Epsilonium Releaseshttps://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/rss2008-11-27T11:02:47+00:00/favicon.icoMangaHelpers Adminsadmin@mangahelpers.comhttps://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/7459Translation: Rozen Maiden II 42008-11-27T11:02:47+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comFinally! I am so sorry it's been so long>< I just rushed whenever I had time so grammar is quite rough (As always) but... if there is any part you have question with, I should be able to clarify.
This time I started to call "Shimada Jun" as "NW(Not-winded) Jun".
*RESERVED FOR KUU AND BAKAYAROU SCANS.
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01 left top- Great hit series! right aori- I shall smear the world with despair. Rozen Maiden Tale4 Another Guest
02 left aori- Kirakishou's threat is approaching. Yet another book sent to Jun...! What's inside...!? NW Jun- T...this... - How to Make a Girl... - A...Again?
03 Shinku- The tea is lupid - I have told you to warm the cup beforehand NW Jun- No... I haven't heard Shinku- Jun on the other side knows it NW Jun- No way I would know... Shinku- What's that rebellious color in your eyes? NW Jun- No Shinku- ...fine, be careful next time - Where's the milk? Go get it NW Jun- W...What's this situation, being scolded by a little child... - At this rate, I will be regressing toward a wrong direction...
04 - (I never thought) For this to be sent here again... Box(still Jun's thought)- From who? For what? - but foremost NW Jun- What Doll could be made this time? - At last, I couldn't complete Shinku all by myself - But this doll(/time)... sfx- excited Shinku- Jun - I told you - Do not open that book - We don't know if that is not Kirakishou's trap NW Jun- Neh...but I just might want to see how other dolls look like... Shinku- Then I will tell you instead - Which doll are you interested in, temp-servant? NW Jun- Um...then, the First Doll...Suigintou, was it? - Her name is relatively easier to read, and I have this image she might be gentle...
05 sfx-thud NW Jun- Whaa Shinku- Change the tea to new one! NOW! NW Jun- eh... you said next time... Shinku- Quickly! NW Jun- it seems like I stepped on a landmine... (*Japanese phrase for touching on something that makes a person instantly angry/otherwise emotionally triggering) Shinku- Jun - We do not know if the book was sent by Winded Jun or not - We have to wait for Winded Jun to contact us NW Jun- ...but I am "Jun," too
06 Saitou- So you see, selling tickets is part of my quota as a member(/ of theater) - and I have to buy them by myself when there were tickets left NW Jun- Ah...is that why you invited me to see the show... Saitou- Oh, that's ... actually the case, yeah... (*She was going to say"that's not the case," but couldn't deny it) NW Jun- ...right - Hey, wasn't that conversation just now good? - it's natural Saitou- Oh I just remembered! - Everyone at theater was really impressed with your advise about my costume before - If you don't mind, they want you to check out their costumes as well NW Jun- Eh...m, me? Saitou- Yeah! Whenever you've got time... do you not like it? NW Jun- b...but, I can't do such important(/responsible) job... Saitou- Please! I beg you! NW Jun- Saitou-san... she is as overreacting as her wish is to become an actor
07 - uhh...alright, I don't know if I could help, but... Saitou- Yaaay! Thank you! Boss- ...hmm... Kid- Hey, where is Kero-comics? Boss- Ah? No Kero-comics to sell to you - call me Mister (not "Hey") Saitou-...oh, let's get back to work - then Sakurada-kun, I will contact you at home NW Jun- yeah... - Change - I can change this time
08 - "How to Make a Girl" was sent to me - My past self sent an e-mail to me and Shinku came - Everything is starting to spin in good direction - If I would help my past self as he says to change the past - then perhaps, my world now will also - change Shinku- ...uh....? - What sound was that? - ...or was it my imagination... - Jeez...Why would humans make readings with such big stack of paper... - it's so inconsiderate
09 - Yes, Hollie, it's easier to read it on the floor - Oh... the Winded Jun sometimes also read this stack, didn't he - Nori said this was for preparing Jun for "Entrance Exam"(*for high-school; Jpn high-school require entrance exam) - Although in the end it was mostly Hinaichigo's toy - ...yes, sure... - we have to get it back... (*at this point it is not too clear "what" should be gotten back)
10 - ! - ... could it be... (thought)- Kirakishou...? NW Jun- I'm home- Shinku- Jun, do not come here! NW Jun- what? - eh... Shi... Shinku? Shinku- I did not expect you to appear at all (*talking to Suigintou) NW Jun- black feather...? - is someone there...?
11 Shinku- First Doll of Rozen Maiden - Suigintou...!!
12 NW Jun- Er...err - this is... - Shinku... that black doll is...? Shinku- You see her, it's Suigintou! NW Jun- Neh, I don't know her... why is she in my room? Shinku- How would I know? Suigintou- ...so not beautiful as ever, Shinku - to take out on a thing... NW Jun- th..."thing"...is that me? Shinku- None of your business NW Jun- She didn't deny it Shinku- Why did you also come to this world?
13 Suigintou- Well... what do you think? - Do you think I would just tell you? Foolish Shinku Shinku- No, I don't think you would... your immodest retort hasn't changed at all Suigintou- You, too, are as ugly as ever more Shinku- Hollie! Suigintou- Ahahaha! You got angry! Meimei! NW Jun- Wait a minute, what's this!? - Whaaaa - S... - STOP!!
14 Shinku- What NW JUn- t, these flower petals and feathers were all because of you!? - You shouldn't be making such a mess! - Whatever the matter is, do not fuss around in other's room! - No fightings!! No messes, too! - Quickly clean up now!! Shinku- Why should I do this... NW Jun- Of course! Arrgh damn combustible trash collection day is still away...! - I can't live in such dirty room! Shinku- To think of it, Jun indeed was fussy about cleaning
15 Suigintou- Are you done now? Shinku- Hey you!! NW Jun- Now it's better... hey, do you not drink teas? Suigintou- No, I hate it Shinku- You lier, I had a fight with you 1077480 hours ago about the teatime Suigintou- tch Shinku- humph NW jun- They really dislike each other... - S...so did Suigintou really came out of that mirror in bathroom... Shinku- Yes... but the book is still inside the closet - she probably came without any relation with it
16 NW Jun- ... There is nothing strange Shinku- but that is the entrance to N-field - N-field is connected to something that "projects" - A mirror, or a surface of water - or a closed eye of someone sleeping NW JUn- it's not gonna project if it's closed Shinku- It cannot project dreams unless it is closed NW Jun- what a logic... Shinku- I would like to see it closely, too. Jun, please hold me up NW Jun- eh... Suigintou- it's no use
17 - That's not the real "door" - It's just a rabbit hole irregularly opened - Even I don't know why it connected to here - I was just randomly opening doors at "scrap floor" in N-Field... Shinku- "Scrap floor"...? - that place where "Doors of world with lost chances" get wasted...? - Were you looking for something? Suigintou- ...There is no reason to tell you - Anyways, I will have to just wait until the world gets connected again - I don't intent to stay in a world like this Shinku- ...yes - I have to go back to the world where I can meet Jun again...
18 NW Jun- World with lost chances...? - So Shinku is also going to go back to the other world... even though I am the one who assembled her to some point - "Winded Jun, Winded Jun"... - It's both me after all. Saitou- Sakurada-kun! - Sorry to have you wait for so long!
19 - We rent a room at community center to practice every week - But everyone has work to do so all of us rarely get together Actor- A E I U (*practicing voice projection) - One - Two NW Jun- There are so many people I am not so used to... - they all look kind of physically active... Saitou- Ah - Sakurada-kun, let me introduce - it's my elder brother NW Jun- Eh Saitou- He is not an actor, but he helps constructing stage sets NW Jun- they don't look similar
20 - He's big... but it's not like he's fat...it is all muscles? - Eh? Saitou- Come here NW Jun- Errrh.... - I... - I want to go home...! Shinku- Why are you staying in this room - You can just go out like stray cat
21 Suigintou- I would already have done so if I could - I am staying just because I don't know when that mirror might get connected again - Why won't you go away? You're an eyesore Shinku- You are the one who came later Suigintou- so what? Fool Shinku- You called me fool again? sfx- tinkle tinkle Suigintou- ...shut up, it's not a fight, alright - I will crush you in my hands like insect if you talk big, Meimei, Lempika Shinku- Lempika... - Souseiseki's artificial spirit... Suigintou- Yes it is - but now it is mine... - it's the proof that I stole her Rosa Mystica
22 - I have two Rosa Mysticas inside me.. - I am at least twice as strong as you are Shinku- You know what will happen to sisters who got the piece of soul stolen - Do you not have any hesitation or remorse Suigintou- Aren't you crazy? - that's the (way it is in) Alice Game - We sisters can only fight and deprive of each other to become the one beautiful, true being Shinku- ...yes - you are right
23 Suigintou- ...Shinku, what should I do for your annoyance - Always looking down as if your eyes see through everything, speaking from above - making face like you are always pure Shinku- ...No - no, Suigintou - I, just like you - have taken other sister's Rosa Mystica Suigintou- ...Huh? Stop joking - Your body has only one Rosa Mystica. There is only Hollie the artificial spirit around you Shinku- This body is a temporary body - My real body doesn't exist in this world
24 - The other Rosa Mystica is in the captured real body - Hinaichigo remained there to deceive Kirakisho so I could escape Suigintou- ...I don't get it - Are you saying that you took Hinaichigo's Rosa Mystica to make it yours? - ...ha... - Ahahahaha!! - Oh my! You are just the same! - Ha! Hinaichigo's Rosa Mystica!
25 - see, you were such friends playing friends! - Ahahaha! Shinku- ...I have no intension of explaining all - you wouldn't understand how noble Hinaichigo was even if I did Suigintou- Ahahaha! Shinku- ...but - your voice - is so grating (/annoying) Suigintou- ___Oh yes that eyes Shinku - That eyes fit you more
26 aori- A crash...!!
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Ok... with the tale 8 having come out this week, there are 4 chapters more to go... but closer to Christmas my time only gets shorter :-\ I will be moving in one month, too... It's going to be slow still...I am sorry.https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/937Translation: Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 72008-09-22T12:07:52+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comHi, long time no see! here's the translation of Embalming ch. 7!!
Free to be used in scanlation/int translation, with credit cited
Proofreading recommended, especially grammar/sentence structure
Suggestion/Question welcomed, but note that I am busy
Keys for notes:
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Embalming ch.7[iNDENT] 01 - two ales added- - three Jin and a plate of nuts here! - Aren't Fish and Chips not coming? - We'll be late for the ship - That was delicious. Hey, bill, please! - Oh no, it's broken - Hey Azalea! Azalea- yes yes yes yes - yes I am coming!!!
