Zaitsu Mamoru ..... For years, he has feeling for the Onee-san next door. In front of him, she said "I'm sorry" to his feeling. He is now in a deep depression.

Page 06
Kusuda : If you ask me // There is no way I want to fall in love with you, buuu~~

Sumire : Cucumbers, juicy cucumbers

Sogabe-kun ...... He thought that he can do everything as long as he tries. He lost his confident after he met the guy who can do everything.

Page 07
Sumire : Fat and very delicate cucumbers // It's still fresh, you can see it from the spines
Kusuda : ............

Kusuda : Do you still have something you want from me ?
Sumire : No, these are the cucumber from the other day that I used
Kusuda : Then, isn't it rotten already !?
SFX : pluck

Sumire : You look cloudy almost all the time, I just want to know what happened // Why don't you try to tell me this one time

Sumire : What ? you stayed too long on the top of the hill, and now you don't know which way leads to kappa kingdom, is that so ?
Kusuda : It's not that !!
SFX : I see, I see

Kusuda : ~~well, at least you are a girl // maybe I should try it

Page 08
Sumire : Ho hoo // Even though she hates that B-boy, she is always picking on him. About that A-girl feeling right .....

Sumire : I think she has feeling for you // That girl named Enomoto !
Kusuda : It's just an example ! A-girl and B-boy !! It's not me !

Sumire : Then, why are you so troubled over such story ?

Kusuda : Uhh.....
Sumire : It often happens that people act differently from what they feel, you know

Kusuda : But ...... see how I look .....
SFX : swift
Kei : You two !! // What are doing there !?
SFX : swoosh

Page 09
Sumire : Ooo here comes A-girl ....
Kei : A-girl ?
Kusuda : What ? are you going to scold me again !?

Kei : It...It's because you are a dirty guy !! // Though you have a kappa face, you still fooling around with girls !!

Do you think that I will fall in love with that ugly !?
Kusuda : ........... // What do you actually want ..... ?

Kusuda : Why are you always messing with me ?
Kei : Ee.......
Kusuda : It pisses me off !! If you want to make fun of someone, why it has to be me ? There are still the others, right !?

Page 10
Kusuda : I'm a weird guy. Deal with me, look me as I am .... // Someone like you is something I hate the most !!

Kusuda :

Kei : .....I ... // I'm sorry...

Page 11
Kusuda :

Kei: Kusuda !?
SFX : dash

SFX : mumble mumble

Page 12
Mamoru : Ku... su....da....kun ?

Sogabe : ... Why are you copying us ?

Kusuda : Take me as your nakama .... // I'm just good for nothing ......

Mamoru : No Kusuda, you are not like that ..... // Compared with me, I can't recover again, no matter how long ...

Sogabe : Look at me // Even though I already knew that I can't do anything, I still can't change myself.......

Kusuda : I'm ...... worse ........ // ... a lot worse ......... // ...........

Page 13
Kusuda : How about .. // If we go somewhere far away ....?

Kusuda : ..well // It's a bad idea after all

Sogabe : That's it !!
SFX : stand up
Kusuda : Hah ?

Sogabe : Let's make a journey, Kusuda ! // A journey that will make us be born as new again ..... isn't that great !?
Mamoru : huh? huh?
Kusuda : Ee... huh.... are.. are you serious? // Then, let's do it !! Let's go find our true self untill the end of the world !!!

Page 14
Kusuda : Let's do it now, right at this moment !!
Sogabe : Don't rush yourself !! There are plenty of preparations to do
Mamoru : Hmm.. hello ...
Sogabe : Let's leave tomorrow morning.... we'll leave before our parents wake up // We should now make a list of things we need to take with. Like food for example.....

Mamoru : Listen to me for a moment, does it mean that I'm also included !?
Kusuda / Sogabe : Of Course
Mamoru : But we still have school tomorrow and I also don't have enough money
Sogabe : Zaitsu ! If we don't make this journey, perhaps we won't be able to stand on our feet anymore for the rest of our live.

Mamoru : But, we will need money for the trains, hotel and such ....

Sogabe : Are you stupid or what !? We'll use bicycle !!
Kusuda : And we'll camp at night
Mamoru : ~~~~ !!

Page 15
Mamoru : ..... We perhaps will need some dental equipments
Kusuda : Haa~ ?
Sogabe : Look, we can brush our teeth at park ... we can even wash our undewear there // Therefore, 2 pieces of underpants should be enough
hmmm.....

Mamoru : .... baths, what about baths !? How are we going to take a bath !?
SFX : bamp
Kusuda : Do we need to take a bath ?

Koyoi : What are they discussing ?
Ayumi : dunno ....

Kei : ..........
Mamoru :

Kusuda : The gathering time is tomorrow morning at 5:30 ! We'll meet at the highway junction in 4 choume !
TN : "choume" is part of the japanese address, like a city block
Sogabe : You don't have to come if you don't want to, we will still be going ! We want to change !!

Page 16
Sogabe : If you decided to go, don't forget to leave a note to your family !
Kusuda : See you tomorrow, OK !!

I thought about it that night
Kusuda : That's why .... // don't look for me ....