02 Townsman- Hi Azalea - As good as usual - What, just a little, hey? - Nothing is to be lost Azalea- Something is!! - the maiden romance is lost! - It's gone away! Townsman- maiden, eh? how old was Azalea? Townsman- better hurry, you'll be late for marriage Townsman- No one will accompany a wrinkled woman Azalea- All right then! - I will let you do it if you want it so badly! - But once a 10 pence! - How's that!! - Ehhhh.... - Ain't I so popular... - and ain't you so terrible...
03 - Increase, increase! (*opposite of discount... I couldn't find a fit word) - once a 10 shillings! Townsman- Wow, expensive! Townsman- nonsense! Azalea- How's that you fools! - Come and touch if you ca___ - AWww!? - Alright, what a nerve you've got!! - 10 shillings, now!! - ...oh - who are you?
04 - Well you are the new face here, what rich family are you from? - or are you lost in the way? Phillip- No - I am not lost, I was just sent from my father to be in charge of___ Azalea- wait! you are injured - what happened? townsman- ...isn't it the butt!? townsman- it is the butt!! townsman- just how hard is Azalea's butt...! Azalea- It is soft! - It's (soft like) peach!! - It's (soft like) marshmallow!! man- hey get out of the way - hiccup - I am not done talking yet - I just gotta tell this greenhorn the rules of the society
05 Azalea- I see you for the first time, too - are you new to this port? then I am telling you now - I don't know what's up at the other ports - but this Pub is for everyone to have fun - It's alright to party and make noise - but if you are going to start rampaging... Man- If I rampage? - what will you do!? you bitch!! Phillip- Watch out!
06 man- foolish outsiders man- are you alright, Azalea? Azalea- yeah thanks - I am alright - but
07 - do you understand? this is not the place for a gentleman to come - If you've got the lesson, then never come again - that's for your sake Phillip- I'll come again Azalea- good courage - then come with the pay next time - 10 pounds! - You've stuck your face into my butt, I won't let you say "no!" Phillip- I can't pay the money as such - I am a gentleman - instead___
08 - I will come again - to see you - with 10 pounds worth of bouquet. aori- They've met, they've loved, then___!
09 Azalea- really - I wonder if a barmaid at a pub was that interesting - I got such in favor with him - and he even made a proposal Profile: Azalea Millet (19) - formerly a barmaid - On the way of love escape with Phillip
10 Phillip- Would you please be my wife? - Whatever happens, I will protect Azalea Azalea- one is the heir of a gentry - the other the tramp-rozen barmaid - Completely Different Class - Completely Different world - There's no way we could get along well - don't you think? - that's why - "Yes, Phillip, but everyone will probably disagree" - "There's no chance we could get the marriage conduct signed"
11 - "Let's go to Gretna Green" - "In that place, anyone could swear their love (/marry)" - "We won't know what accidents could happen, so let's bring as much wealth(/money) as we can on to the way" - And then - I should see the timing and run away with all the money - the greenhorn would wake up from a dream and not go on to the wrong track - and with the money I wouldn't have to be a barmaid anymore - well, that was the original plan - I obviously did not consider such accident as this foolish girl Elm- hey - Don't Azalea - love - Phillip?
12 - If you really like him, then that's alright! - You can come over the class or even the world! - You should go to Gretna Green!! - That way Azalea wouldn't have to be a bad pers___ - !! Azalea- Shut your mouth up, you fool - this world isn't anything like a romance novel! Elm- It's no different! - Ashuhit and I are even humand and a frankenstein! - still we are getting along good!! Azalea- "good?" Which lost child got left behind and was crying? Elm- I wasn't!! (Elm's mouth)- ouch!
13 Azalea- You seem to be really liking that man Ashuhit - but you will never know what he is up for - maybe for money like me - or just interested in your strange body - perhaps even a total idiot believing that you are a frankenstein for real - just beware so you won't cry in the e___ -!! Elm- Do not speak - evil of Ashuhit!! - Indeed Ashuhit is a - sly, gloomy, - mean, blunt, Azalea- ...just what's up with this man? Elm- black-blooded, - cunny-neenie(/cunning) and - bit of a Lolita-complex guy, but
14 - He had been with me all this time since I was created! - He was the only one who had been with me!! Elm&Azalea- Ah (Azalea)- smirk (Elm)- oops?
15 Azalea- Ohh is it for me? Elm- No~ Azalea- Thank you very much~ Elm- give me back~ Azalea- you are such a nice girl Elm-chan Elm- Azalea you idiot~ Phillip- Hey if you don't sleep you'll have hard time tomorrow~ - well that was a fun night yesterday - I see you two have made friends already Profile: Phillip Wilkinson (21) - heir of overseas merchant - gentry - On the way of love escape with Azalea
16 Azalea- yeah right Elm- auuu Phillip (from side)- wow you are even carrying Elm-chan's bag for her Azalea- Don't say anything unnecessary to Phillip, ok? - then I will get the bag back to you - A foolish girl should just think of going to London with Ashuhit (and nothing else) - that's probably the best for you Phillip- Azalea, there is a village nearby - let's rest a little and then look for a church Azalea- yes, Phillip
17 (Elm)- "hey___" - "Don't Azalea love Phillip...?" Elm- ah - that's an owl Phillip- Elm-chan, owls are nocturnal, so they won't fly during days Elm- that's strange, it really was an owl - Elm has really good eyes (???)- a nice suit - and strong trunk - slender body, - handsome face with glasses - And likely to be - companied by woman...
18 - found him - he's 2km away - he'll probably come in 20 minutes - there is a depressed ground of a hill 1km away, so___ Cadavelick- I don't care Owl- what? Cadavelick- I don't wanna walk - even 100m is bothersome Owl- What are you saying, there are too many people here - just because you are human-shaped, don't think___ Cadavelick- Oh then - these people are the obstacles?
19 - then that's easy - we'll just have to destroy them Owl- Hey wait! - stop, oi___
20 Elm&Azalea&Phillip- What's this!? - What in the earth...? Old lady- uh
21 Cadavelick- it's not "what" did it - it's "Who" did it Profile- Cadavelick Spasm (?) - a stray frankenstein with creator unknown - has an ability to harden the (horny layer of) skin Azalea- What this...!? Phillip- Azalea, to my back(/hide behind me)! Cadavelick- You are - the man, huh?
22 - Female companions are bothering - I don't need you!! Phillip- watch out! Elm- you frankenst__
23 Phillip- Elm-chan!!
24 - Run...away - he's a monster
25 - run away Azalea!! Cadavelick- now...
26 - listen you greenhorn - I am getting money outa you now - If you don't want to die, contack Polar Route right now Phillip- Polar Route... (Elm)- Polar Route - is a secret Phillip- What are you talking about (thought)- Or is Elm-chan - tagged with this___ -!! Cadavelick- Don't pretend you know nothing - if you bother me_____
27 - ...oioi - you are harder than you look
28-29 - huh - the last preyer for the God? - even if you prey that injury would not (heal)___ Elm- That___ - hurts so much hey!!
30 - I would have been dead - if I had been a human!! Owl- oh my gees - that girl is same as Cadaverick... - she controlls her skin, too...! Profile: Harpy(?) - The Chimera frankenstein with human brain and vocal chord implanted in horned owl
31 - They are both skin-controlling - frankenstein!! aori- The extraordinary powers...now crashes!! [/INDENT]
ok, I'm sorry, I rushed a little and I haven't really checked for grammar or sentence structure etc. but anyways, here you go!https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/936Translation: Rozen Maiden II 22008-06-30T10:53:20+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comHere you are. Tale 3 RAW is already out and Tale 4 is coming up, but it's the translation of Tale 2.
Fine to be used in scanlation/int translation, with credit cited
Proofreading recommended, especially grammar/sentence structure
Suggestion/Question welcomed, but note that I am busy
Keys for notes:
y (/x) -> y can be replaced with x
y (x) z -> x can be inserted between y and z
(*x) -> notes
Note about Rozen Maiden Series:
The names of the dolls are spelled in Japanese pronounciation.
Since there are two Juns, "Shima.Jun" would be the 19-year-old Jun and "Sakura.Jun" the 14-year-old one.
I have seen only the RAW version of Rozen Maiden Season I, so forgive me if I misphrased some keywords like "Field of N".
Anyone free, providing a link for RAW might be helpful for scanlators I suppose.
It's labeled "seinen," but I don't think the genre really fits... so just don't be quick about this.
Rozen Maiden Tale2 "E-Mail from Past" [iNDENT] 01 left aori- Please wake Shinku up from sleep by your hands. right aori- "Rozen Maiden" The Antique Dolls dressed in mysteries and secrets created by a Great Doll Creator Rozen
02 phone: "Who is Shimada?
I had a hard time finding you. There is not much time, I will go straight to the point.
Kirakisho's power is too strong, and Canaria and I cannot rescue everyone.
Please help.
Jun Sakurada"
Shima.Jun- Jun Sakurada....me? - This is the account I was using when I was in middle school...
03 - A mail from middle schooler me...? - haha... - I myself think it is stupid... - but are you my past self...? ...here you go phone- Yes. Do you remem(*cut off) Shima.Jun- Wow - He's quick (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Do you remember the direct mail you got when you were in middle school? - You are me in the world of "not winded" - and I am in the world of "winded" - The time goes by little differently... but I am your middle school self
04 Shima.Jun- If I could redo from that point of time... - Impossible... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- by the way... why were you writing "Shimada" in your doorplate? Shima.Jun- It's only kept the doorplate of former resident... - I can't bear dangling my personal information in front of the house (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Personal Information? It's just a doorplate - ...I feel like you are small. And you are my future self... Shima.Jun- N...Not pretty... Was past me like this? (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- I will explain briefly
05-06 - There are seven Rozen Maidens in total - First Doll: Suiginto - Second Doll: Canaria - Third Doll: Suiseiseki - Forth Doll: Souseiseki - Fifth Doll: Shinku - Sixth Doll: Hinaichigo - And the last, Seventh Doll Kirakisho... this one is a trouble Shima.Jun- Yu... can't read (*Ok, I don't know how to "translate" this one... the kanji for Kirakisho is "雪華綺晶," and the first kanji is normally read "Yuki." Since it is not normal to read those kanji "Kirakisho," Shima.Jun is perplexed) (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- The dolls are fighting under the "Alice Game" - and scrambling over each others' Rosa Mistica, their crystal of soul___or something similar
07 - Only one winner could be the ultimate girl "Alice" - The Dolls need human to transmit their powers for their fight - and for each doll there will be one Master - I became Shinku's master by "Winding" - Do you understand? Shima. Jun- Not really... Phone(input)- "sort of" Shima. Jun- well, I've been replying seriously, but - isn't this trick just too foolish? A mail from past myself?
08 - ...oh well - I will go on with you until you demand for money, buddy (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Most of Dolls and Masters has been retired (/cannot move) due to Kirakisho's plan - I will first rescue Shinku - then make a contract of Rose once again Shima. Jun- Ah - There you go, a contranct (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Oh, I gotta tell you one important thing right now (Phone)- I am having a trouble so dy Shima. Jun- ...what? is it a typo? - Wait... where's the rest?
09 - *sigh* stupid - must've been a trick after all - Anyways, I gotta do something about the rest of parts of Shinku - Only if I could get them... - The right foot and the head... - Right foot... - and Head... - .... - Eh?
10 - Huh - Wha - Whaaa___ - Ah... - Wha...eh? - Uh...a dream? - From where? - to where?
11 - Sigh... storekeeper- Wow - You were there? Shima.Jun- Yea... storekeeper- Hey, it's a service job. Can't you do something to your moodiment? Shima.Jun(thought)- It's moodiness, you fool... Saitou- Thank you (/Good job)(*or whatever...some greeting for regarding hard works) - Ah Sakurada-kun! - thank you about yesterday's! Shima. Jun- ah.. yea storekeeper- Hey Saitou-chan you've done great! - Sorry about yesterday, my friend was just too noisy for me to come Saitou- well...
12 sfx- pi pi pi shopkeeper- you again? Set to vibe mode during the work Shima.Jun- ah..yes, sorry shopkeeper- did you hear? His call music was so boring Saitou- oh yes, same as mine shopkeeper- oh...right Shima.Jun- huff x2 - it - came...
13 - what...so late...? (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Sorry, the internet got blocked - the time feeling seem to be different for here and there - Messages might be chopped off sometimes, but just stand it Shima.Jun- You arrogant...well fine (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- A body is needed to call Shinku back - a body that's fit for Shinku's sense(/soul) to return - but right now I can't move for a reason - So I'd entrust to other myself - using artificial spirit, secretly from Kirakisyo - Now, you'll have to do three things - 1. create Shinku - 2. Wake up Shinku - 3. lastly... Shima.Jun- Hey - Wait a minute!!
14 - What, create? ...but aren't Rozen Maidens the legendary doll? - I've never had experiences before, and those parts are only replicas made of polyurethane! (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- A temporaly body is just fine. it's not the matter of materials, it's "who" creates (the body) - Only I can make the body that can call Shinku back, so You will Shima.Jun- But there are parts lacking... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- It's alright - I can do it, so You can do it - There's nothing impossible Shima.Jun- This guy...is he really - middle schooler me...?
15 - Ok, I bought the materials as you have commanded (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- good Shima.Jun- but I did not imagine that "create" meant the clothe first... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- but isn't Shinku's body there naked? - She'll be mad Shima.Jun- Mad? you man...that beautiful Shinku? - Are you joking? (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- ...I will keep no comment about that Shima.Jun- Well, I did like sewing when I was young... - but I won't know if I will be able to do it well still... - ...in addition there isn't much good memories about it (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- me neigher... Shima.Jun- ...right
16 (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- In Alice Game, the humans are only sidekicks - I got involved too, and am locked right now - Kirakisho will kill us if she finds out this Shima. Jun- Wow...Yucky is scary (* I am sorry, can't really translate again. the kanji for Kirakisyo is "雪華綺晶," and the first kanji is normally read as "Yuki." Jun probably made up a nickname from it) (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Who's "Yucky"?
17 Shima.Jun- Neh...I just can't read "雪華綺晶" (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- "Kirakisho" Shima.Jun- How about "金糸雀"? (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Canaria! Are you really my 19-year-old self? Shima.Jun- Shut up! All names are written like codes except for Shinku(/"真紅") - Are you really my 14-year-old self, too? You're so impudent (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Oh yeah - I'm still not going to school - And I know I have a bad(/moody) character Shima.Jun- Be careful with what you say, It's a university student here (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- University? wow! - so you went to middle school and high school, too Shima.Jun(thought)- not the high school, actually (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Are you living by yourself? How about Sister?
18 - I'm living by my self with part-time job... Sister is doing Office Lady at home - She sends me a lot of unneeded stuff (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- I envy you... Sister's so noisy about me Shima.Jun- I know (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- You are not suddenly dying hair or changing to contacts, are you? - Don't do such thing like you're from north Shima.Jun- uh (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- ...gosh - you're outdated... can't believe you are my future self Shima.Jun- I feel like giving him a punch - Finished...!!
19 - How's it... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- I got the picture - Not bad for a blank (*sorry, don't understand what it means by "blank") - Just like me Shima.Jun- ...(he's) not pretty - But this is only a torso still - Quick... other parts... - ...Shinku...
20 - Ah - This dream again - too tired to be surprised...uh? - Shinku's body....? - I must be caring too much about it, it has come even into a dream sfx- pi pi Shima.Jun- hm? - Wha... the cell phone? - Even into the dream?
21 (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- We were found! Shima.Jun- eh? (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Kirakisho has found you! - this is bad, it's going to you right now Shima.Jun- Found...? eh!? - But this is my dream... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- No! - That's probably the Field of N. - The world of dream is connected to unconsciousness Shima.Jun- ??? - So...what am I gonna do?
22 (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Those parts you see are the fakes created by Kirakisho - The real parts must be hidden inside - Finish creating Shinku and wake her up Shima.Jun- what...from this mountain (/whole chunk)!? - impossible...oi! (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- Please take care of Shinku! - I sent you a rescue just now (Phone)- rescure just now, soyssss not opo fi mmmm notmg annot aammgg awjb cann 29 find qi no 9ja cannotfind cannotfind cannotfind cannotfind (*continued...obviously a hack) Shima.Jun- Wha...
23 - ah...oh no - ...find...? - from this? (flashback/Sakura.Jun)- Kirakisho will kill us if she finds out this Shima.Jin- but... - I...will have to try... - No... doesn't fit sfx- clink clink (/kacha kacha) - this one, neither...
24 - ...no... like this - it's just gonna take forever... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- It's alright Shima.Jun- He can say that only beause he's still a child... - The reality is a lot clearer at my age - Like that there are more impossibles than possibles... (text in box/Sakura.Jun)- There's nothing impossible Shima.Jun- brat...!
25 - Even if you try hard...and accomplish something... - Once you're outside it's only a small, useless thing.... - you'll feel the limit - the "Only highest" possible to reach...! (flashback/Sakura.Jun)- Please take care of Shinku Shima.Jun- Shoot... - next...
26 - Here it is... - The right foot... - then the head might be close... - Alright... - Head... - Only the Head (is left)...
27-28 - What... a white ivy? - can't take o... - These... lips... - These... eye-holes... - Shinku sfx- flash Shima.Jun- uh
29 (*no text to be translated)
30 - Shin...Ku.... (flashback/Sakura.Jun)- 1. Create Shinku - 2. Wake up Shinku Shima.Jun- Uh...oh...wake her up, yeah
32 sfx- slap slap Shima.Jun- Eh... (flashback/Sakura.Jun)- Guard (from her). Shima.Jun- Never...heard... sfx- thump aori at top left- Shinku has awakened! [/INDENT]
I couldn't fine the prefix for Rozen Maiden... was it okay to leave it blank?
by the way, I am sorry but I cannot do the translation of Tale 3 or Tale 4. Not only Rozen Maiden, I cannot do any translations during July. I am not super hot about translating this...it will be after August even if I am going to do them.https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/935Translation: Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 62008-06-25T16:50:03+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comThanks to all your patience!
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Embalming ch. 6 DEAD BODY and LOVER #1
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[iNDENT]*pages numbered according to RAW
01 left aori- The Concerto of Lovers begins (*It's so regrettable I can't think of anything fit. In the RAW, the sound of the word is still "concerto" but wrong kanji meaning "crazy" is used.) white text bordered red- Start of New Chapter (/Story)!
02 Elm- Where am I? - Where is Ashuhit?
03 Philip- Huh? - Hey look Elm- Elm in a lost forest - getting outa here, ever? Azalea- Oh - a girl
Philip- Strange, there is no one with her - Is she lost? Elm- Is Approaching the hands of bad? - or the hands of good (/help) ? Azalea- She has a strange behavior, too - Isn't it better not to be involved?
Philip- We can't do that (/That's impossible) Eml- to be continued... Azalea- Ah! Philip- Hey Miss
04 - What are you doing here - in the bush right beside the road? Elm- Wow?
Ashuhit- ...well, I was sure she was here - sleeping in open foolishness - with saliva, half-opened eyes and sleep-talking... (Elm)- Hehehe I can't eat any mooorrre... Ashuhit- So then - She must have gone out without knowing where this place is or where I am - Only to get herself lost...
05 - Too bad... I hope someone isn't troubled - because of her Philip- I see - so you got lost from your partner Elm- yea... Philip- well, cheer up - here, I give you a candy Elm- Whee! - I love sweets!! Philip- Er, were you called Elm-chan? Elm- No "chan," please - I am in fact total of 23 years old Azalea- A 23-year person would not be soothed by only a candy Philip- Well then, - where were you trying to go?
06 Elm- London! - A big job request came from some noble house Philip- London... - That's quite far from here Azalea- Hey wait - are you... Philip- Oh it's going to be only to a near city Azalea- Stop joking! We don't have time to meander around - London and Gretna Green are in completely different directions in the first place___ Elm- Gretna - Green?
07 - Gretna Green!! - Do you mean! - by any chance!! - That place! - If the two loving each other could arrive there, any marriage is granted beyond any class or nobility - The place of utmost love and celebration in Britain! The Gretna Green!! - The Legend! - The Romance! - The Dream of Girls! Philip- Actually it is just a town between the border - So using the difference in laws of England and Scotland anyone could lawfully marry Elm- So! So!! - You two are!!
08 - on the way of love escape! - to grant the love over class!! Philip- Haha, saying that out loud makes me shy Azalea- Shhhhh! Shhhhhh! Philip- Ok, let's introduce
- Philip Wilkinson - The eldest son of a overseas merchant in Liverpool Azalea- Azalea Mireille (*Unsure of spelling) - Formerly a bar-maid of a pub in Liverpool
09 - So that's why we don't have time (to wander) - It's already about the time someone from his family is coming to look for us - Sorry, would you understand? Elm- Ja!!(*"Yes" in German, apparently) Understood!