What I need is self-confidence

Letter : To everyone

I'm always fooling around // I want to be someone who never give up

Page 17
With me .... there is a guy who wants to be born again

A guy who wants to stand on his feet again

This will be a fun journey, I'm sure of it ....

Sogabe : .... What time is it now, Kusuda !?
Kusuda : Let me see, it's 5:42
Sogabe : ... perhaps Zaitsu won't come after all

Kusuda : let's wait a little ......

Page 18
Mamoru : I'm sorry !! // I had trouble finding my house key

Mamoru : Don't tell me that you want to leave without me !?

Sogabe : ........
Kusuda : No no, no way !

ALL : Then, let's go !! // YEAHH !!

Sogabe : Say ..... where are we going to ?

Mamoru : Haven't you thought about it yet ? Sogabe-kun !!
Sogabe : It has not to be me who decides that, right ?

Page 19
Kusuda : Oi // We'll go that way

Mamoru : ....to the east ....
Sogabe : To where the day is born ... how nice !!

Sogabe / Kusuda : Let's race to the morning sun !! // Yoooo !
Mamoru : Guys, don't ride too fast, it's dangerous !

For the sake of being born again, off we go !!

Next : The girls and the intrusion of the high schoolers. Their journey is more and more filled with the power of youth !?
Part 2

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 26

2008-04-05T03:09:10+00:00
Page 01
Happiness is not the only thing that happens,
but it's also not always the sadness.
Where all happens,
Is a place we certainly know -----.

on swimsuit Nanoka holds : Kyuuma Nanoka

Chapter 26
Sparkling Pool (The Sequel (or "The Conclusion" to stick with the last chapter))

Page 02
Last Issue : After being defeated by her junior, she ran away. What will happen to her? what will she do?, Iinchou !!

??? : It's been a week since Meguru-chan left us .....

??? : She indeed said that she don't do swimming anymore // But for her to lost from Q-chan was really shocking

??? : Our manager Meguru-chan // She was strict, but ..... it was fun with her here everyday

??? : Let's go and ask her to return here !
SFX : Yeahh....
Nanoka : .......

Meguru : Say !! // Except swimming, what kind of good part do I still have?

Page 03
Yuu : ............. Your breast ?
SFX : stare
Meguru : Wa... // Wait !! breast is not included

Yuu : But it's really a marvelous breast
Misaki : That breast has the power to change the world, it's a waste to conceal it

Meguru : To change // The world ....
Yuu : I think that she should let people notice her breast
Misaki : It's not going to happen, Meguru-chan hates it.
Yuu : ... You are right

Page 04
Meguru : If my breast is really that facinating // Then I should dare myself and go for a "breast - appeal - campaign" !!
SFX : Byoonn

Yuu / Misaki : Exactly !! C'mon now, show your breast and go catch some good guys !! // Take off her ribbon, unbutton her top !
Yuu / Misaki : Well look here, are you trying hide your breast's size with this small bra !?
Meguru : People ... the people are watching, Aaa !!

SFX :Thud
SFX : Kyaaa

??? : I wonder whether Meguru-chan is doing fine ....
??? : Huh ? Isn't that Meguru-chan ?

Page 05
??? : Oiii ! Meguru-chan, about the club ......

SFX: boin boin
Meguru : huh?

Meguru : Se .... Senpai
SFX : stunned

Meguru : I ... I have to cover it !!
SFX : sweating

SFX : troubled
??? : Is her breast really that big ? // It's because her breast was always suppressed by her swimsuit // Outrageous ! that valley is really fantastic!
SFX : whisper whisper

Page 06
Meguru : I'm sorry but ... // There is some place I need to go ... excuse me
SFX : bend
SFX : Boyooin

??? : // //

??? : Meguru-chan is absolutly weird !! // We .... we must tell Takei and Q-chan about this
SFX : dash

My bra and button are just a little bit loose // But I can already feel lots of intense stares
SFX : stare stare
Meguru : What can I do ?, I'm in the middle of crowd now
Nanoka : Meguru-senpai !!

Page 07
Meguru : ........... Q-chan........

Nanoka : Uhhmmm...... // Why are you absent from club without saying anything?

Nanoka : You are my eternal rival .....

Meguru : I'll be very sad if you don't go back ..... // The others feel also the same .... // I .. I ... I don't want to force you, but ...

Page 08
??? : Just say the words, "Please, come back!!"
??? : Takei, you should say something to her too

Meguru : I .....

Meguru : That's right, I want to buy new clothes ! // Come with me, I'll buy you something too !!
Nanoka : Wa...
SFX : Grab

Nanoka : Wait .... let go of me ~!!
Meguru : You'll get lost somewhere if I let you go
Nanoka : No I won't ~! I'm a highschooler now
SFX : struggle

Page 09
Customer Service : Miss, how is it going ?
Meguru : Ugghh... this one is also too small
SFX : Byoon

Meguru : uhhnnn
SFX : squeeezee

Meguru : And yet, after trying lots of tight clothes // Emphasizing the breast, a new Meguru is born !