10 - In that case! - for your sake to arrive safely to Gretna Green! - I will be your body guard!! Philip/Azalea(handwritten)- Whaaat? Ashuhit- really - I hope someone isn't troubled - because of her
11 Azalea- How come? I don't understand! - Why would you turn the topic that way? Philip- Yes, your feeling is very appreciated - but we can't let a little girl do body guard Azalea- That's not the point! Elm- No problem, No problem - despite what I might look like - Elm L. Regegade is - a very strong - Frankenstein
12 Azalea- Furankane!? - What's that? Never heard nor seen anything like that Philip- It's a novel of early 19th century - Azalea, you should read some more books Azalea- Would you ask that to a barmaid? to read books? Elm- Ashuhit said not reading books will make one stupid - Is Azalea Stupid-kid? Azalea- I don't want a Fool-kid to say that! (*erm...sorry, couldn't think of any other way to say these. In modern Japan, a phrase "son/daughter of Stupid/Fool" is used for describing someone who is Stupid/Fool) Philip- A Frankenstein? Elm- Ja Philip- But that Frankenstein in the novel... Philip(Text bottom)- although it has an excellent intelligence and athletic ability - is an ugly creature patched of corpses Philip- it's far different from Elm-chan (*I am sorry, forgot the text at bottom) Elm- that's the story of "The One"(/First one)
13 - Now the research has gone very far - And there are many variations to functions and looks now - Creation after creation! One after another!! - From the ones with perfect human outlook - To the ones with complete monster form - Nowadays frankensteins have many variations that even Polar Route cannot grasp them all!!
Azalea- Polar? - Route? Elm- Azalea really doesn't know anything - Are you really Stu-(*interrupted) Azalea- Not Stupid-kid!! Elm- Polar Route is - the place where I was born
14 - It's the assembly of people researching Frankensteins, and according to Ashuhit it's - "The Successor (Soiree) of Victor Frankenstein's Heart and Will" - To call it simply - Um..."see" - "bee"? - bee-cret society...err? Philip- do you mean secret society? Elm- That's it! Secret Society! - Polar Route is a Secret!!!
15 - Oh NOOOOO!! - it was a SEEECRET!! - Please don't tell anyone - Keep it a secret! - If Ashuhit hears, he's gonna punish me! there will be a punishment! Philip- A punishment? Elm- A timeout of No-Sweets-For-One-Week... - It's terrible, I could die of it... Azalea- Aren't frankensteins dead already? Philip- Well well - Alright - Polar Route is - "Shhhhh" - right
16 Elm- Thank you! - Philip is a nice person! Philip- You're welcomed - Elm-chan is a cheerful girl Elm- Well then! - Let's boost up! - Vorwärts Marsch (*Thanks to DeepEyes)Head Forward! (*Sorry, couldn't recognize the German. Sounds something like "ForVerz Marche") Azalea- so - what are we going to do with the girl? Elm- Let's go! Philip- Well the sun is about to set - let's go find an inn to stay first
17 Father- Ur... - Urr... - Urrrrr!! - Damn - That woman! - How dare for the "Marked" to... - She should be caught and sent to Ingolstadt!
18 - Cadavelick!! Cadavelick(?)- Why are you calling by my name only - I am not your frankenstein - I am a guest - Really... - Maintenance is bothersome
19 - It costs too much - Only if there isn't this - (Being a) Frankenstein is perfect Father- Heh! - Perfect? frankensteins are corpses inside after all - Because you are only a corpse, you need periodic maitenance - to prevent decay, clean body fluid (/blood), and fortify voltage - so you could keep that body! - It's not like London or Headquarters here - Only I can care a stray frankenstein like you who do not know your master or birthplace - I may be thanked, but not at all complained! - And here's a chance for you, "stray"! - Go and catch that "Marked" woman! - If you succeed, the fee for this time would be free! - You heard - The conversation, right?
20 Philip- Anyways - Let's keep Elm-chan for tonight - and bring her to nearest police station or church tomorrow - She doesn't look like a tramp kid - Her guardian Mr. Ashuhit is probably worriedly looking for her as well Azalea- ...yea - her fashion and brain are little strange, but she's neatly dressed - Even her skin is so white like a bread dough... - This girl is probably - A problem-handed - girl of a wealthy family
21 Elm- mmm - hehehe - I can't eat any mooore Azalea- A girl of a - wealthy family...
23 - What are you doing hey! Azalea- What's? - that - Your skin! What's that!? Elm- Skin? - Oh this? - Here, isn't this little amazing? Azalea- Ahhhh Elm- Hey- you don't have to be surprised so much Philip- You two - It's late already, quiet down
24 Azalea- A function? - as a frankenstein? Elm- Yes - It's the speciality since birth Azalea- Um so - it's idiosyncrasy (/special constitution)? Elm- mmm - Not really...? Azalea- Ok, she is indeed problem-handed - with a strange brain and skin like this... Elm- By the way - Hey Azalea - Just now - didn't you - try to open my bag (without my permission)? - It's no-no. There are important things - my treasure is inside this bag
25 - It is a bad thing to touch other people's things wihtout permission - Is Azalea a bad person? SE- smirk Azalea- Yes - You are right - Wealthy greenborns (and greenborness(*feminine...?)) - are all my preys - Azalea Mireille is a - bad person
26 Father- Gwe!! - Wha - What are you... Cadavelick- Who? - Yea I heard it - The talk - between you and a man from Polar Route
- Wasn't he a son of some good family? - Wandering around a borderland like here - It's a great target - Good luck for him - not to be caught by a bad frankenstein!!
27 Father- How dare you as a frankenstein - Not only, but as a stray frankenstein - to go against Polar Route! - Ooooooh
28 - Huh,,, -Haha - Look! - Rocket Pistol against Frankensteins by Polar Route! - No chance for a "stray" to...
29 Cadavelick- If I could get good amount of money - I will go - from this place or from you Father- Skin-type (/Strengthened-skin-type) frankenstein!! Cadavelick- well - I only heard and not seen him - Tell me how that mister looked....
30 - hmm? - the outlook(/feature) is... - Dressed in nice suit - Strong trunk - Tall and thin - handsome face with glasses
- And Also - companied by woman... - any others? - say something hey - oioi - too fragile, human - Frankenstein is perfect after all!
31 - Well fine - I got the brief picture - nice suit and strong trunk!! - tall and thin body, handsome face with glasses!! - And companied by woman...!! aori- An misunderstanding...a complication...a trouble is approaching!! [/INDENT]https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/5882Translation: Rosario to Vampire 72008-05-04T04:58:56+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.com
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Rosario+Vampire II ch. 7 "Growing Drops" [iNDENT] 01 left- a normal school days again___! newspaper- a robbery group of three people has entered Yokai school and attacked some students - the group was defeated after a great battle, and was sent to the rehabilitation facility narration- ...two days after - this huge incident with lots of injuries - was already a part of our normal day in the school
02 student A- hey did you look at Yokai Newspaper? B- yeah it was so interesting A- it's so detailed about the robbery group incident B- Ah this Boss looks kinda cool Mocha- Newspaper Club! - How about a copy of Yokai Newspaper we wrote? - It's the first issue of the semester!
03 (?)- cheers! (?)- it was a success! Kurumu- Yahoo - Yokai Newspaper's reputation was good again - I am so glad Tsukune- Sure it was worth the work, I think this one's in good quiality too - Illustration by Mocha-san and the layout by Yukari-chan is so stylish! Mocha- ah...thank you tsukune Yukari- desu
04 Kurumu- hey tsukune... - why don't you praise the cooking column I wrote? Mizore- also my novel series Rubi(hw)- tsk tsk Cocoa- ...but isn't this weird? - Its my sister who defeated the robbery group - and why isn't there anything about it? - I wanted (so much) to see Sister's name making the whole page of the Newspaper (Three)- here goes the-other-Mocha-only Sister-Complex Girl
05 Kurumu- it's alright - Newspaper Club is not for fighting and being a hero - and by the way, why are you the non-member still here? Cocoa- uh...well... Yukari- oh...maybe... - doesn't Cocoa-san want to join - the Newspaper Club?
06 Kurumu- Ah~~~ quickly say that already, there are no fleshmen joining yet Yukari- You're welcomed desu, finally a junior to me desu Cocoa- Wait a Minute - I am a proud vampire - Why am I joining such Club as Newspaper... Mizore- I will be joining Cocoa- Kyaa Mizore- I wasn't formally a member, so having a having a distinction is good... Tsukune- Mizore-chan...
07 Rubi- May I join the club, too? Tsukune- Rubi-san too? - huh...err Rubi-san isn't a student... Rubi- Chief has allowed me - to be the assistant adviser of NewspaperClub for capturing the robbery group - Order me - I will do whatsoever Tsukune- Are you still going to be ordered despite being an advisor!? Kurumu- B..but it's great...Mizore-chan, Rubi-san - and Cocoa-chan cocoa- Don't add me arbitrarily, you hear!? Nekome- Welcome to Newspaper Club~ Cocoa- What!
08 Tsukune- Ms. Nekome!? What is with that costume Nekome- Isn't this cute? It feels like I am thirty years younger Tsukune- how old are you now!? Nekome(hw)- 17 years old - I'm so happy~ Fleshmen entering is essential to development of a club - without a new generation there is only a decline - And therefore~ - since some copies are left, too - Why don't we scout some more members today Tsukune- From right now!? - when we are still partying!? Nekome- It's better to hurry, everyone (?)- hey wait, how 'bout me!? - Missss
09 student- tennis - Girls' Tennis Club here - Railroad Investigation~ - Meet with the Game Club Tsukune- Wow the school is already in a big roar! Mocha(hw)- reminds of last year Nekome- Beginning today the scouting for new members is free - Let's go ahead, too Cocoa- ...what? - what is this...
10 - Why does a non-member like me have to wear clothes like this, too? - Th, the proud vampire like me in such a shameful costume... Yukari- isn't Mocha-san a vampire, too? Cocoa- Know the shame, know it Yukari- It's alright! it's fitting - Cocoa-san should left the proud thing and enjoy this, too Cocoa- Wha...what, what do you know of me - And how will members be scouted with a sexy method like this...
11 student- Newspaper clus is so cute~ - I will be joining! - wow, I didn't know there was a club with so many cute girls - it's like an idol unit Cocoa- uh student- oh isn't she a member, too? So cute being blushed Cocoa- uhhh - this is awful...I had no intension doing things like this... - I actually... -...ining you... yukari- eh?
12 - I definitely will not be joining you!! Yukari- cocoa-san - wait please desu~ Tsukune- ...oh? - Yukari-chan? - Cocoa-chan?
13 Cocoa- what, a club? - I don't have time doing that kind of things - right, Ko-chan - you know it, don't you - 'cause I... Ko- ...... Cocoa- Newspaper Club, huh... - I...did think it was cool down at the dungeon,but... Yukari- ...isn't there a reason? - reason why you won't join us?
14 cocoa- yu yukari-chan!? Yukari- found you desu cocoa- leave me alone - I don't want to joing newspaper... yukari- no i can't (leave you alone) - a senior should listen to a junior's worries cocoa- wait, who is a senior you say!? yukari- you are a first grader, I am a second cocoa- I heard I am actually older than you are? yukari- but I am the senior - now now, Senior Yukari will be listening to you
15 Cocoa- awww annoying - there is no time for talking to you - I have to to get closer to Sister even a little faster... Yukari- inferiority complex - isn't it? - ...I understand - I, like cocoa-san, - love Mocha-san Cocoa- Y, you do!!? Yukari- Mocha-san is so strong, beautiful and complete - the follower isn't an easy job Cocoa- uh - do you really understand!? - oh yeah, so that's why I have to become stronger!