Meguru : Q-chan, how is it ?
SFX : delight

Meguru : Yaayy, you look great !!
Nanoka : You'll pay for this someday

Page 10
Meguru : Woaa, it's expensive .... // I can only buy you that hat
Nanoka : .........

Nanoka : I don't need it !!
SFX : Swoosh
Meguru : Q-chan !?

Nanoka : Don't be such a coward who worries only about breast // The place where you are belong is over there

Page 11
Sign : Swimming Center

Takei : Watase

Takei : ...... // Let's go

Meguru : Senpai .....

Page 12
Meguru : Ack !!
SFX : grab

Meguru : It hurts ....

Meguru : .........
SFX : squash
Sign : City Pool

Takei : Ok // Let's have a race, Watase !!

Page 13
Meguru : ....I ....

Meguru : I don't want it! I have already lost .......
SFX : push

Meguru : Kyaa.....
SFX : Splash

Takei : ...... We'll do 50 m butterfly for the start

Takei : 50 m backstroke after that // And then, 50 m breaststroke and 50 m front crawl

Meguru : Then, get ready
Takei : I'm ready

Page 14
He trained very hard .....

I was observing his time everyday, that's why I could say that

And yet
Takei : Breaststroke is next
I can't even get my best time again

I feel so heavy ....

I could stride much further with one stroke before // It's not like this ..... This is not how I swim !!

Page 15
Meguru : Haa... haa... haaa
This is frustrating .....

Takei : Now tell me, Watase !? // Are you regretting this !?
Meguru : !

Takei : You wish that you could swim faster, right !? // If you are disappointed, don't give up on swimming then !

Takei : .... Why, Watase ? // Why did you abandon swimming ?

Page 16
Takei : You devoted yourself to swimming, you worked harder than anyone else .......
SFX : jump

SFX : Splash

Meguru : ---- I

Meguru : I stopped to swim not because that I hate it // I ....... // My breast is too big, it's so embarrassing, I don't want to wear a swimsuit !!

Page 17
Meguru : .......... / ..... I finally said it

SFX: blub blub

Takei : ........ Watase

Takei : You don't need to worry about that

Takei : Take my words and never let it bothers your mind again // Did you hear me, Watase !

Page 18
Takei : Besides ....

Takei : My taste is about your size !!
SFX : Pfuuu

Takei : Big boobs are wonderful ! // ha ha ha ... // That's why you should never think about it, keep swimming !
Meguru : Y ... Yes Sir

Meguru : Geeeezzz // You guys are done already !?
Sign : City Pool

Page 19
Meguru : I didn't do swimming for 2 years, you know !! // If you lose that easily, you wont even get a place in any tournament

??? : I can't do it anymore !! Meguru-chan, please turn back to the way you were !!
SFX : pant pant
Nanoka : Uwaaa....! My win against senpai was only that one first time ... !!

Tekai : Damn it, now, race with me in front crawl !

Tekai : You haven't beat me yet in front crawl

Maguru : I'll show you that I can even surpass you in front crawl, Takei-senpai !

---------Then, get ready

........ once again, and no matter how many times it is, It will always starts from the place where it sparks

Next : The boys are reaching their adolescent, a big mess !?
The boys's escape

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 24

2008-03-26T09:57:00+00:00
Sorry for the late TL
I just came from easter holiday.
To speed up the TL, I removed almost all SFX
I hope you enjoy

Page 01
The quarrel between those two comes on stage. With them, lurks a wandering shadow .......

Kusuda : You are so noisy, you know ! You always have complaints to everything I do !
Kei : Th ... that is because of your lack of common sense // Fix up your attitude and stop chasing girls. You kappa !!

Kusuda : There you go again, calling me Kappa !
Kei : There is nothing wrong with calling kappa to someone with kappa face. You kappa, kappa, KAPPA !!!

Page 02
??? : Kappa ... ?

Chapter 24 : Kappa Fight !!

They are being watched by a mysterious someone ....
What will happen to Enomoto & Kusuda

Page 03
Last Issue : Knowing the taste of tears, Chikura-san is becoming mature

Kei : Besides, kappa is an ero-creature, you know ? // Kappa is the suitable nickname for ero-Kusuda
Kusuda : Just call me kappa then ! // For that, I will keep walking on my ero-path

Kusuda : Ugh !?

Kei : What the .... ! Right after you proclaimed yourself as an ero
Kusuda : fluffy .. fu fu fu fu ....
Kei : Stop the daydreaming and apologize ! You kappaaa ---

Page 04
??? : Kappa, I got youuu !
Kei (upper left) : WHAAATTT !?
Kusuda : umpff

??? : I can't belive that I found a kappa in this 21st century // Huh? Where is the head plate? There is no head plate, is he premature ?
Kusuda : mmppphh uumpphh
Kei : Wa... wait, hold a second

Kei : Look at him closely, he is a human ! // Let go of him !!