16 - and still, I couldn't do anything in the last battle against the robbery group... - even Kurumu-san and others fought hard, and with only one blow I was... - ...no good - at this rate - I can't even be the younger sister of Sister... - I... - will be left out from my Sister
17 Yukari- Cocoa-san... Cocoa- Now see what I said - You do not understand me at___ - wowww!? yukari- yes, I am also impatient about wanting to be seen as a woman (*not as child) from Mocha-san Cocoa- y...you too! Yukari- I also sometimes don't like my childishness and cry at midnight Cocoa- oh.. yeah me too Yukari- When touching my breast to calm down, tears flow again for how flat it is... Cocoa- Me too Yukari- Let's team up desu, as we know each other's pain Cocoa- uh...Flat Association, is it...? Yukari- Such masochistic name is unacceptable desu!!
18 Karate student- Haaa student- Wow, ten gravestones!! - splendid, Yokai Karate club is great! - entertaining demonstrations!! - Judo is greatest for fun - No, kicking is (hw)- nono Cocoa- This is? Yukari- it's martial arts clubs booth - to get stronger, isn't this kind of club fitting? Cocoa- eh!?
19 Yukari- Yokai school's martial arts clubs are said to be high-level - Kurumu-san and Mizore-san also comes to these clubs to train themselves Cocoa- They also...! - ...aren't you scouting me to Newspaper club? Yukari- I won't force you, we've also teamed up Cocoa- I thought those martial arts clubs were just romps, but if they are really high level... - Well... - seems like it's worth trying
20 Karate member- No. - our club is quite harsh - pretty girls like you do not suit this club Cocoa- Wha... Yukari- that's female discrimination desu Member- before female, you two are still too little Member- Haaa Student- wow, another ten gravestones! karate club rocks! Member- At least be able to crack one of those gravestones Cocoa- huh...
21 - Don't you look down upon me, I will do! - I would at least be able to... Member- a thousand yen for one trial - In return, you'll get fifty thousand yen if you crack more than this guy does - first grader only, though yukari- let's attack other clubs muay thai- nono, you will be dead wrestling- come again once you've grown taller smoo- (*no line, hw onomatopoeia for spitting sound)
22 cocoa- NO FAIR - everyone just mocks child - isn't this because little kid like you are sticking around? - You say that? you are still in childish shape, too Cocoa- don't mention what others' don't want - isn't it impossible after all, I don't even get accepted to clubs... - to reach my beautiful Sister___... Yukari- alright... - I guess it's the time to use this...
23 - Magical item - growing (/grow-grow) drop - oh, wrong hand (*parody to another Jpn manga/anime) Cocoa- growing drops? Yukari- Yes...! It's a miracle drop I made just in case something like this happens - I won't tell you the effect right now... - well, theoratically it should be a success, but experiment on humans isn't done yet... - do you want? - to be the first experience
24 Karate member- now come on - any more challengers? - the record is ten! - someone who was able to renew the record will get fifty thousand yen presented Saizou? - hmm Karate member- Failed, we'll collect a thousand yen - come to Karate club if you want to crack more - hehe...it's impossible - we're using harder gravestones for challengers member- hehehe, Brother is so smart member- additional money and fleshmen at same time Cocoa- I'm challenging, too - but I'll pay thousand yen afterwards member- eh... - neh, paying afterwards isn't...
25 student- h..hey who is that? - a beautiful girl like she will challenge? - what a sexy body... - how graceful
26 refree- thi..thirteen gravestones - new record
27 students- oooooohh she's done it - breaking record - strongest beauty has appeared - cool - tell me your name karate member- n... no way cocoa- well then - I will take the prize
28 Yukari/cocoa- wheeee - Great Success! Cocoa- did you see!? those guys' face staring at my body! - someone even called me graceful Yukari- I am so glad too cocoa- this "one swallow to grown-up" growing drop is great - taller vision, stronger power, it's just like a dream! - and even more, touch this - isn't it "wow"? Yukari- woooow Cocoa- ah... I feel - kinda strange... Yukari- oh my god, oh my god
29 Karate member- whew, that was really wow - we were impressed - hey? how about joining us? Cocoa- you are the members from Karate... Member- we were looking for genius like you Yukari- you've done it, Cocoa-san, scouting already Member- huh, kidding - I won't let you go taking fifty thousand yen - Once you've entered Katare club you'll be used for the worth you took - like touching the boobs and saying it was an accident member- Brother is smart Cocoa- ...flipping the hand so quick
30 - I reject - you look weak - I want to become stronger for real - I'd have to choose the level of the club I join Karate member- ...you, saying we are weak!? - then think through after fighting
31 - s...strong... to be downed in an instant... member- jyeee Yukari- wow...she is a sister of Mocha-san after all Cocoa- ...the body is so light, feels great... - yes, the power is flourishing - If I fought Sister in this adult body, I wonder how it will be - Would I be able to fight well...
32 - Then will Sister - life me in her eyes a little...
33 Karate member- hey woman, thanks for your treatment to my junior - but ain't you being carried away a little? - Don't you underestimate Karate Club, hey Yukari- third graders from karate club... Cocoa- back down... - ...no, Ko-chan. Sister won't be running away in times like this... - feel free to come - I will join whatever clubs if you could defeat me
35 Cocoa- ... - ....huh? - ah...oh? Don't you feel enemies are kinda bigger? - even Yukari-chan... Ko-chan(hw)- psssst Cocoa- ...eh? I am suddenly smaller...? - Are you fool, that can't... - Wha... - WHAT THE He____ Karateclub(onomatopoeia, hw)- click click box- Meanwhile, Newspaper club Kurumu- Applicants, please line up Mizore(hw)- (but we don't want) too many Mocha- Where did Cocoa and Yukari-chan go? Tsukune- I hope they are not in some fights left aori- nooo....not even a "flat"!! [/INDENT]
Err...first of all, sorry for chapters 5 and 6. (Especially Ju-Da-Su, I am so sorry><) I just did not really have time, either... Since there is already scanlations around, I don't know if I should continue. Can I just leave it, unless there is a specific demand? aw don't hit me please. I did this chapter pretty quick I suppose. Well, although I admit it is really "quick" and some awkwardly put... I don't know if I will have time doing rest of season I, too. If you would lift me down from your list of "possible translator doing trans" for that...I would feel lighter. Sorry again. And...enjoy ch.7.
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Embalming ch. 5[iNDENT] 01 aori- But... Darkness is approaching. It was only a little bit of hope towards the light... (Raith)- That moment, for the first time in my life - I learned to expect something from others - so, this time, too, that time, too - I actually did expect (something for me) - but___ - There is only one to whom I can expect (things) - There is only one who responds to my expectation(/hope) - To London! - To perfect Frankenstein! - Let's go - Fury!!
02 (Fury)- Together with Edel - Three of us will go to London Weiss- Raith, no Mr. Raith (/Raith-kun) - I was wrong (, I was bad) - Let's be friends - hey? - Let's explore frankensteins together - hey? - hey? - You may inherit all of my properties - Yes! I will give you Edel, too! - After frankensteinizing (*heh, made-up word...), she shall be yours! Raith- Edel? - Don't want it - No - I don't want!
03 Fury- Franken-... - stein___
04 - Peaberry, you were right - "Frankensteins are not the way to revive a dead or the way to immortality" - It's very different - It's something dreadful
05 - Please do not tell the truth to Edel - At least Edel... - Also - (I think) I am sorry - The outcome seems to have disturbed your research Peaberry- There's no need for apology - My research is already half-way complete Fury- oh it is? Peaberry- Now, what are you doing? Fury- Eh Peaberry- There is one more frankenstein made by Weiss - Aren't you destroying him?
06 Fury- ___no way - Raith is different... - He's my best briend Peaberry- Ok - alright then - if you don't - then I will do Fury- !! Peaberry- That frankenstein is dangerous Fury- Oi - What are you saying (*interrupted) Peaberry- I already told you - Did not you hear me - frankensteins will not keep all of its previous self even made with 100% out of original person - change in character, corruption of memories...there are not a frankenstein who was born with exactly same identity - Of those, there are even ones with corruption on both, to whom the word "insane" is just the fit___...
07 - Doesn't anything come to your mind? (Fury)- Raith, you are a little strange... Peaberry- Same goes with that man called Shade - That "loyalty" which is originally a virtue to humans - After frankensteinization (*may I make up this word? If no, "after made into a frankenstein"), everything else was taken over (by it) - Corruption (/insanity) does not occur only to one's character - To the "logic" - To the "emotion"___
08 Fury- Raith, you___ (onomatopoeia)- chill Raith- It's the promise, Fury - let's go to London - Not with three - but two of us
09 - FURY!! Fury- RAITH!!
10-11 Edel- Big Ben!! - Piccadilly Circus! - Trafalgar Square! - Fury! Raith! - We are at London now!! - I am so happy that all three of us could come! - I have to thank Shade for persuading Father! - It is still early for checking in - Hey, I want to have an afternoon tea at Savoy - I have been dreaming of the scone there - Oh - What's wrong, Fury
12 - Why are you crying? - Are you scared for your first visit to a city? - How is it? - When we hug just like this - doesn't the fear get calmed down a little?
13 - huh? - Why do I feel like all my strength is going (/fading) away? - Did I calm myself instead...?
14 - I feel - sleepy... - I am so - sleepy now... - I'm sorry - let's walk around London - after I wake up again - okay - Good... - Night...
15 (Peaberry)- All frankensteins have - the electrode for activation - I think, since I saw things through scope, you should have better idea of what happened to him. - This is a frankenstein. I came to this place in research of this. - Found you
16 - My research was already half-way complete - a month ago - This month was for observation to see - how the result of my research turns out___... Raith- Slendid! - This is great, Fury!!
17 - Fury is a frankenstein, too! - A frankenstein just like me!! - Now, let's go!! - The hindtrance is gone!!
18 no line
19 Fury- (I will) Kill!! (*this word is gonna be repeated many times. ) - will kill all frankensteins!! - will kill them all!! Raith- w...what? - what are you saying, Fury - You are frankenstein, too - You became a frankenstein
20 Fury- So what!? - One more frankenstein to kill in the end - That's all - That is all!!
21 - (I will) Kill x3 Raith- aaaah
22 - Aaaargh Fury- (I will) Kill x2 - Kil... - I... - will - kill... Raith- !