Page 05
??? : !? He is indeed not green, but that doesn't really matter // I will take him to Theather Club with me
Kusuda : ahaha // ahaha

Kei : Theater Club !? // Why would Kusuda be needed in Theater Club ?
Kusuda : ackk

??? : Theater Club is scouting people for the casting // Except him, I can't think of anyone else for the role of kappa in the next play
Kei : Ka... kappa role !? What is that ? Who exactly are you ?
??? : Me ? I'm the Theater Club's President, Fudounomiya Sumire !

Page 06
Sumire : Hmmm that's right .... I'm in charge as the Club's President for the play in the next graduation party, this will be the first play I'll handle .... // That's why I want to make it a hit no matter what, obvious isn't it ?
Kusuda : Aaa---

Sumire : For that purpose, we need a kappa

Kusuda : I'm telling you, I didn't do anything this time
Kei : You are always fooling around, accusing you is only natural
Koyoi // Ayumi :

Enomoto Kei. Junior High School, 2nd year. A man is his face !!! That is what she always said. For some reasons, it appears that she get affected by kappa face Kusuda lately

Page 07
Kei : Are you actually willing to play in theater ?

Kusuda : Hmmm ......
Kei : I ... I absolutly won't do that // Being together with that girl in the same club, I'm sure there is nothing good will happen

Kei : Besides .......

Kei : I know you must be thinking about that girl's breast right now !!
Kusuda : I really can't forget it, it's so soft .....
Kei : Forget that big breasted girl !!
Sumire : That big breasted girl is right here .....

Page 08
Kei : Woaa ... she's here !!
Sumire : I will let you read the script first // Good boy good boy, did your head plate get dry ? tell me ?
Koyoi :
Ayumi :

Kusuda : Soo... which one is it ?
5 minutes later

Kusuda : Uhmmm ..... I can't find my part
Sumire : What are you saying, it's there, right here !!

Text (left to right, top to bottom):
Princess
----------------------
[.......]
With 10000 Yen ........
The Princess looks downward.
Thinking about what has happened
She goes pass a kappa which is rubbing the plate on its head
[i have to give my answer until tomorrow ..........]
Until then, please hold it ........

Highlighted : Kappa

TN : The text on the script is incomplete, there can be a false translation

Kusuda : I ... I'm just an extra
Sumire : Do not underestimate an extra // There is a deep message wrapped in that paragraph that I want to tell the alumni, it's an important scene

Kusuda. Junior High School, 2nd year. His behaviour shows that he also have affection for Enomoto, his true feelings are still unknown.

Page 09
Kei : This is foolish, there is no need for that role
Sumire : As an amateur, you complain to much !! // What kind of relationship do you have with that kappa ?
Kei : Th .... that is, how should I say, it is .....

Kusuda : And you know ...., that Theater Club's President was so aggressive .... // But that extra role of kappa is really stupid, there is no way I will do that

The two who fell in tears. They were heavily wounded in their youth and are still not able to stand. It is most necessary for them to think of what to do next.

Page 10
Kusuda : Guys, I'm telling you, she thinks I'm a kappa ......

Kusuda : It is impossible to talk with them now

Kusuda : Huh ?

Kusuda : Why there are so many cucumber here ?

Kusuda : .....

Page 11
Kusuda : .....

Sumire : Damn he ran away !!

Kei : What an idiot, Kappa's favorite and what Kusuda likes are two different things

Kei : If you want to catch Kusuda, use this

Page 12
Kei : Put this thing here like thi.......

Kusuda : Ho hooo... look what we have here

Sumire : The kappa is mineee~~ !!

Kei : Noo ! Damn it !!

Page 13
Kei : I just wanted to show off that I know Kusuda better
Kusuda, Please

Sign : PE Storage Room
Don't fall to that girl's temptation

Kusuda : How should I put it ... // You should broaden your mind, don't get fixed only to me. You can still ask someone else to do the role.

Sumire : ------------ // I already knew a little bit how to shake your heart

Page 14
Sumire : Like this for example // Should I try this one .....

Sumire : How about this one ?

Sumire : Or like this ?

Sumire : Ooo do you want to snap it ?
Kusuda : a... awawawa.. wa. wa
Sumire : Or perhaps it's only because you like cucumber

Page 15
Sumire : What's wrong ? // You can eat it if you want to

Kusuda : A... no.... that is ....

Kusuda : This is too much ! Far too tempting !!

Sumire : Say // Could you please listen to my request ?

Page 16
Sumire : I really want a perfect show // And you ....

Sumire : It's only you // I beg you Kusuda !! I will do anything you say

Page 17
Kusuda : ... You got me // I'm weak with that ! ... but I'm // I am ......

Kei : --------- // Kusuda ?

Page 18
Kusuda : What's with you ?

Kusuda : Are you also skipping the 5th period ?
Kei : It ... it's because the exams are already over. There is nothing more important in class

Kei : Moreover ..... // .........

Kei : I don't know what you have done there // I .. I also have some confidents in my breast !!

Page 19
Kei : That's why ... uhmmm .... you know // You .... how should I say it .... that .....
Kusuda : ...........

SFX : Haaaa----
Kei : Wha .... What's with that sighing !!

Kusuda (upper right and lower left) : It's all over now, you don't have to worry // That's why, don't be so noisy !!
Kei : Wha ... What you mean with "it's over" !?

Sumire : This script // It will be sealed until Kusuda has his interest in it
But president ....
??? : I will take the kappa role !!
??? : No, it will be me !!

The case is closed for now ?

Next :
A rival for iinchou !? (or class rep., whatever you like) What will happen to swimming club
[sparkling pool]

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 23

2008-03-15T02:17:02+00:00
Page 01
??? : YEESSS!! The test is finally over
Koyoi : Chikura-chan // How about if we go to Ayumi's house after this?

Nao : I'm sorry, I can't today
Actually, It doesn't matter for me whether the painting finished or not

Kei/Rika : Huh, does Chikura still have club activities today?
Nao : Aaa, I'm sorry
sfx : bump

I just want to meet him // I want to hold it precious

Last Issue : The parting time is already notified. Still, the feeling to be with him remains.

Page 02
The times I can spend together with senpai
sfx : rattle

...those times, the times of happiness come to an end

Chpater 23
Konohana Sakuya 3/3 (In those memories, fully-blooming)
TN: The title is taken from Carlos Net. I must admit this, he is damn good.

Page 03
sfx : pant

Huh?
Yukito : Chikura-san, good afternoon
Senpai usually comes earlier than me

Nao : Perhaps he is busy now, he has just graduated ...

sfx : clatter

Nao : But, something like this ...
Waiting for senpai can perhaps also be fun

Page 04
sfx : tick tick tick

Nao : What actually happen to senpai // As far as I can remember, he didn't say that he has something to do today

Page 05
(no text)
sfx : drag
sfx : thump thump (heart beating)

Page 06
(no text)

Page 07
Nao : ...That is .... // Me ..... ?

To Chikura-san ------
sfx : rustle

Page 08
I'm really sorry that I didn't inform you about my leaving

But everytime I saw you, looking so happy with the painting, I couldn't say it

By the time you read this letter, I will be on my way leaving Japan.

The path I decided to choose doesn't comutate with the people around me. I have already told you that, right.
sfx: tap tap

Sogabe : Waa ....
sfx : bam
Until recently, I was always troubled with that.

Page 09
Sogabe : Chikura-sa......
That is why I went to your school, I wanted to remember it again.
The happiest time I ever had, the time I made the painting.

Nao : Aww...
And then I met you, made a painting together with you, I'm very glad.
sfx : boom

The last words you gave me and your smiles, I will always keep them with me in my whole life

Page 10
sfx : screech
That is why ....
You have to keep smiling, always

Page 11
Nao : Huu.... // WAAAAAA........

Page 12
The one painting that hasn't finished yet
Like the Sakura that start to blossom out there
Sign : Art Room
Your colour
So gentle, so clear

Page 13
Nao : ..........
sfx : sshhh

Senpai
Senpai

Page 14-15
Senpai

Page 16
Is there any chance that you will abandon painting ?
And forget the smiles of someone you hold dear......

Page 17
His face // His brain
Even his dream
There is not even one thing that I can excel him at

I'm not the one who can stop her tears
Sobabe : huu...

Page 18
Sogabe : Huu...uu... // uu...huuu....

Page 19
Nao : I did finish the painting properly

Nao : Right senpai ....

sfx : screech
sfx : bam

Those memories are flourished with Sakura, smiles and .........

Next : A new enemy appears to that unstable couple? (Kappa Fight!!)

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 22

2008-03-08T04:06:01+00:00
critics and advices are welcome, in fact i need some

Page 01
The feeling that start to blossom is being piled with colours, dreaming about the day when spring comes

Chapter 22
Konohana Sakuya 2/3 (opened seam and the change of colour)

Hatsukoi Limited Vol. 1 is being published.
You can find the till now never aired girl, Soako chan, in there

Kawashita Mizuki

Page 02
the sign on top right : Renjou Yukito

sfx : eeee
girl with glasses : so Renjou senpai is the one behind that painting// wow, he's already that skilfull back then
boy : could you also give a look to my painting too, pleaseee.

boy : senpai, What are going to do after you graduated ?
yukito : eeerrrr // for the time being, i'm planning to go abroad

sfx : kyaaaaa
girl : Overseas Study!!
girl : Renjou senpai is awesome, don't you think .....

??? : OK, The door is locked
??? : senpai, please come and visit us again

last issue : Chikura Nao (14 years old), the 1st love feeling hits her

Page03
Nao : uhmmm Renjou senpai

sfx : thump thump thump (heart beating)
Nao : if you don't mind, could you stay for a while and give me some guidance? // s...sorry for making such a selfish request ......

Nao : but my painting isn't progressing much today

Yukito : Chikura san
Yukito : please don't make a pity face like that

Yukito : the request should come from my side

Yukito : i was also thinking to stay and do some painting

Character Introductions :
Cikura Nao ......
2nd year junior high school. A normal girl with a gentle heart. She feels nervous when the senpai she adores give her a lesson. Perhaps, it is love.

Renjou Yukito ......
3rd year senior high school. The art club's OB (old boy), he's the one who made the painting that chikura adores. He's handsome and smart.