23 Peaberry- Overloaded - The damaged electrode cannot keep up with - the Galvani Current coming (/occuring) from your wrath - That's it (for now) - Fury Fury- stop - there - Rai- - th... - Raith!
24 - I will kill!! - (I will) kill x5 Raith- ...hahaha - I know - now I know - the number of knocks... - two times for toilet - three times for good fellows such as friends and lovers - four times for where you need a respect like workplaces - above that, it's the intension of killing - A Definite - Intension to Kill
25 - I will be waiting Fury! - will be waiting at London! Fury- I will kill you Raith! - I definitely will kill you at London!!
26 - Sorry Edel... - I couldn't protect you after all - Please at least - sleep in peace right here.....,
27 Peaberry- You can go sleep, too if you want - I arbitrarily made you - I won't force you to live Fury- No way - If there was a frankenstein beside her - Edel won't be able to sleep because of fear Peaberry- Is that so? - I'd say she would be happy to be beside you Fury- Peaberry - why did you make me - into a frankenstein? Peaberry- How you lived - and how you died - were just the fit to the type of frankenstein I was trying to create
28 - Crazy with idea of "revenge" - and feeling of "wrath" - The Frankenstein meant for destroying frankensteins!! - I am a revenger - far beyond you - Fury Flatliner - You still don't know the ability of frankenstein I have given you - On the way to London - I shall be teaching you how to make a good use of that body
29 - It's a spring thunder - Approx. 1.21 gigawatt over. Fitting for activating a frankenstein Fury- create as you want! - be born as you want!! - I will kill all frankensteins! - I will kill them all!! - Whoever the frankenstein is! - I will not allow any peaceful sleep to them!!
30 Elm- Ummmmmm - nice sleep~! - That just now was a big thunder - Some frankensteins might had just born - Well the sky is now so sunny! - Dark clouds are gone! - Now Ash'hit (*name of a character, unsure of spelling...) ! - Let's hurry up to London!!
31 - Huh? - Ash'hit? - Did he just go by himself... - He actually is the person to do so, but isn't that mean? - I don't even know where this is in England -...... - Oh no, then - I am lost!! (profile box)- Elm L. Renegade, Age 13 - A romantic frankenstein from Germany left aori- The stage rotates. To the story of another frankenstein!! [/INDENT]
Whoa....I mean, whoa. This chapter...god, this is crazy. Well it was a lot of text, too, sort of. But...I am simply overwhelmed. If you look back previous chapters, you can actually see traces of hints showing that Fury was a frankenstein... Now I see, Peaberry probably is "evil or insane" herself, too... she did not even blink at Edel's death, nor at Fury going mad...
god, it's only a day after I've done a chapter from Rosario+Vampire II...! I need a break.https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/5881Translation: Rosario to Vampire II 42008-04-09T10:14:42+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comTranslation done by me, Epsilonium.
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Rosario + Vampire II ch. 4 "Pride" [iNDENT] 01 left- TV Animation Successfully On Air!! right- To who is Cocoa delivering her love to?
02 left- Yes I admire, for all of what's you... (Cocoa)- Vampire - The lone tribe which combines absolute power and noble beauty... - I thought she was the only figure with all pf the ideality - how talented and graceful... - she was the brightest among all others in the clan. - Oh...my lovely sister...
03 - However... Mocha- Tsukune... Tsukune- Mocha-san -W...wait, Mocha-san, this isn't the place... - someone might see us... Mocha- B...but I...feel so hot... - No...can't help this Tsukune- Mocha-sa...
04 Mocha- Itadakimasu (Cocoa)- My lovely sister has become - THAT Tsukune- Ouuuuch That's almost too much for a morning, Mocha-san! Mocha- Ahhh Tsukune's blood is so tasty as usual Cocoa- ...Sister - There is none of her grace or power present anymore - Just fancying that man with tasty blood, Aono Tsukune... - What on earth could possibly change my sister so much... (Kurumu)- Mochaaaa Cocoa- !
05 Kurumu- You're sucking Tsukune's blood again!! - ...tsk - How many times do I have to say, Tsukune isn't your breakfast! Cocoa- Nooo That woman...doing such a thing to my sis---!! - You're dead now, woman...today will be your last day - And on your gravestone will be the word "Killed by Vampire".... - The true power of my sis is so great...! - Feel that yourself! Mpcha- Kurumu-chan...
06 Cocoa- The figure of my sister is getting crumbled... - (*handwritten)such a childish fight Tsukune- Mizore-chan Mizore- Tsukune... - Won't your head get rotten being with those fools? - You should just be with me and___.... Kurumu- Who's "fool"? Cocoa- Oh, come on! - Go ahead, sister
07 -And there goes the thing again -fine, keep doing it til your death!!! Mocha- Huh? Cocoa there, what you... Cocoa- You Donkeeeeey Mocha- Cocoa!? Tsukune- So you haven't made up with Cocoa yet, Mocha-san? - You're sisters after all, shouldn't be having fights... Mocha- Well...I know, but... MIzore- Leave them, Tsukune. - There is no point.
08 Nekome- Eh- cheer up, everyone! - Last year's work was excellent, and we are getting our own classroom for workspace - Youkai School Newspaper Club - Let's work hard together this year again! Cocoa- Hmm, so my sis's in this club. - and these voices... - Those ones on the morning must be in same club as well - Yes, that's the reason...My sister became like that because she was with those slugs in a club like this - I must separate them! even with force - Hello~
09 Tsukune- Ahh it is so comfortable to have the classroom of our own Mocha- So calming~ Cocoa- Don't you work at leeeeeast Kurumu- Oh Cocoa-chan, you again? - Whatever your purpose is, if you stick around too much, I'm gonna punish you. Cocoa- Punish? Heee who is punishing who?? Kurumu- I am gonna be punishing you Cocoa- You sure has got a big mouth, weakling Kurumu- What?
10 Cocoa-Ko-chan, transform into weapon! - Hammer mode! (Kurumu?)- mm Cocoa- Vampire is the lone tribe - My sister, too, does not need such weak friends - I will make you disappear - from the sight of my sis with this! Yukari- Trouble! A serious Trouble has occurred desu~! Kurumu- Hi Yukari-chan
11 Yukari- It's street slasher desu - The criminal is still on run and undetermined
12 - As shown, pupils are being attacked all around the schoool - Right now we know that 12 got badly injured and 3 lost - Looks like knives are being used for attacks desu Mocha- Such a nasty case in the beginning of semester... Kurumu- It is so noisy outside - How come there are students being lost? - Does the criminal hate them or something? - Or being killed or so... Mizore- It is a good topic to write about...Tsukune, let's go interview together Kurumu- Hey Mizore, don't sneak away Mocha- Cocoa?
13 Cocoa- This... aren't we looking for the criminal? Mocha- It's not the job of Newspaper Club... but why? Cocoa- ...what is this marking on the map? Yukari- Ah - This is the sign of a dungeon Cocoa- dungeon? Yukari- Long ago, ones who killed people in the school or in human world were jailed in that dungeon - we are not using anymore and it is already a ruin - however, people say the roars of the evil-doers are still there and it is after all unapprochable...
14 Mocha- ...! -This is... Kurumu- What? Are you saying the criminal is hiding there? - Don't make fun, guesswork is not trusted here... Cocoa- Hmm? Scared? - Oh yeah Oh yeah - Some weaklings like you will be counter-attacked even if they find the criminal Kurumu- Wha... Cocoa- Well, just wait there - My sister and I will just solve this problem Tsukune- .....
15 Cocoa- Hahahah I feel so better - Now I got you separated from those foolish people - Be careful, sister - You'll be spoiled if you kept being with them Mocha- Stop it, Cocoa - Why are you doing such things to my friends...
16 Cocoa- Wow - This is the entrance, huh? - Fitting atmosphere, isn't it? Mocha- ..... Cocoa- Friends are impossible, sister - Our world is different from theirs Mocha- ...! Cocoa- For example, like how we found this place - The street slashers did not just choose random places to attack - They always had escape root secured - When we tie those roots together, this dungeon is spotted - Well, it should be easy if we could think as if we were the evils - Sister, your face said you got it too
17 - Wasn't it so easy? - Same as me, you were also - born to the house of evils Mocha- ....! Cocoa Cocoa- But you can't be staying like this...you are strong only when your other self is awake - I want my current sister to be stronger - So let's go? To where darkness is thicker...
18 Chief- ...what? - That thief group....? Rubi- What happened? Chief Chief- This is an emergency... - Get all the students into the buildings Rubi- ! Chief- An popular thief group is now in this school - Those evils had been messing around in human world - Now they had made a false step, and has espaced into here
19 Rubi- ...Then the street slasher is... Chief- It will be a big trouble is that group was it - An ordinary student will not be any match with them - I wonder if you can... do you want to try? - Rubi Rubi- ...If it is your order Cocoa- ...! - Ko-chan's sensor is responding! - Turn off the light, sister...! I suppose it is the criminal - coming from behind Mocha- .....!
20 Cocoa- Wheew...Good (face) expression - This kind of face is the fit to my sister after all - Let me push a little more! - Ko-chan, weapon transformation Mocha- Kya - Wait Cocoa, this... Cocoa- is for fighting. Sister will attack with that first, I will support! Mocha- eeeeh Cocoa- Now...hurry, the footstep is right there - If you don't, they will do~~ Mocha- An attack? With this?
22 - I'm so sorry I'm very sorry -(*handwritten) I will never do this agaaainnn Tsukune- Haha...I, I'm okay - I'm sorry too - I was worried, and followed you - Good to see both of you alright -(*handwritten) ouch Mocha- Tsukune... Cocoa- Why....? - why did you come - It was so close... (onomatopoeia)- grip
23 - It was only a little more to get back to darkness - But the moment you came - My sister is the weak girl again - It's your falt - You are spoiling my sister Mocha- ....! - Cocoa, don't you stop that... Cocoa- ...I loved you - Dreaming if I could become so powerful, so beautiful - Sister was my goal - Sister was my pride
24 - I would definitely not - Admit such weak sister!!! Tsukune- Err it can't be helped Mocha- well... - ....Listen Cocoa - I do not... Tsukune- !____... (onomatopoeia)- chill
25 - Watch out! Cocoa- Hey what are you doing - You...
26 - M...my god - An enemy...!
27 Tsukune- Ou... Mocha- Tsukuneee Cocoa- tch... - How... Even though I was quite open, I did not notice this giant approaching...! - even more... - I...I was saved - Me, the vampire... - was saved by that weak boy...! - it's the end... - I am a trash - shame of the clan Mocha- Cocoa! - Behind you, watch... Cocoa- Eh...