Page 04
"i'm sure he already has his hand full with the preparation to study abroad"
"could it be that he thinks i'm being unpleasant"

Yukito : Can i use that palette ?
Nao : aa, sure ...

sfx : fuwaa.....
"....... dear God"

"This one painting i always hope to be completed"
"let it stay unfinished for eternity"

Page 05
"please // let me always be on his side"
Yukito : i think you can do the rest by yourself

Nao : Eee....!?
Yukito : the final exam is coming near, isn't it ?

Yukito : starting from next week, the club activities will be canceled for awhile, that's what i heard ....
Nao : I'LL COME !!

Nao : Even though i have an exam
Nao : the time you give to teach me is more precious

Page 06
Yukito : but, even if you said that .....
Nao : Don't worry !! I was attending my class properly // I don't really need to learn much for the test

Yukito : is that really ok
Nao : yes !!

Yukito : then ..., see you on monday
Nao : ok ..!

Sogabe : .. say Kusuda // i'm actually an amazing guy, right ?

Page 07
Kusuda : Hah ?
Sogabe : I'll tell you this ...... // My magnificent part as a man are like ......

Sogabe : a well ordered face
Kusuda : Sogabe, have you ever tried to use your head ?
Sogabe : an excellent brain
Kusuda : Have i ever told you that you got nothing but 2 and 3 in this 2nd semester?
TN: (2 and 3 = 20% and 30%)
Sogabe : as a man, i have a great conversational skills
Kusuda : aaa noo, that one is your biggest problem

sfx: argghhh
Sogabe : It's just because i haven't got serious !!
sfx : roarrr
Kusuda : Then, why don't you become serious!!

Sogabe : by the way, Zaitsu is also in the art club
Kusuda : so what
Sogabe : Kusuda .... can you ask Zaitsu what Chikura-san is doing in the club ?
Kusuda :

Page 08
Kusuda : I don't really like Zaitsu lately
Kusuda : but there no helping for it, geezzz .....
Sogabe : I'm counting on you Kusuda

sfx : dyooonnn
Kusuda : yo // yooo Zaitsu

Mamoru : aaa Kusuda-kun

sfx : zwaa
Mamoru : uuu

Ayumi : < Zaitsu-kun >
Mamoru : u hu hu hu hu hu
sfx: gloomy
Sogabe : w...what the heck .....
Kusuda : i heard that his feelings towards his onee-san for 14 years was rejected

Sogabe : the standard of good looking man is leaving japan, that's what i think // somehow, i think i can become a close friend with Zaitsu
TN : both Yuuji and Yukito are blonde, got the point ?
Kusuda :

Character Introductions :
Sogabe-kun ......
Reverse Boy, he thinks something that is not himself. He likes Chikura-san. Chikura-san also likes him, in his dream ......

Zaitsu Mamoru .....
He had to face that his love towards his Onee-san was one sided and suffer from heartbreak (fell sorry for him). Perhaps, he's in the state like there is no tomorrow for him.

TN:
that "fell sorry for him" is not a TN, it's really stated in the manga

Page 09
Nao : by the way, to which country are you planing to go for your overseas study?

Yukito : hmmm.... // perhaps you wouldn't know it even if i tell you, it's a small country
Nao : ?
Yukito : if you want to learn language, USA would be good. For painting, i think Europe is preferable ......

Yukito : to be exact, you can not call it an overseas study for my case

Nao : Ee ?

Yukito : at least in my mind, i still consider the poor countries as overseas
Yukito : in order to support them, i'm intending to go with the organisation in Japan

Page 10
Yukito : I'll become a member and support them the best i can
Yukito : in my lifetime, i want to make painting together with the kids from various countries. That's my dream

sfx : sshhhh

Yukito : Chikura-san
Yukito : why do you like to make painting?

Page 11
Yukito : everything that can't be captured in a picture // can be drawed in a painting, don't you think?
Yukito : the scenery that we now look, the smile of the person who we encountered in the past and hold dear // even the dream we draw in our heart

Yukito : and if that painting resounds in someone's heart, it'll make me happy
".....[in my lifetime]....."

Page 12
Yukito : besides, painting can be made by using primitive tools
"even when i was hearing his dream and the way he thinks about the painting // that was the only word that clings in my ears"

Yukito : Chikura-san?

Nao : ...senpai
Nao : you are really an amazing person

Nao : i'm touched ....
Yukito : waa!! // i don't think i have said something that great

"after that // i can't make a proper conversation"

Page 13
"I'm ...."
Sogabe : y.....yooo Chikura-san

Nao : Sogabe-kun

Sogabe : I ...I often see that high school boy in the art room lately
Nao : Renjou senpai ? // he's the art club's OB, he's really good at painting

Nao : You have seen his uniform, right !! it's from Kaitei High you know, he's also really good at studying

Nao : but instead of entering an university, he chooses the path as a volunteer ...... It seems that he can't do something normal
Nao : too bad

Page 14
Nao : He maybe will never come back to Japan
Nao : to go around the world is his dream .....

Sogabe: th.....
Sogabe : .............

Nao : I'm sorry // because of me you couldn't ride on your bike and always walked with me
Sogabe : no, it's nothing
Sogabe : My house is right after this corner afterall

Nao : thank you Sogabe-kun
Nao : then, see you tomorrow

Page 15
Sogabe : "He's tall and good looking // he's good at painting"
Sogabe : "He could get himself into Kaitei High"
Sogabe : "His dream for the future is to be a volunteer"
Sogabe : "........."

Sogabe : compared with me .... // is there something i can win from him

"[see you again tomorrow] ...."
"yup, that's right, the painting isn't finished yet"
"that's why there is still tomorrow"
"there is still tomorrow ....."

Yukito : The graduation ceremony of my school was being held today

Page 16
Nao : really !! // what should i say ... uhmmm ... congratulation ... ?
Yukito : ha ha ha .. thank you chikura-san

Yukito : i actually wanted to finish it until my graduation

Nao : after we paint that last part of the sakura flower from this morning, it will be completed // just a little bit more, right senpai

Yukito : aaa.....
Nao : aa.....

Nao : we perhaps didn't make it until the gradution ceremony // but we do manage it before the sakura bloom, great isn't it

Page 17
Nao : senpai // i really have respects on you .... to have such dreams
Nao : senpai !! give your best !!

Yukito : I'm beaten .... // no one ever supported that dream of mine

Yukito : not my parents // not my friends, not my teachers

Page 18
Yukito : Chikura-san
Yukito : I'm very thankful .....

Page 19
Nao : th..... then excuse me

"the art room at evening, what's actually in there ....? "
sfx : suuu..... (wind voice)

Next : Farewell with tears and smile
"that memories bloom to its fullest"

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 1

2008-03-02T19:03:49+00:00
critics and advices are welcome. I'm a very cool headed guy, don't worry.

for those who still don't have the RAW
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Page 1

Limited Girl

??? : SOAKO !!!, until when will you stay in the bathroom, you'll be late again today
Soako : Oh nooo !! I'm gonna be in trouble

My name is Andou Soako (2nd year, junior high school)
People see me as the clumsiest girl and i approve that

Soako : huh ?
Soako : my breasts swing rather unusual
Soako : and it's breezing down there
Soako : HAAA.....

Page 2
Soako : nooo.... this can't be true
Soako : i forget to wear my underwear

Soako : how far will my clumsiness goes? am .... am I getting worse ?
Soako : before it get noticed, i should go back home and put on an underwear, if not .... aaaa

Soako : thinking of being late, i already have late for 9 times consecutively

Soako : I don't want today to be the 10th times

Soako : besides, the school is already near

Soako : I ... I'm gonna be just fine
Soako : as long as no one knows, i can still go to school

Page 3
Soako : uu.....
Soako : it fells kinda strange, sitting here without underwear

Soako : but i'll keep up, the only thing i should do is not to leave this place for one whole day
Ayumi : Soako-chan ?

Soako : wh..wh..wh what? what's wrong?
Ayumi : the first period is science, don't you know ?

Ayumi : everyone else have already gone to the science room

WHAATTT !! CLASROOM CHANGE
Soako : nooo.... no no no, i don't want to move

Page 4
Ayumi : is something wrong?
Koyoi : Soako-chan is somehow weird today

Soako : S ... Stairs
Soako : he . he he he
Soako : there's no way i could climb the stairs

Soako : but, i dont have other option

Ayumi : ? why are you leaning on the wall while taking the stairs ?

Soako : yup, just like this. one step after another

Page 5
Kusuda : what's with that sluggish move
Soako : AA........

Soako : aa.....
Soako & Kusuda : aa .....

Soako : aa ....! There is a flying UFO outside the window !!

Kusuda : HEH ... for real ?

Koyoi : where? where?

Ayumi : Soako-chan are you OK ?
Soako : aa..yup i'm fine, i'm fine
Kusuda : The UFO is no where to find
Soako's bad day is long not over yet ....

will there be the second chapter ?

Limited Girl (END)

Translation: Hatsukoi Limited 21

2008-03-02T00:50:29+00:00
Page 1
A painting that hasn't finished yet
Like the sakura that start to blossom out there
your colour is so gentle, so clear
this is just my memory
Nao : uu........

Translator note :
The hint about sakura in page 1 says that the story in page 1 takes place in the beginning of spring (around middle of März - April ).
The main story itself occurs in February. Remeber the tragedy in Valentine from last chapter? this is the story right after that.
In short, the story in page 1 is telling us of what happen to Nao in the future. Don't ask me, i don't know, just guess it.

Page 2
Chikura Naos's 14th winter. At that time, there is a love story that didn't begin

Chapter 21
Konohana Sakuya 1/3 (one flower bud)

Page 3
Kei : you girls, do you realize what you have done to the person you like

Page 4
Kei : Koyoi, you hurt your oni-san's feeling
Koyoi : Kei-chan is angry

Ayumi : this is bad, she is serious
Kei : Ayumi, you hurt Zaitsu-kun's feeling

Kei : YOUUU, it seems that you girls really don't understand the circumtances at all

Kei : Imagine that you were in their shoes
Kei : let's take this as example, in order to make Ayumi-chan give up on Mamoru, Mamoru shows you the moment he give Yamamoto a present
Kei : Have you ever tried to see it from another point of view ? you never thought about it right ?
Kei : Think of what kind of shock and imagination could you get

Last Issue : The LoveBomb was actually a real bomb

Page 5
Kei : I know that you two feel bad about it ........