28 Mocha- Cocoaaa Criminal- Ohhhh Good woman here - I will be dealing with you Mocha- !?
29 Cocoa- N...no way...One more enemy...!? - I did not sense it at all - their speed and strength are both unusual - Who are they.... Criminal- Tsk The girl is good - This boy also looks good as a souvenir to boss - I don't like kid, so you can take her beast- foogh
30 Cocoa- ...Why? why are things turning out like this...? - I just wanted my sister to be stronger - I only... - Sis...ter... - Sister.... (Kurumu)- ... - do you see now? - Never mind vampire or whatever, kids shouldn't be fooling around Cocoa- ____...! - Y...you are....
31 - D...don't, can't you notice? - That is no ordinary street slasher - There is no way you can... beast- foogh? Cocoa- Stop, you weakling! - come back, you are gonna be killed!!
32 - NOOooooo
33-34 beast- Foooaaaaaggh Kurumu- Who's the weakling? - We are training ourselves quite a lot - to overcome your sister someday Mizore- Namely, the Secret Training Against the Other Mocha... - pretty fun, just like shonen manga
35 Kurumu- If you think vampires are the only strong ones - You will be regretting it, you see? Mizore- Hey...Tsukune and Mocha are not here....aren't they kidnapped? Kurumu- Eh? can't be...when!? Mizore- You took too much time by showing off, Kurumu
36 Criminal- tch... the above is noisy Boss- It's because you rampage too much... - Well, it can't be helped then - unwelcomed guests must be all killed Mizore- It is your fault Kurumu- No yours Cocoa- For a moment they were lifted in my eyes - but they aren't so great after all aori- Anyways, hurry!! [/INDENT]https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/933Translation: Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 12008-04-06T06:17:53+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comAs always:
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Embalming ch. 1 [iNDENT] 01 - ___Year 189X - Great Britain - Highland Area (Peaberry)- Energy of the thunder: estimated 1.21 jigowatt(/gigawatt) over - Temperature: under 0℃ - All the conditions met - Now, again - At somewhere___
02-03 (center)- Frankenstein will be born! - Watsuki Nobuhiro (right, above title)- Another "history"(/"story") begins!!
04 (*talks about the background info and the occupation "gamekeeper." let me do the translation when I have more time.)
05 Raith- hey Fury - Looking back these 5 years, didn't we - share a lot of things? - residence(/house), job, and - fate Fury- Yeah, Raith, but this time it's different - I will hunt that - prey(*Japanese said "prey" upon the Kanji "killer") down!! - This revenge - Is mine!!
06 Raith- Now look at your face - You won't know which one is the killer Fury- Shut up, I was born with this face Raith- Alright, as usual - Fury is the main, I am the support - In return, would you hunt that thing alive? - I want to - debunk him - Just send him half death so he won't be able to move - then we can use anything such as poison, torture... it will be easy Fury- Your words are as scary (as you say my face is)
07 - Five years ago... - Five years ago... - I was small and weak back then - But now it's different - I've grown big - big___...
08 - Damn! You've grown a lot too... Raith- Wait, this is impossible...or, should be
09 Fury- Here we go, Raith Raith- Let's go, Fury Fury- We'll defeat him, and - move forward!!
10-11 - It all started - five years ago - In deep night with thunder and snowstorm - Just like tonight___...
12 - That carriage, unfortunately being stalled - was a good prey to the killer
13 - Couple of ten minutes later - Adults were all hung and taken - Those who survived - were me, - Raith, and___ (Edel)- huff x5
14 - huff x3 Fury- Let's get out! - No rescue is going to come! - If we just wait, this girl will die!! Raith- Do your best - I'll wish you luck Fury- Fool! You are coming, too! - If you die, your revenge___
15 Raith- Revenge...well - I guess that's the - normal feeling - You can go - Me, no thanks
16 Fury- You... - Don't want to go? Raith- let's see - Till now - I didn't feel like living anyways - Better hurry - That girl is quite young - You have to - protect her well - If you would just include me as the additional subject to avenge - I'll be fine
17 Fury&Edel- huff x5 Shade- Are you alright? - What happened? - Two of you, is that it? Fury- One...One more Shade- Where? Where is___
18 - He's there!! Raith- ___... Fury- Fine! Don't come if you don't want to!! - But do not go anywhere, stay here
19 -! (*Fury notices the plate with his surname on it) Raith- That trunk... - Isn't it your - Stop! - Don't! Fury- If this fire burns out halfway, you'll freeze - We will not know this place Raith- but...your family's trunk... - the token___... (/ what you had left)
20 -!! Fury- Listen! I will definitely not take a revenge for you!! Not for you!! - So - Survive and get over here(/this)! - If you want to die, do so afterwards! - If you survive Raith- If I... - survive...? Fury- How would I know! - Live as however as you want!!
21 - The incident of the night - did not become a case - the dead bodies were lost - just bloodstain and burnt carriage remained - Only proof was children's sayings - "An almost bare giant with patched scars"___still, too abstract - After all - With a little "mystery gossip" article on local magazine - Everything had come to smoke___...
22 Fury- This revenge - is mine Raith- So you still want to - take a revenge Fury- Yea! - That won't make dad or mom - or anyone killed alive again - but - I have to do - or I can't move forward - I won't allow any peaceful death to him - I will kill that with my own hands!!
23 Raith- You look scary Fury- Wha_ Raith- Fury, for you, - isn't revenge not a deed - but a feeling? - I don't really understand that feeling - but (Fury)- Live as however as you want___... Raith- I will help you - I want to debunk that killer - Before I know that, I can't move forward Fury- Here we go, Raith Raith- Let's go, Fury Fury- We'll defeat him, and - move forward!!
25 Raith- Ha...aren't we wounded all over the body Fury- Yeah - Us, and him, too - One more hit! - One more will set__... Titan- Ga
26 Titan- Ga x5 Raith- Fury - This guy... - I don't think he's human... Fury- (mind that) Later! - He's coming! Raith- Really, what on earth is him - five years ago, my trash father, my trash life - all thrown away in an instant moment - the truth of that power... - I want to know Fury- Raith!? Raith- Huh!?
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28 Fury&Raith- !
29 Raith- haha... - sorry Fury - I failed Fury- ...Rai__ -__th... - just...wait - I'll save you Raith- run - away - Fu- - ry - Don't share (even) the death with me! - Run away and live on! Fury!!
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35 (Peaberry)- Found you
36 Fury- !? - huff x10 -..... Peaberry- Oh - Finally awaken - you sleepyhead - You didn't move at all for a month; I was about to give up
37 Fury- Who are you(interrupted) Peaberry- Your Name!!? - your name - hands perhaps a tie, but my question was faster - now answer Fury-...... - ...Fury
38 - Fury = Flatliner Peaberry- age? Fury- 18 Peaberry- family? Fury- no one; all died five years ago Peaberry- occupation? Fury- doing gamekeeper at Lord Weiss's house, the saver Peaberry- Ok, your sense is just fine - body condition is good, too - but - not here - It took me quite a hand since it was damaged so badly Fury- Are you - a doctor?
39 Peaberry- of course - don't you see it in my constume? Fury- I'll be thinking between - a doctor or a prostitute Peaberry- You are the first one to have a complain on my relaxation style - you asked who I am - I am Dr. Peaberry - Well - anything else you want to ask? Fury- ...how's Raith? Peaberry- As for the man fighting together with you - I think, since I saw things through scope, - you know what happened to him better.
40 Fury- ...fool - Didn't I say I won't be taking revenge for you... - That... - Fool... (Raith)- I want to know the truth of him Fury- That killer... - what was he? - Just what the hell was he!?
41 Peaberry- he? - ah - did you mean this one? - well, the identity is known - I came to this place in research of this - this is - a Frankenstein
42-43 - FRANKEN STEIN (*I suppose it is a spelling mistake...but well, that's how it is on the raw.) - Back c. 150 years ago - A young (prodigious) genius Victore Frankenstein had imitated (/modeled on) God and created "Nonhuman Human" from parts of corpses - Although the exact method of creation was lost long ago - based on the two prohibited books (*禁書, literally translated) containing fragmentary memos Victore had left - people are still trying on "Demon Deed," under the history and in the darkness of graves - Each frankensteins differ in looks and actions, just like humans - Only with one common point, that all frankensteins have - the electrode for activation - This also serves as the distinguisher from human___
44 Peaberry- You make scary face (/you look scary) Fury- I was born with this face Peaberry- Well, look at your face expression
45 - where are you going? Fury- returning home - I'm telling them about Raith - Then I will go find the creator of that Frankenstein - to kill him! - this revenge is not over (yet) !! Peaberry- I will be staying here (*meaning she won't be moving) - come once a day for treatment of your neck - okay? - "Fury" - Just like his name represents___...
46 (inside box)- House of Weiss Edel- Fury!! - Where have you been for the past month? - We were all worried about you
47 Fury- ...sorry - Edel Edel- Fury...? Fury- Where is Master? I have to tell him something Shade- Master went to downtown to visit the institution of helping poor (*perhaps better capitalized, but I cannot think of better name.). Fury- Shade-san (/Mr. Shade) Shade- you have wounded your neck - Are you alright? Fury- Yeah...but... - Raith... Edel- Yes, Raith! - Raith had been worrying about you the most!!
48-49 Raith- Fury - You are alright - Thank god - We were so worried - about you
50 - Welcome back! - Fury!!
51 (Peaberry)- All frankensteins have the electrode for activation - This also serves as the distinguisher from human___ Fury- ....Raith - you.... Raith- Oh, Fury learned about it, too? - I also learned the truth of that thing - Frankenstein - The existence that surpasses humans____...
left aori- The curtain...has risen!! (*lit trans, perhaps "the show/story has began" is better) [/INDENT]
Now now, where is #5 from may issue? It should be out...soon perhaps...I really want to read it...I mean I will translate it, too...but...:darnhttps://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/932Translation: Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 42008-03-14T16:55:59+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comTranslation done by Epislonium, me. Fine to be used in a scanlation or re-translation, preferably with credit. I would still recommend going over the script at least.
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[iNDENT]Embalming #4
1 Fury- GU -OOO -OOW -!!!
2 Shade- There is no chance at all - I taught all of your knives - Movement, tendency(/habit), I know it all - Just realize it Weiss- Hey hey, you two - Stop that violent fight - Be friends, - Yes
3. - Under me - let's be frankensteins "together" - and live "in peace".
4. Fury(right)- Lord Weiss! (left)- Edel!! - Move aside! (/Let me go!) -Shade!! Shade- You're young...with full of power - However
5. -VUOOO -OOOW!!
6. Fury- Gagh... Shade- For a fresh human to go against a frankenstein - no - even if not - For you to go against me - winning victory is definitely - impossible!!