Ayumi : What should we do Kyoi-chan. I have hurt Zaitsu kun's feeling
Koyoi : Me too, i have done such horrible thing to onii-chan, I'm a bad girl

Ayumi : I will go ask for forgiveness to Zaitsu kun. At this time, he is perhaps in the Art room
Koyoi : I ... I'll go to Onii-chan

Rika : i assume they already got the point
Nao : Will Ayumi chan be fine, i wonder. I guess i'll also go to my club

Page 6
Nao : By the way, how was your valentine Kei-chan ?

Kei : Should i handed it to him, should i throw it at him, should i immidiately yell at him. I'm ........
Rika : I'll look after her from here, just go to your club

Page 7
Ayumi : I'm sorry, really really sorry
Mamoru : It's ok, i already forget about it. Don't cry anymore, Arihara-san

Ayumi : BUT.......
Mamoru : A ... Arihara-san

Mamoru : Chi.... Chikura-san, i'm sorry but i'm rather busy right now
Nao : don't worry, I already know.

Nao : By the way, where are the other members
Mamoru : Arihara-san cried so loud while she bragged into the Art room, everyone ran away

Page 8
Mamoru : Then, i will take Arihara back home. I'll give the key to you, is that fine with you
Nao : yup

Ayumi : After school, togheter with Zaitsu-kun, just the two of us
Nao : isn't that great Ayumi chan

Mamoru : Then Chikura-san, don't forget to lock the door
Ayumi : Bye bye Chikura-chan

Nao : sooo...

Page 9
Nao : Everytime i look at that painting, i can't breathe

Nao : Row of light pink Sakuras Tree painted with watercolor
Nao : Renjou Yukito .... san. In which year was he. He is so skillful, i'm sure he went to an art school

on painting (Renjou Yukito)

Nao : and me, i'm really hopeless

Page 10
Nao : Huh, what's wrong ? did you forget something ?

Page 11
??? : hmmmm ...., yes, perhaps it is something i left here

Nao : may i ask you who you are ?
??? : are you the only member of this club ?
Nao : ? oh no, it's only by chance today

Page 12
??? : I'm sorry, i'm not someone suspicios, i was in the art club before
??? : I was looking into the room and there is only one person ..... it kind'a made me sad

Nao : amazing, this person ....

That uniform belongs to a famous school, Kaitei High School
From what i heard, the number of students from our school that can enter Kaitei High School are very rare

??? : so, what are you drawing right now ?
Nao : I.... I'm still starting to draw

??? : that shape of tree, it's sakura right
Nao : ye ... yes

???: The motiv is natural, that's why i can tell it right away. There is also some strenght in the design.

Page 13
Nao : no, compared to that painting, my painting is still ....
??? : That painting of "Row of Sakuras Tree" right
Nao : yes

??? : I was the one who made that painting
??? : i never thought that it would be ornamented like this

Page 14
Nao : You must be jokin me
??? : huh ? something wrong ?

Nao : I'm ... I'm .....

Since i came to this school, how many times have i gazed to that painting
How many times have i run my brush in order to get close to your level

I never thought that you are Renjou Yukito

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Nao : I .... I
Nao : I really like that painting, i always come to see that painting

Nao : to be able to meet you in person ... makes me happy
Nao : Renjou senpai

Nao : but .....

Nao : It doesn't matter how many times i tried, i never get close to your painting

Nao : What should i do so i can draw a warm and gentle painting like that

Yukito : then, let's finish this painting together

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Nao : Re .... really, how about your school
Yukito : This year is my graduation. I already have decided what course to take. I'm free now, i really don't have anything special to do everyday

Yukito : Should we draw the sky ?
Yukito : Cobald blue and ultramarine ........ serurian blue will suits the sakura

Nao : OK
Yukito : The cloud would look good if we draw it when the paints still half dry

Yukito : let's draw the cloud together
Yukito : errrr.......

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Nao : Chikura ... Chikura Nao

The painting that day was painted with transparent blue
The cloud was skillfully made by senpai. And mine, just like before, distorted

Yukito : I'll come again tomorrow

I didn't really take that words seriously.

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But ....

Yukito : yoooo

Nao : I forgot to tell you that there is no club activities in our school every thursday

Yukito : I was thinking that maybe you don't come by some chance
Yukito : Thank you Chikura-san

Nao : umm ... How should i paint it in case like this

Yukito : Where ? i see, first make some dark brown colour .....

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Nao : like this ?
Yukito : yup, put the dark colour first then the bright colour

Yukito : yup, just like that. You are good Chikura-san
Nao : aa, really. To be told like that by senpai

Nao : makes me really happy

Into what colour does her heart change into ...?

Next : Chikura-san get a presentiment of a faint love
"The Name of Colours"