7. Weiss- Shade is inferior to Titan in power - but top-star(/all-top) in everything else - Combined with such remarkable courage and obedience - He would not flinch a bit even to shot-guns and knives - The goodness(/quiality) of the Original - Will be reflected in the Product Shade- No, it is all indeed - product of Master's skills
8-9. Weiss- Ok the preparation is set - When this charger stocks - 1.21 jigowatts from a thunder - The operation will begin - Now Edel - Shall you have black eyes(/iris) - Shall you reborn as true Edel - And then - I will have my dearest - No one will betray me! - Will not disobey me!! - Will not get away from me!!! - Will not change til I die!!!! - Just Me and - Frankensteins - The Family!!!!! - The House!!!!! - It's soon... - really soon... Fury- "...The ones to willingly - get their hands on Frankensteins..." - "Are either Wicked or Insane"
10. - Lord Weiss, you are insane - For Madman's "doll playing," We lost our future - Many lost their lives - I will take away your wish! - This revenge is mine!! Weiss- ...Fury, I am afraid we will not be getting along well - How did you defeat that Titan with (your) fresh body? - Only that is still a concern(/interest) to me
11. - With the case of Raith, there is no need to test another frankenstein - I am done with him - Shade, chop him up into flesh(/pieces) and scatter (those) on snow Fury- huff -huff -huff Weiss- Shade... Shade- ____... - So regrettable, - Fury
12. Fury- I AM feeling - regrettable!!!
13. Weiss- Oh! - 1.21 jigowwatt is here! - A bit! - Only a bit more___ Fury- How did I defeat that Frankenstein? (*Fury is referring to the Titan)
14. - OAHHHHHH
15. - OHH ? -!? Fury- OHH - OHH - This is how! - Keep looking!!Don't take your eyes off!! Weiss- Aww Fury- OHH -OHH
16. -!!
17. Weiss- My charger - My lab - My....eyeballs (*not Weiss's eyeballs itself. The eyeballs for Edel with black iris is what he means) Fury- Edel...
18. -!? - Alfred - Jacob - Miranda? sfx- Pi! Fury- !!!
19. Weiss- You sure have done it - Fury... - But it is not over - If I have this book (*literal translation is "Forbidden text") and Edel...! Frankenstein- Ga Weiss- KILL HIM!! Frankenstein- Ga Fury- tch
20. -!! Frankenstein- Gaugh Peaberry- I was intendingI came to see if the production of a frankenstein is taking place, and look - Gosh, what are you doing?
21. - Give me the girl - I'll check (what is with) her Fury- Peaberry! Weiss- !?!
22. Raith- That skeptical man Lord Weiss - I guessed he would have something - Just in case some frankensteins were not controllable - Well, this is great - must be a special model Fury- Raith! Raith- Sorry, I was late - Fury was friends with everyone in the house, I remember (* Raith is basically caring Fury having to fight the servants who were friends with him) - Leave the rest to me
23. Frankensteins-Gya -Gya -Gya -Gya Weiss- Ah - AAh - Ahhhh Fury- Alfred - Jacob - Miranda... Weiss- Aww
24. -What!? Weiss- Oh shade - You can still move! - Worthy of my top-star(/all-top)! - Now kill Fury! - Get back Edel! - Protect me!
25. Raith- Oh god - It's only breaking down Peaberry- The chest - get itdestroy it - Plugbolt is the common weakpoint of all frankensteins. Once broken down, it will not be repaired - It will return to the corpse - and will never move again Weiss- What's wrong, Shade! - Don't you forget the thing(/affair) 10 years ago!!
26. - Who helped your diseased child without asking any money? - It's me! - Who used an expensive medicine to loosen the pain? - It's me of course!! - Who made a grave for the child and held a funeral for it? - It's ME after all!!! - Who sweared to repay the favor with all his life and body? - It's You! Fury- I see... - You had a child - I didn't know - You picked us up... cared us well - and raised us into a man
27. - I thank you - Shade
28-29. - Thanks to you___... - Robert=Weiss! Weiss- ! Fury- You are the culprit - Even though you are the culprit - You did save us once - So for this once - this once I am letting you go - Never again get us - or - frankensteins involved! Weiss- Ah! Raith- I will be holding on to this
30. Fury- The revenge is - Done... Raith- Are you moving forward? Fury- Yeah... Raith- Alright then let's - head to London (*interrupted) Peaberry- hey Fury
31. Fury- Peaberry - How is Edel? Peaberry- She is just sleeping with strong anesthesia(/pills). - there is no worry - so - what are you going to do with this girl? Fury- Of course - After all of this - I can't leave her here - Us three together with Edel - Will go to London. [/INDENT]
The "us three" in last line of Fury is quite interesting. It will include Fury and Edel for sure, looking at the flow...but who is the third? Isn't Raith thinking Peaberry would be, thus looking upset? Man, is this series just telling me to continue looking into and translate?:darn I want to see what's next...what action is Raith going to take...?https://mangahelpers.com/t/epsilonium/releases/931Translation: Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 32008-02-04T06:47:35+00:00Epsiloniumadmin@mangahelpers.comTranslated by Epsilonium. Fine to be used for scanlations, with credit sited. Strongly recommend to proofread, since I am not a native English writer. [iNDENT] 01 left - The man who once have lost all family...has made a fierce decision!! fury - I'll kill Frankensteins! - I'll kill them all! edel - kyaa! - that is___...
02 raith - Same as before, no - Actually you look scarier than before - Perhaps you'll be able to kill any frankensteins - But please detract the part "all frankensteins," would you? - In fact, I am one too; you know it - right? fury - Alright then, let's clean up other businesses at once and - head to london!!
03 edel - London...? fury - edel - yeah - that's it raith - we are going - to london (for rememberance on raith's line, better take from prev. chapter) edel - is that...true? - fury
04 fury - Yeah...we are going to london, but before that - the thing edel is fearing - I will get rid of it edel - kyaa
05 fury - so that you don't have to be scared alone - by thunder, by blizzard, by darkness, any of them edel - alright - London... - quite far away - but - I see it, you're a male born in this country at this time - why not want to go, yeah - you gotta go! fury - will be back at least once a year edel - what are you saying - don't talk about being back when you haven't even gone yet - you're free to go! to London!
06 - well I want to go a little, too - but father will be alone then - it's alright - good night raith - she didn't cry fury - yeah, she held it - for us raith - but she will be - in short - for sure - tsk fury - ...raith...?
07 - what do you mean...? left - the destiny has began, rolling faster and faster
08 fury - wh... - what...? raith - did you listen? - or did not want to listen? - I'll say one more time - the identity of the creator is - Sir Weiss - himself
09 - if you know about frankensteins, you'll reach him eventually edel - morning already... raith - there are a lot of things needed to create a frankenstein - the banned volume for knowledge, the corpse for raw material edel - but so dark still, guess it's because we're in highland winter... raith - the money for research, the equipment for development - time to do the work and lastly the madness to keep going maid - you don't look great edel - um, a little raith - creating one or two doesn't matter so much, but to meet these conditions properly maid - good morning, miss raith - one will at least need the power equal to bourgeois edel - mornin'~ raith - sir weiss is a viscount who was a professor in medical science - and bought this place to live in edel - London... raith - fits all perfectly butler - the breakfast is ready
10 fury - no way raith - looks like he was exploring mixing-build at first - and the outcome was that killer - it was a failure to him - so it was used for power development and collecting materials fury - that can't be true - sir weiss is a charitable person! - he built several facilities to help the poor - and saved us too!! raith - it is just convenient collecting raws to have the facility for all those without a place to go - you and I are basically the same - just've been treated special until now - for bringing "Princess Bingo"
11 fury - edel... edel - I've got an idea... - to meet fury and raith in london without leaving father alone - going into company - this is it!
12 raith - sir weiss was the creator - you don't seem to be believing - let's go see the proof - The detached club house___! - deep inside is the forged lab of sir weiss! - where I was born!!
13 shade - there - what are you doing - it is banned - for a servant to enter that club house fury - please listen, Shade!
14 raith - you hindrance fury - raith!!
15 raith - you are a hindrance for fury and me - to going London fury - ...raith - you're - strange a little... - shade! - are you alright! - i am helping out___
16 shade - what's your intension, raith - distraction or betrayal?
17 - in either cases, if you are going against Master - I will be fighting you raith - it's neither of them - I trust only one person, from before I become a frankenstein - sir weiss isn't even an interest to me shade - thinking you can defeat me? raith - how about a bullet from this close?
18 shade - Hmph raith - ch
19 - gwe (ぐえッ)
20 fury - shade... - when... - why... - shade___... (rememberance) shade - you've survived the snowstorm - you've got quite a strength - I talked to Master already - If you have nowhere to go, how about working under me?
21 fury - how about him? - it's not only me, he too - survived this snowstorm shade - talking big - you've got quite a gut as well - I see, so that kid does not have anywhere to go, either - he does not seem to have so much stamina, let's see raising centering on shooting - you, I will put you through courses or sprouts, beware of it - Come with me - I will make you the strongest in this area
22 fury - shay-doo shade - hmph!
23 fury - ga(が) - huw(はっ) shade - running away... - well I wasn't hoping anything - but look at how worthless he was...even after being made into a frankenstein
24 fury - huff x9 - e... - del...
25 - black iris... - edel's eyes are - green - No!! It looks so similar, but - this picture is not Edel!! shade - you asked "when"... - I got this body a year ago - right after relinquishing the post of gamekeeper to you guys - however - I decided to do so when that "True Edel" in the picture - has vanished away
26 - she is Master's true daughter, the blood relative - the wonderful, lovely lady - but the mother was a bad one - so different, spendthrift and hedonist - the relation between the couple did not go very well, divorcing after a trial in the end - then that woman, with spite, vanished away with miss edel - Master tried to find Edel with all his might, but could not - and in return, on the process he had found___... - Master decided to create another Edel - at first it was extremely difficult - even afterwards, he was about to give up so many times, but
27 - since you've brought "fake edel," - everything is starting to turn out good fury - shade - where is sir weiss!? - where!? edel - father!
28 weiss - hi - I'm home, edel Profile: Robert Weiss, viscount, formerly professor, once divorced edel - glad you're back weiss - any news while I was away? edel - A good news, father!! - fury came back alright! weiss - alright? -really? edel - he is a little injured on his throat, but he says it's okay weiss - Ah, that's good... edel - Oh, and father, - I want to have a talk with you
29 weiss - to company? edel - yes - or is it too early? weiss - no... - well - it's been five years - i see you're thinking about that kind of things now - yeah...it is about time edel - then...! weiss - if you grow too big it will be too late edel - let's not worry about failing marriage before even going into weiss - haha
30 - yeah, so before it is too late - today I have a nice present for you doctor - ...estimated electricity rate, 1.21 jigowatt - temperature, under zero celcius
31 - Fitting weather for a frankenstein to be born____ aori - it's going to start... the process to a frankenstein!! [/INDENT] As for onomatopoeias, I am sorry but I cannot do. Feel free to post suggestions, but it might not be corrected on here since I am going away for vacation.